Help me Choose!
I need to choose one of the three below poems for school. Which one do you think is "best" in your opinion? (Ignore the numbers beside the titles-it's the word count of the poem. )It's for presentations:
A Dream Within a Dream-144
Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow —
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.
I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
Grains of the golden sand —
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep — while I weep!
O God! Can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
O God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?
Ira-224
Ira, or anger;
Anger, or wrath.
I am a Wraith,
A monster,
A creature of the future,
A shadow of the past,
I exist to remind-
To reprimand-
To aid.
To guide you along paths,
To help you choose.
I will help you evolve
Feelings,
Emotions.
Into me.
You give me power-
So I’ll be honest,
I will give you parts
Of me.
I will give you Ira,
You give me strength.
You cry and tear at life.
I will aid you-
In your conquest.
You want me,
though you are taught-
To refuse me.
To accept me,
I possess you.
You ask me-
And I answer.
You are I.
I am you.
You talk of pain,
Depression,
Hatred pity,
Dangerous love.
You speak of horror,
“How could they?”
The world has turned
Against me-
Therefore you, too.
You ask me to take away
The pain
And the angst.
You are filled with frustration.
You cry for me,
Beg for me.
I grab you, and
Take you home,
Befor eyou can be taken
By sadness-
My sister Tristitia;
Where dire circumstances go.
You are on earth,
And she will bring
Demons of Hell.
You call to me,
And push me away as taught.
I embrace you:
All you feelings
All your emotions
And I will give you Ira.
Rage, to take it all away.
Zelus-246
Zelus, and jealous
Same meaning,
Same ideals
“I want that”~
Is how they describe me.
Something wanted,
Yet not owned.
They call me a feeling
An emotion
A “thing”
But what am I?
A monster
A creature
I am alive.
An organism
Something that lurks
Only within darkness
I reach and chase
Trapped by own ambition
Confined by self-boundaries
I break free,
Then keep imitation
Clone-initiation
I am a shadow
The shadow
Your shadow
A hidden gem
To seem non-sentient
Fake,
Dead,
I seem to follow you
You think I wish to?
Every movement you make
I repel
But I make it too
Because I must
I’m your shadow
Everything you force me
To do
Everything you force me
To act
A pulse in my heart
The start of a volcano
About to erupt
I could stop it,
Or I could let it run
And explode
Because it hurts.
It hurts to follow you,
It hurts to imitate you,
It hurts to be your
Shadow.
It stings when they
Talk to you
Acknowledge you
Follow you
Like I don’t even exist.
And then the lava starts
To leak out
To boil
To hurt
It hurts.
Then it starts to change
I start evolving
My brothers and sisters:
Ira to anger,
Tristitia to sadness,
Dolor to pain,
Inlacrimati to resent,
Invidia to envy,
Begin taking over me.
What I feel is what you get;
What you get is who you are;
Who you are is who I am:
Jealous.
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