First off, sorry for being dead the last few days. Life, DA2, And MVC3 got in the way. A couple o' days ago i said i was take a swing at writing some pony stuff. Well i did starting last night. What i'm bout to post is WIP, But its getting there. Please be honest in your critiques. I can handle it if you think I completey suck, but aleast say why. And i make and glaring mistakes, please take the perviable bat and beat me with it. -StoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLine- Pushing the last cloud into place, Stormy Specter gave satisfied nod at the the little Storm he helped create. Seeing the other ponies on his team push the last clouds into, the storm clouds started whirling to life. Drenching the land below, which happened to be Ponyville, with some much needed water. Giving the storm on last look over, he noticed no problems. His gaze drifted towards his director. The director Gave a nod to everypony present, meaning that the Storm was fine and they could take there leave. Giving the clouds one last fleeting look, Specter flew towards his home in Cloudsdale, where his bed was waiting. By Luna, he was sleepy, and these storms would help hi, m sleep. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Stepping the threshold of his door, Specter felt something under his hoof. Looking down he saw some letter scattered across the, a little wet from slobber. Hehe Thanks Derpy, he thought to him self as he leaned down and picked up the letter in his mouth, on the other side of course. Tossing the letters on a table, Specter looked around his small house. It was lightly furnished, nothing really fancy. He spent most his bits on CDs and food. He trotted over to his bathroom, next to his bedroom, to relive himself. After the deed was done, he started out of the bathroom. He stopped when his eyes caught his mirror on the wall, giving himself a once-over. His pelt was dark sapphire, and sorta it reflected his personality, or so said his friend LionHeart. His mane was a striking electric green, spiked backwards as if it was jumping off his head. Maybe i should get out more, like little Lionheart said, he though with a sigh as he walked into his room. Flopping down on his bed, he laid his head on pillow, intending to get some much needed sleep. That was , until a loud knock was heard coming from his living room. The next sounds were the opening and slamming of his door. Specter sighed, already knowing who it was. A couple of seconds later, A orange blur threw itself on top of Specter. Looking he towards said orange blur, he saw it was his young friend , Lionheart. The young colt was still in Flyers School. His colt was a bright orange, where as his mane and tail were a reddish orange, just laying wherever. -StoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLineStoryLine- Thats what i got ATM. Again please be honest in your critiques. Next update will be alot longer. And im still mulling over if im gonna do request or not. TTFN