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SunsetSombra

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  1. Hi there - you've forgotten to tell us which RP this character classes as, so let me fill you in:

    the mane Roleplaying forum, and the one that is most canonically focused - this is where all of the regular ponies will fit, according to App regulations.

    Typically, applications will be looked at and assessed on criteria, passing once all checks are good an' cleared to go.

    A little more lax, allowing you to stick to more outlandish ideas of pony/creatures in Equestria, and allowing full reign of your own roleplay styles.

    This simply only needs a finished application, as a stamp will usually be rendered without a full assessment, as per WoE standards.

    So there's the two types of RP styles you can generally apply for - just go ahead and choose the one that's right for this application and await for the relevent actions to take place. Essentially, once the RP type is written in somewhere at top, you should be seen to shortly by a resident RP helpstaff for assessment!

    Your application does look pretty very well written, though, so I can most certainly see the effort you've put into it at this stage of the process!.

    May your application have an expedient and swift stamping to wherever you choose it to go! :)

  2. I've read through this app and I really, really like it - it's well written, very balanced in it's handling, consistant and all around it's a very solid application.

    After some consideration and a few re-reads to be sure, I feel confident this application is perfect for WOE, and thus have no reservations in stamping!

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    Now go and [colour=#40e0d0]Chill[/colour] out with some ponies...[colour=#40e0d0]ice[/colour] to meet you, hope [colour=#40e0d0]icy[/colour] you again with another great app.

    'Til then, [colour=#40e0d0]Stay Frosty[/colour]!

    :D

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  3. Spike was watching the interactions between twilight and crescent, chuckling a little to himself about how the pair would make such l'il pokes at each other - the dragon was still not quite at the age to really get why they did it, however, so his laughter was more out of the direct result of their affectionate teasing of one another...and it seemed that Crescent never really got much of a victory, which confused the dragon even more. It struck him as strange that Crescent would be so willing to simply take each loss and smile with it, rather than say something in return to perhaps even the score...and such was his uncertainty about these things that he just had to open his snout an' ask the question on his mind.

    " [colour=#008080]Hey Crescent...[/colour] " Spike asks with a small munch on a dull speckled red gem - strawberry...or at least, something that resembled it. " [colour=#008080]Why is it that you an' Twilight are so often poking fun at each other[/colour]?[colour=#008080] I mean, I've known you ponies for as long as I've known Twilight - an' I guess I just don't really get it yet - what's up with that[/colour]? "

    It was true, too - for as long as the dragon could really remember, these two had been affectionately playing at one another - now wouldn't be such a bad time for him to ask, right?

    Spike of course had entirely left out the topic about Twilights pairing lore with her daughter - he'd heard it, but the whole thing was a topic he was far too young to truly grasp beyond the idea that the suggestion was a little 'weird' for his tastes...which simply prompted a small shrug of dismissal promptly followed by his swallowing down the gems other half.

    [colour=#9966CC]" I really would like to meet this other seamstress I keep hearing about, if we can. And my daughter. Somewhere. Maybe she's hiding in a bush? "[/colour]

    Of course, as per her daughters own habit, Twilight was if anything direct about what she was after...Spike gave a small doofy smile at the thought of seeing Rarity, but shook it off when it came to saying anything at all - considering that he didn't think Lore knew where she lived, it was clearly his time to shine!

    " [colour=#008080]Well, she lives in Carousel Boutique, which isn't too far from here...just a l'il ways away if I remember right - up towards Mulberry Grove, take a right at Cotton Avenue, and it should be a l'il bit up there...can't miss it[/colour]! " Spike explains with a small nod as he looks around at the other ponies - if there was one thing he was good at, it was remembering the address of the one Pony whom his attentions were always willing to wind their way towards, come rain or shine. " [colour=#008080]She's probably working or looking after Sweetie Belle though, so...she may be busy[/colour]! "

    The dragon tapped his snout at the thought of where Twilight would be and scratched his head with a small sigh - he'd been asleep when she left, which didn't help matters much at all.

    " [colour=#008080]As for twilight - I dunno where she is...she may have gone to get some quills, or even to see Celestia or something. She can be pretty busy these days, y'know[/colour]? "

    Welp, seemed like that was about as much as Spike was gonna be able to help with at this particular moment in time!

    He blinks as he nommed contentedly on another gem...sucking on it as his mind wanders to thoughts of a particular white pony...pondering future plans and ideas in particular!

  4. Vinyl was an explorer of the night life whenever she wasn't playing her own shows - the streets of manehattan, whenever she'd visited, were paved with good times - and as a pony who lived very much on the forefront of things, she had all the time in the world for places an' clubs that she's not had the opportunity to play in on her few and far between rare nights, or that would otherwise not have been a part of what was commonly felt by others externally as 'her thing'.

    She wasn't a one track pony, to use an oft-abused pun, and Vinyl had a lot of affinity for various varities of music outside her own - and it was when her ears picked up some rather interesting sounds from the l'il place nearby to her that her curiosity piqued and she ventured inside for a casual glance, her normally donned shades not with her this night and her Cutie mark having been somewhat obscured by her saddle to avoid anyone recognising her at a distance. The only thing that seemed to bring any hazard to that plan was her mane colour, but she figured she had seen enough ponies have similar styles (either naturally or dyed) to be able to pass as a coincidence.

    Most ponies wouldn't have taken Vinyl to be fond of music that she hadn't played in a set, but she was a musical pony brought up in a family of musicians who had taught her to appreciate all forms whenever and wherever she had the chance, and considering that this place looked like a nice place to swing by an' rest her hooves after having dealing with various tour and club deals for Manehattan over the last few hours. So long as nopony knew it was her, she'd probably get by just fine - well, that was the plan anyhow...

    Venturing inside, She made her way towards the bar and waited patiently for service...scratching the tip of her muzzle as she pondered her order...cinnamon whiskey and apple cider combo seemed to be the most palatable thing to the mare right about this point in time, and thus this was what she made the bartender aware of whilst she settled down to enjoy the show - seemed like it was gonna be good, from the sound of the current musical number on stage, but it was clearly way too early for the DJ mare to tell.

  5. Gone through the application - seems fairly in order, and has a pretty cute overall flavour to it that would fit into the RP as a whole!

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    Welcome aboard - you're now approved for RP goodness.

    Oh, see you around...I RP Big Mac, so it'll be interesting to see how she fares with ALL the other Apples!

    " [colour=#b22222]Eeeeeeeyup[/colour]! "

    :AJ:

  6. Stamping for crossover justice - You may pass on into

    Crossovers at your leisure with this character! :3

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    Quick note: to avoid confusion with this app, feel free to edit it to only say Crossovers in the RP type field!

    Just helps keep everything straight and easily handled on our end - much appreciated! :)

  7. Meanwhile, some ways away - a certain draconequus was currently making the most of his newfound freedom...he was currently lounging on a cloud in not far from ponyville - mostly because he'd INSISTED that he have some kind of freedom, and Celestia (in her infinite wisdom) had figured that if the chaotic creature could be in close proximity to fluttershy and the other elements of Harmony, then he'd have no choice but to keep on his bestest (or so he said, at least) behaviour.

    Of course, temptations for chaos always arose as he'd occasionally made some 'changes' to things that had just looked too tempting...there was now at least one humming venus flytrap lurking in the bushes near everfree where there once wasn't, a couple of sheep who couldn't help but sing the blues backwards, and then was his personal favourite - Twilight Sparkles library now had an added shelf, and all of it was lined with books that simply read ' Boring! ' on every page, of which there were 50 pages per book!

    Sure, it was mostly low level pranking, but he wasn't exactly in any position to be doing anything more than that for a while...not whilst he had ye olde spoilsport checking up on him.

    However, something struck discord as being off around here though. Indeed, there was an odd feeling that something had reappeared, and it was all so strangely familiar to him.

    Just as he was pondering exactly what this particularly unidentified feeling could possibly mean, a blob of whipped cream smacked him right between the eyes - followed by quite a bit more of it. " [colour=#daa520]Well...this certainly is interesting[/colour]! " the aeons old being of chaos and random events murmers to himself as he looks around at the rain of whipped cream that seemed to have just sprung out of nowehere, completely certain that this wasn't something of his OWN doing - and yet it had all the hallmarks of a classic 'Draconequus' event...

    But that was impossible, wasn't it? He was the only one currently in active Equestria residence right now, he was entirely sure of that.

    Well, he'd have to just go and find out what REALLY was going on here - and considering that ponyville was the closest location he could think of that held any interest...well, it seemed entirely worthwhile for him to start there. Whatever this 'presence' that was causing this was...it clearly needed to be taught a few things about chaos control, and he supposed he was the most qualified of anything else here to do just that!

  8. It was about this time that Spike woke up with a jolt as he realised he was tucked in on the chair with a blanket - which had left him a little disoriented and uncertain of just what time it was, and where everypony had gone to...well, at least initially. Slowly fragments of the last conversation he'd had with Twilight filtered back into memory and, vaguely, Spike could recall something about Twilight saying something he barely heard before his mind had dedicated itself into sleepmode as he'd drifted off on the chair...

    Sitting up, the dragon took a moment to think this over, face scrunching up a little in concentration as he tries to think back to what it was Twilight had said - now what was it again?.

    "You let her fly to Fluttershy's on her own?! Spike I really don't think she knows how to get there... which means she's lost!"

    " [colour=#008080]Oh., yeah - right...[/colour]! " Spike utters to himself as claw meets snout with a small sigh - he knew deep down that the whole idea had perhaps been a LITTLE bit of a silly one when he'd thought of it, but the intentions were honestly well meant...and he had figured that the phoenix would know where to fly to after having been around Spike for so long. It all had seemed reasonable to the dragon at the time of action, and if anything it was the first place he figured would be a good idea to head to right now, because surely the Phoenix woulda made it there and SURELY everypony else was there right now, waiting on him to arrive so they could tell him he'd been right and that they were sorry to have doubted him...right?

    He slips off the chair and stomps towards the door with a growing sense of certainty - that had to be why he was alone right now, they'd left him to sleep it off whilst they all went to go check things out and totally confirm everything that he'd said...all the dragon needed to do was arrive and receive ALL of the praise he deserved for his obviously smart and not-at-all-rushed idea. "[colour=#008080] I'm sure everythings JUST fine[/colour]! " He mutters to himself, reaching up to open the door handle and making his way out of sugarcube corner.

    "[colour=#008080] No, it'll be BETTER than fine, and everypony will totally see that I can TOTALLY be a responsible dragon...I can't wait to see the looks on their faces when they realise I'm right[/colour]! "

    Spike charges off in the direction of fluttershy's cottege as fast as his legs can carry him - admittedly, he wasn't that fast...but hey, today he had more important things to care about.

  9. Truth be told, Spike wasn't exactly familiar with the pony known as Lore, so he found himself a little uncertaIN of just how exactly to best go about responding to him - it seemed like a prudent start to address his question about the tastes of jewels....something that he'd found awkward to 'translate' into dragon flavours when he'd tried to explain it to Twilight one time, but it seemed like a while back now and the youngster dragon had a much firmer idea of how to best describe what he had come to appreciate over the last few years.

    " [colour=#008080]Well...[/colour] " He began, pausing for thought before continuing. " [colour=#008080]colours play a big role...like, red jewels tend to remind me a lot like cinnamon most of the time - fire ruby is usually strongest, and a little harder to come by too[/colour]! " Spike explains, using as many familiar ideas as he could to describe his answer. " [colour=#008080]Greens can vary from shade to shade - sometimes mint, sometimes fruity....and sometimes, eugh...[/colour] " he makes a small face at the memory. " [colour=#008080]Sometimes they can be Spinach or somethin' - I'm not fond of those[/colour]! "

    he would have gotten into the specifics of that, if only for the fact he found himself momentarily taken inside the gem merchants - one very smooth and pricy exchange of goods and services later, the dragon was then once again on the outside world, only with a bag of gems clutched between his claws, swearing to all and sundry that nothing would get between him and this offering. Of course, Spike had noticed the rather expensive cost to crescent - rubbing the back of his head and offering a sincere smile of apology as he then openly chomps on a yellow triangle gem....and immediately making a face that indicated that he wasn't entirely prepared for this ones peppery lemon hint...

    Perhaps this was karma's way of paying him back for his little expense towards Twi's folks.

    Ah well - it would be worthwhile for everypony once they all got to Rarity's at least...or at least so he hoped!

  10. A little while later...upon arriving amidst the pair and serving them their treats, and a round of same for herself, she couldn't help giggle to herself at the antics of her daughter that she had managed to overhear during her preparing of the snacks. If ever a pony was a true epitome of adorable, Ruby sure as heck demonstrated that she was a strong contender for the crown of cute...a thought that struck the winemaker in no small way as she sipped at her glass of fresh mixed juice thoughtfully and glances at the pair - holding up a hoof and speaking her thought out loud.

    " [colour=#ee82ee]Well...I have a name idea for her too[/colour]! " Berry says with a small grin as she wiped her muzzle. "[colour=#ee82ee] you could be a Pinchicorn, hun - the Alicorn of all things adorable[/colour]! "

    Berry loved getting in on her daughters fun whenever she could...and if she could find ways to perhaps put an embarrassing spin on things, she would!

    Afterall, what else were parents good at in their kids eyes, eh?

    Apple Pie's little announcement of her having made these pies herself gave Berry a small pause for thought, as she took a bite of the helping she'd given herself - the morsel having just the right levels of zest and sweetness that an apple pie should have as a filling...the pastry rich and delicious, crumbling as she nibbled at it with an appreciative smile.

    " [colour=#ee82ee]So young and so talented - the Apples are truly miracle workers throughout all ages, aren't they[/colour]? " Berry says as she looks toward the young filly with a grin.

    "[colour=#ee82ee] You're clearly going to be another fine blossom on their family tree - especially with such a delicious applepie recipe in your reportoire[/colour]! "

    Berry didn't exactly want to say it out loud, but she most certainly had designs on acquiring that recipe...or some variation of it...it was just TOO delicious not to at least try!

  11. Well, things were going better than she'd hoped between Lime and Moondancer - the Ponyvillian pony of bright glowstick shades seemed to be learning and adjusting to the informations moondancer was dispensing...and whilst she clearly had a little sass in her, Vinyl concluded that the scene had worked with a pretty decent success rate. She smiles inwardly, relaxing a little more as an eclair-dwelling plate made her presence...if there was one thing that topped free food, for one such as Vinyl, it was free sweets!

    Vinyls attention flicked over to movement briefly - seemed like the mare of grey had rejoined them...l'il Miss Octavia - She hadn't spoken much at all to the earth pony, so there wasn't enough of an impression for Vinyl to reflect on, but she seemed like a relatively nice enough pony. Maybe a l'il overly...canterlotian, for lack of a better word, but then Vinyl had to remind herself that she too had come from a canterlot upbringing - not really as 'Top Notch' as some other ponies, but she knew enough to at least respect whatever life Octavia might lead.

    " For a slick McToocool shades inside pants you aint that bad"

    Limes comment made the white DJ smirk, as she raised a hoof to nudge at her shades...pondering a remark to fire back - didn't take her long!

    " [colour=#800080]Well, if you weren't coloured like a glowstick, maybe I'd have reasons to take 'em off... [/colour]" the mare replies, grinning toyingly. " [colour=#800080]Heh - but seriously, it's nice to meetya[/colour]!~ "

    And with that, the rest of the night was seemingly going to be smooth sailing - but that yet could still be derailed by the devious culinary events as yet unseen!

  12. Who could be cooler than Rainbow Dash?

    HER OWN FATHER!

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  13. Just a little more detail about her personality and such, yes - are they a likeable pony, do they have quirks, or things that annoy/make them happy...stuff like that.

    basically any l'il additions that you think might help a user looking over this application to understand on how the pony themselves act/think, and how that might affect Roleplay scenes!

    Just a little more padding out and fine tuning, and I think the application could well have some legs to roll with! :D

  14. Going to agree with Imagination here, seeing as the summary is a little bare - take her as a pony, condense some of the interesting facts and let us know more about how she is in the world around her, maybe just giving us a snapshot of the things she enjoys when she's not being a professional, what her overall opinions about what she does are, her social life (to reasonable degrees) and pretty much anything that might help to give a casual glimpse of how this character interacts with the world around her and such.

    As for her history section - again, as Imagination has put it, this is pretty much where you make a condensed rundown of who she is as a pony, and how her life has been up until this point - we're not asking, of course, for insanely long historical accuracy, but this will help for ponies to better understand her motivations and character developments in RP.

    I'm pretty sure you've got this though, so I look forward to seeing just how this application turns out at the end - looks pretty good so far though! ;)

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