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Roleplay Type: WoE

Name: Pyro Blaze

Sex: Male

Age: Colt

Species: Unicorn

Eye colour: Red

Coat: White

Mane/Tail: [colour=#282828]Pyro has a medium length red mane styled to look like fire flowing down his head and neck. His mane curls somewhat, but otherwise is straight. It is rather well kept, but still retains a stragglyness to it. While the mane is mostly red, it also has some orange streaks in it. His tail is also somewhat long and straight, but also has slight curls coming off of it. Like his mane, Pyro's tail is red with orange streaks in it.[/colour]

Physique: [colour=#282828]Pyro is somewhat taller than the other ponies his age. He is also skinny and has a lean musculature.[/colour]

Residence: Canterlot

Occupation: [colour=#282828]Pyro is still studying magic, speciffically fire magic, but he works with various shows and concerts that come to town by running lights and pyrotechnics. He plans to become a guard and use his ability to protect others, but he also wants to keep using his abilities for the various shows that come to town. [/colour]

Cutie Mark: [colour=#282828]Pyro has a red and orange fireball as a cutie mark. [/colour][colour=#282828]Pyro earned his cutie mark when he accidentally started a fire with his magic while he was still young. The class was practicing their levitation that day by levitating their desks. The fire started because Pyro became distracted by the visual similarities he saw between his magic signature and the flame on a candle that was lit nearby, this caused Pyro to be overcome with a surge of magic, creating fire. The other ponies and himself put out the fire before it caused any serious damage, but it still made Pyro realize how much he liked the element of fire. It also represents his determination in his tasks.[/colour]

History: [colour=#282828]Pyro was born in Canterlot to a couple of talented magic users, who always supported and helped him learn magic in and out of school, since his mother was a teacher at the magic school he attended. Even though he showed little enthusiasm about his studies, he still did very well in school. As a young pony, he did not have many friends, he only had two real friends in kindergarten, but made more as he went through school. One time in school, the class was trying to levitate their desks and Pyro did it before anypony else was able to. Unfortunately his magic signature looked very similar to fire, which caused Pyro to inadvertently create fire from a sudden magical surge. This caused his desk to catch on fire and startle everypony else that had managed to lift their desks into dropping them loudly onto the floor. They were able to extinguish the fire before any serious damage occurred and Pyro's desk was fixed by the end of the day. This revealed his love of fire to himself, having never actually created fire before, and also taught him the importance of focus when casting spells. Pyro looks back on that as a funny occurrence, even though it caused him to be more focused.[/colour]

[colour=#282828]Pyro's father works as a cook, while his mother is a teacher in a magic school. [/colour][colour=#282828]His parents are very proud of him and how he has grown over the years. He had always been at the top of the class, partly due to the fact that his mother would give him private lessons. He loved to listen to music, but he knew he wouldn't be able to be a musician due to the fact that he had no musical talent, and because he had no interest in making music in the first place anyways. [/colour]

Character Summary: Pyro's talent is pyromancy, or fire magic. The only time he uses it outside of school is when he does pyrotechnics for various clubs around the city. Pyro's dream is to become a guard and protect innocent ponies. Pyro is vey open-minded and will try almost anything. The only thing Pyro will immediately dislike is a mean pony. Pyro loves to hang out with his friends and listening to music. Pyro is not really worried about the future, and he isn't afraid of most anything.

[colour=#282828]Pyro is naturally warm towards other ponys, but can be angered pretty easily. Pyro tries not to show or act on his anger towards certain ponies, sometimes nopony except for his friends realize he is even mad. Pyro is typically calm, but gets very fired up when he is around mean ponys, especially ones who are mean to his friends. Pyro has no qualms about standing up for the things he believes in or for the ponys he cares about, but he still respects the opinions of others. He is almost always happy and laid back, but gets very serious when he starts to work. [/colour]

[colour=#282828]Pyro talks at a speedy pace, just like most of his life, but he doesn't talk too fast for most ponys. He can be distracted from his work, but he tries to remain focused on the task in front of him. Pyro is almost always warmer than those around him, which makes summers very hard for him to bear sometimes, but it also helps him in the winters to keep him warmer. Pyro is almost always wearing his sunglasses, only taking them off when it gets to dark to see with them on. Pyro enjoys life in his speedy yet relaxed way.[/colour]

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The only times he uses it outside of school are the occasional battle and when he does pyrotechnics for various clubs around the city.

Please remove the words that have been struck out; World of Equestria (WoE) is a slice-of-life RP, and OCs engaging in routine violent behavior is something we do not permit for WoE. Aside from that, the rest of this app is sound, and we can stamp Pryo Blaze once you've made the requested edit. :)

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Hey there Pyro! I'm StarSwirl, a SRPHS.

I was going to stamp this because overall it is a solid app. However one thing bothers me... It is your description of magic. We try to follow what we see in the series. So that means, aside from having no idea what a "magic signature" is (so that term should probably be changed or removed), spells just don't change mid-casting. When Twilight's (the only one who clearly trains in multiple spells at a time) concentration is broken, the spell is likewise broken. There are a few ways to adjust the history and CM story to make it work. Perhaps when he saw the flame he became distracted and cast a second spell. Or perhaps he suddenly had a natural magical surge like Rarity which was his special talent spell, which was fire magic.

If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask here!

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When I said "magic signature," I was referring to the thing that shows up around objects that unicorns lift with their magic. Wasn't sure what to call that. Still not, actually.

Otherwise, no questions. I changed the CM and history sections.

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[colour=#282828]Pyro became distracted by the [/colour][colour=#ff0000]visual[/colour][colour=#282828] similarities he saw between his magic signature
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Add in the word in bold for absolute clarification in the app itself, and you're good to go. ;)

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