ZStrike

So this is my first attempt at a fanfic. It features best pony (Applejack, of course!) and a predicament she finds herself in. You may notice that this story is tagged on FimFic as tragic and dark. Don't let the Dark tag scare you, though. There is violence, but it's pretty low-key and non-intense. Anyway, I welcome all criticisms and feedback regarding any grammatical errors. Enjoy! http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48141/The-Apple%27s-Desire