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  1. Alright then I'll knock the bathroom bit out. And Ill use something along those lines. Ill probably star back at it in a couple of mins. Have a good day Bramble. Also this reminds me I have to go do Lionheart's Bio for the Rp. Nggggggghh Work.
  2. Thanks for the encouraging words. The random capitalization thing is my fault. I'll stop in the middle of something, and my mind will tell me to capitalize it. I try to go back fix it, but sometimes I miss them. The bathroom thing was just a excuse to look in a mirror. Stormy isn't a vain pony that's always looking in reflections to make sure his looks are all in line. I'll try and find some other way to do it if it bothers people. The whole section that is coming next in the story is supposed to be dialogue heavy. I was planning on Showing Lionheart's Personality there, and opening open Stormy's more. Looking at what you said, and then looking back at what I typed, showed me alot I could do to expand it more. Especially with what you said about the clouds. I really like the idea of the director "Kicking" it off. It also makes me cringe off how.... "choppy" it looks to me. I may give the begging a total overhaul. Thank you Bramble. This is really my first steps into the worlds of fandom, And this stuff will help bunches.
  3. First off, sorry for being dead the last few days. Life, DA2, And MVC3 got in the way. A couple o' days ago i said i was take a swing at writing some pony stuff. Well i did starting last night. What i'm bout to post is WIP, But its getting there. Please be honest in your critiques. I can handle it if you think I completey suck, but aleast say why. And i make and glaring mistakes, please take the perviable bat and beat me with it. -StoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLine- Pushing the last cloud into place, Stormy Specter gave satisfied nod at the the little Storm he helped create. Seeing the other ponies on his team push the last clouds into, the storm clouds started whirling to life. Drenching the land below, which happened to be Ponyville, with some much needed water. Giving the storm on last look over, he noticed no problems. His gaze drifted towards his director. The director Gave a nod to everypony present, meaning that the Storm was fine and they could take there leave. Giving the clouds one last fleeting look, Specter flew towards his home in Cloudsdale, where his bed was waiting. By Luna, he was sleepy, and these storms would help hi, m sleep. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Stepping the threshold of his door, Specter felt something under his hoof. Looking down he saw some letter scattered across the, a little wet from slobber. Hehe Thanks Derpy, he thought to him self as he leaned down and picked up the letter in his mouth, on the other side of course. Tossing the letters on a table, Specter looked around his small house. It was lightly furnished, nothing really fancy. He spent most his bits on CDs and food. He trotted over to his bathroom, next to his bedroom, to relive himself. After the deed was done, he started out of the bathroom. He stopped when his eyes caught his mirror on the wall, giving himself a once-over. His pelt was dark sapphire, and sorta it reflected his personality, or so said his friend LionHeart. His mane was a striking electric green, spiked backwards as if it was jumping off his head. Maybe i should get out more, like little Lionheart said, he though with a sigh as he walked into his room. Flopping down on his bed, he laid his head on pillow, intending to get some much needed sleep. That was , until a loud knock was heard coming from his living room. The next sounds were the opening and slamming of his door. Specter sighed, already knowing who it was. A couple of seconds later, A orange blur threw itself on top of Specter. Looking he towards said orange blur, he saw it was his young friend , Lionheart. The young colt was still in Flyers School. His colt was a bright orange, where as his mane and tail were a reddish orange, just laying wherever. -StoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLine- Thats what i got ATM. Again please be honest in your critiques. Next update will be alot longer. And im still mulling over if im gonna do request or not. TTFN
  4. MWAM

    Rubba Duckies

    Rubber Duckie you're the one You make bath time lots of fun Rubber Duckie I'm awfully fond of you Rubber Duckie joy of joys When I squeeze you, you make noise Rubber Duckie you're my very best friend it's true I find a little fellow who's cute and yellow and chubby Rub a dub dubby Rubber Duckie you're so fine and I'm lucky that you're mine Rubber Duckie I'd like a whole pond of you Rubber Duckie I'm awfully fond of you Why do i remeber this song so well????? I take showersss
  5. I have all the cast. Expect Pinkie Pie. Feels bad man
  6. It's ok and Thank you Ashi!
  7. No. I hate pineapples. I meant like bringing someone's pony in if they wanted. I dunno about request stories.
  8. Name: Stormy Specter Gender: Male Age: Colt, but nearing adulthood Species: Pegasus Pelt Color: Sapphire Mane/Tail Color & Style: Midnight green, Spiked back wards Eye Color: Electric Green Cutie Mark: Thunder cloud with two lighting bolts Physique: Sleek and slender. Residence: Cloudsdale Occupation: Weather pony- Storm division Motivation: Hopes to one day have a family, regardless if he's married or not. (He'd be willing to adopt) But he doesn't feel ready to even try. Likes: Sleeping during storms (when off duty), Sweet/Sour apples (cross pollinated), Quiet places, His job, Stormy weather,Rainy days Dislikes: Loud things/ponies, Ponies messing with his stuff, oranges, standing still (on the ground) Character Summary: Specter grew up a orphan pony. Learning very quickly, he started to take care of himself, since the nursemaid was always busy with the other foals. He's no Bruce Wayne, but he learned to take care of himself. In flight school he was very much a loner, not talking to any pony very much. He hasnt changed much. He's just not the best at masking friends. Stormy days make him very, very mellow. He loves the lights and sounds. Specter Loves his job. If he didn't have it, he probably wouldn't get up in the morning. He tries to be friendly, but he plays a little close to his chest, making it hard to make friends. But once he does accept you, He'll be nothing but nice to you.
  9. Fluttershy Fanboy here. She makes always go "Dawwwwwwww!"
  10. Also at one point i may open it for, like, i dunno, requests. Whatever.
  11. A youtube pooper started uploading them. The i had Cavities. And those Cavities turned into coma. And I'm enjoying it.
  12. The only idea ATm i have is sorta a back story for my character. Once there's some more ponies, Ill add more Ponies too it.
  13. I've been kicking ideas around, and I'm thinking of starting a story. I'll post something later, if I do.
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