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  1. Bravado // Pegasus Pony // Male // Adult // //Threads Golden Age: 2.5 - Art Deco Golden Age Comics, Issue 2: Wednesday's Child Golden Age: Issue 1.5 - Team-building Exercises Golden Age Comics! Issue 1: You Never Say Good Luck on Opening Night! The Golden Age of Comic Books: A Mutants and Masterminds campaign. Interest and OOC here! [ ALICORN PONY ] Morning Glory // Alicorn Pony // Female // Adult // //Threads Golden Age: 2.5 - Art Deco Golden Age Comics, Issue 2: Wednesday's Child Golden Age: Issue 1.5 - Team-building Exercises Golden Age Comics! Issue 1: You Never Say Good Luck on Opening Night! The Golden Age of Comic Books: A Mutants and Masterminds campaign. Interest and OOC here!
  2. Baron von Hoofington // Pegasus Pony // Male // Adult // profile //Threads [Rhinestone] The Treasured Trinket:The Bar
  3. [ PEGASUS PONY ] Rainbow Dash // Pegasus Pony // Female // Adult // profile //Threads Rainbow Dash vs. the Unfinished Novel Head in the Clouds Adventures in Trend Setting Junior Hoofball Tryouts Daring Delvers - Adventure! Excitement! GLORY! Pride in the Sky The Princess Apprentice Frenzied Factory Zone: Vaporization Department Frenzied Factory Zone: Transportation Department [Ponyville] Flying Lessons for Royalty [Ponyville] Class Is In Session Kidnapping of a Royal Nature (Outside Ponyville) Daringcon General [Sweet Apple Acres, Open-PM, Invite, Friends, Family] Apple Bloom's Big Day! The Soul of a Town Any Bar in a Storm A Rescue In Progress, Perhaps? Hearts, Hooves, and Misunderstandings A gift! A Hearts and Hooves gift! Working the Kinks Out (Ponyville) Orienteering, and the demand for coffee The Very Merry Berry Juice and Drinks bar... [Everfree Forest] Brought to Ruin [Ponyville] Delivering the Mail Alternate Realities: The Rainboom Centurian Age of Heroes: The Academy opens
  4. Sweetie Belle // Unicorn Pony // Female // Foal // profile //Threads A Sweet Sound Cutie Mark Emergency: The Tyrant of Froggybottom Swamp The Doctor is In: Sweetie's Help Desk Cutie Mark Crusader Treasure Hunters, Go! [Ponyville] Class is in Session [Fillydelphia] A Country Field Trip High Society Stylin' with Country Profilin' [Sweet Apple Acres] Adventures in Foalsitting [Ponyville]The Foal Cooking Contest of Culinary Deliciousness and Doom[See OOC] Apple Bloom's Big Day! [Ponyville - Carousel Boutique] A Dressmaker's Calling Tiara Troubles [Ponyville - Tea Cozy's House] Sleepover in Sequins [Gala] GateCrashing [Ended] [Ponyville] Later This Week [Ponyville] Back To School [Ended] [sweet Apple Acres] One in Every Bunch [Ended] [Ponyville] Kids will be kids [Carousel Boutique] Some dirty lyrics [Ponyville] Muddy in the Mornin', Muddy in the evenin' [Ended] [Ponyville] Cutie Mark Crusader Planning Picnic, GO! [Ended]
  5. [ UNICORN PONY ] Bramble Rose // Unicorn Pony // Male // Young Adult // profile //Threads The Secret of Tirek's Waste The Dark Everfree and Bright Hearts No Stallion's Land Spellbound Hearth's Warming Gala The Princess of Friendship Marelia: Away in the Mountains The More Zap Apples Stay the Same Collecting Spores, Molds, and Fungi Winter Setup Royal Hunger Pains Velvet Ropes and Silver Tongues The Green Hoof Floral shop [Ponyville] Tea with a side of friendship [Running Of the Leaves 2011] 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 [Ended] [Gala] A Second Chance [Ended] [Gala] Hiding in the wrong places... [Ended] [Everfree] Growing by Themselves [Ended] [Ponyville] An Odd Visitor [Ended] [shop/Home] Puttin' on the Glitz [ Left thread ] [Everfree] Poison Joke - chat log and trip to Everfree [Ended] [Ponyville] Rock Garden [Ended] [Everfree] Lily's Garden [sugarcube Corner] Something Sweet! [ Left thread ] [shop] Cafe Delights [Ended] Free For All - Ponies and Dragons Omake: Hearth's Warming Episode 1: A Tail of Two Cities OOC: Ponies and Dragons
  6. Purple Haze // Earth Pony // Female // Foal // profile //Threads Exploring the Castle A Cloud Shrouded Vacation Junior Hoofball Tryouts Weekend with the Apples The Princess Apprentice The Party Ends Where the Party is Forever High Society Stylin' With Country Profilin' Mixed Fruits and Veggies Famous Visitors Apple Bloom's Big Day! [Ponyville] Back To School [Ended] [Ponyville] After School Plans [closed] [Ponyville] Later that Week [Ponyville] Stars in their Eyes [Nimbusgait lakes] The Nut Bunch; Quest for the Crown Jewels [Ponyville] Famous Visitors [Running of the Leaves 2011] 1 8
  7. Superhero Name: The Rainboom Centurian Powers: Aside from her INCREDIBLE speed as the fastest pony in the sky, The Rainboom Centurian has six different amazing powers, depending on which color of the Rainbow Force she's using. When she uses that particular light, her mane also becomes that color. * Red Light: Heat aura/heat beams/protection from fire * Orange Light: The orange light lets her separate her mind from her body and walk around as an intangiable being of orange light. She's virtually untouchable in this form ... but she also can't physically affect anything, only able to control light in this state, and leaving her body vulnerable. * Yellow Light: Absorbs kinetic energy, stores it, and redirects it. Grants speed and strength. * Green Light: Mild transformations to objects - such as changing a sharp sword to a toy sword, or her civilian clothes to a superhero outfit. * Blue Light: chill aura / ice beams / protection from cold * Purple Light: Manipulate objects from afar, just like a unicorn! Alias: When not busy saving the day, The Rainboom Centurian is known as the mild-mannered Rainbow Dash, who works as the frantic fact-checker and personal assistant for the famous writer, A.K. Yearling, who regularly gets secret and exclusive interviews from the amazing hero, Daring Do.. The sporadic work gives Dash plenty of leeway to sneak off and save the day - though she must admit she's rather surprised that A.K. Yearling hasn't noticed her disappearances, even though A.K. usually shows up after every emergency panting heavily and looking mussed, as if she'd been looking for Dash everywhere. Backstory: It all started when she was young - a brash young flyer as she was, Dash nonetheless was friends with a placid, meek filly named Fluttershy. One day, some bullies were picking on her friend, so Dash challenged them to a race. Sadly, the colts didn't play fair, and one of them hipchecked her to the side, sending her crashing through several clouds and into the factory where the rainbows were being mixed up in huge vats, plunging right into a fresh vatful of the multicolored liquid. The bullies outside laughed at yet another spectacular crash by 'Rainbow Dash'. Then the giant rainbow explosion ripped apart the cloud walls of the factory - a rainboom that was seen in every corner of Equestria, a wave of color across the sky. Dash didn't get away unharmed in the center of that exposion. That much overexposure to rainbows could be lethal, since Rainbows were not the placid and peaceful thing that Rainbow Dash had thought they were. They were a source of incredible energy and, frankly, it was like falling into a vat of freshly mashed jalapeno peppers. Dash was in agony. It took weeks for her to recover, but eventually she was up and moving again. However, even once she had physically recovered, she was ... different. Physically, it was very apparant that she had suffered - her splendid rainbow mane had lightened to a pale white, losing all color from it. Her boundless energy had drained away too, and while she wasn't mild ... it was more like she just didn't have the passion she'd once had. She was, however, doing much better in school. No longer so easily distracted, she knuckled down and did well with her studies, and it was during this time that she discovered a great love for history - specifically, the history of superheroes! In secret, Dash was dealing with a lot more than just a loss of color and mild emotional shifts. Under moments of stress, she'd find herself changing - her mane would change to a different, brilliant color, and she'd have amazing powers. During these moments, all of her passion and eagerness would come surging back. It was during this time that she was made the sidekick of the legacy superhero, The Wonderbolt. At the time of her sidekicking under him, his civilian identity was the noblepony Cirrus McCloud. However, The Wonderbolt mantle has changed hoofs hundreds of times over the centuries, and Dash always took it for granted that she would inherit the mantle next. That was not to be. Before she was nearly ready, The Wonderbolt was wounded, and the new Wonderbolt was concerned about bringing a young filly into such danger. Dash never learned the fire-haired mare's true identity, but she was determined that someday, she'd earn the right to be known as the famous hero of Cloudsdale: The Wonderbolt. Notable Allies: The Wonderbolt - Dash still doesn't know who the civilian identity of The Wonderbolt is these days, but she often teams up with him. Daring Do - Another mystery hero, Dash finds herself teaming up with Daring Do more often than any other superhero. The moment she gets away from A.K. Yearling and changes into her super-suit, Daring Do seems to show up without fail! While they've teamed up a great deal, they're both hesitant to share their secret identities. Notable Enemies: Giant Robots - She doesn't know what it is, but every week or two, there's another giant robot for her to fight! Daring Do's enemies - Dash often finds herself fighting villains that were originally those of Daring Do. (( I want to say that the villain versions of Lightning Dust and Gilda are also enemies of hers, but I leave them up to others to create )) General Notability: The Rainboom Centurian, as one of the six heroes who rescued the Moonlit Knight and started the new Renaissance of superherodom, is pretty darn famous. She's also been around the hero world for a long time, ever since she was a filly, so she also has a long baseline for ponies to remember her by.
  8. Regardless of if it's part of the flow of the sentence, a header on a page, or the last mentioned name in the previous chapter, a pronoun is considered to be referencing the most recent use of an appropriate proper noun. *EDIT* And here I made the same error. To demonstrate, the following is properly reversed so the subject/pronoun is appropriate.. Regardless of if it's part of the flow of the sentence, a header on a page, or the last mentioned name in the previous chapter, the most recent use of an appropriate proper noun (or, if none is available, then the next use of such) is considered the anchor for any appropriate pronouns.
  9. Sun Sentinel-More than once [Arsenic]'s been asked if [Arsenic] could dispose of this nuisance (Sun Sentinel), and more than once [Arsenic has] tried (and failed). Sun Sentinel-More than once [Sun Sentinel]'s been asked if [Sun Sentinel] could dispose of this nuisance (Arsenic), and more than once [Sun Sentinel has] tried (and failed). The former is bad grammar - the latter is accurate. However, that doesn't mean it is what was intended - true, this could just be a grammar issue. Problem with leading a pronoun with the wrong name. On top of the grammar structure telling us that 'Sun Sentinel' is 'she' which is being spoken of, the 'this nuisance' lead me to believe that it was Arsenic who was the nuisance, but it could be artistic understatement referring to Sun Sentinel. If this is the case this should probably just be reworded to make sure that the pronoun 'she' is not immediately preceded by 'Sun Sentinel' but instead by 'Arsenic'. It could be as simple a rewording as this: Sun Sentinel-More than once Arsenic has been asked if she could dispose of this nuisance, and more than once she's tried (and failed).
  10. These two things are very counter to each other. First, you're declaring Sun Sentinel - this universe's Superman - as your arch-nemesis. Not only that, but you're declaring that she has NEVER been able to stop your character, despite giving it her all. This isn't just some normal supervillain, out to rob a bank or a museum, or even hold a city hostage. This is a professional assassin, whose only goal is to kill - a very harsh thing in a ponyverse. And Sun Sentinel has not been able to stop her. This is an unheard of feat. Someone on the power level of Lex Luthor, Metallo, Brainiac, or Doomsday - those BIG NAME villains - can be stopped and captured by Superman. The only villain I can think of offhand who Superman has seriously tried to bring in and failed is Darkseid - and even then, that's a matter for debate. We are talking only the topmost class of villain. Yet you state she's 'not very well known'. Despite Sun Sentinel personally being after her - she's not very well known. Nuh-uh. if she's that good that she regularly beats the premier, number one, highest-level and epitome of superheroes for this world, then EVERYPONY knows her. She is the number one supervillain, that EVERY villain wants on their team, and every crime family wants in their crew. She can demand any price for her services, and there is no such thing as being overshadowed, because there are no greater villains nor assassins. Either that, or she's not as good as advertised.
  11. Oh. Sorry, I thought that the main six were the six heroes that stopped Nightmare Moon, and thus more experienced! And on that note - I am putting together an app for Dash.
  12. I accept responsibility for this awesomeness. (nods sagely) You forgot to mention her responsibility in Equestria was to cause pinpoint small earthquakes deep underground to relieve the stress under the earth and prevent worse catastrophes.
  13. That is all sorts of awesome, dude. If you don't mind me asking ... *what* don't you like about it?
  14. Heeee. D'awwww. Bramble's so clumsy sometimes, and Silver is so cute. *^_^*
  15. Awesome! Anthro Curtain Call looks great - good posture, good emotion. Really solid. I hate hands, too. Awwwww! It's Nightowl! She's a sweetheart! Ohmigosh, that's Shoobidorable! Ahhhh, Silver Lining. What an absolute sweetheart. Her third pose is adorable, and I love her design in the second piece. Thank you so much for more art! ^_^
  16. This needs a link to 'foals at heart'. XD I love how you did that stylized apple. Very creative, I'd never have thought of that.
  17. Thank you so much for this piece, Brian! It's really great! I love the awkwardness of Morning Glory, and the surprised expression on her face. And Captain Nightguard there definitely looks like the grizzled veteran who's been through the wringer. You captured their looks *just* so.
  18. So great to see you, Willow! I love how you drew Wisp there!
  19. You can't just say "New OC!" You gotta tell us the story!
  20. In the future, I would suggest making the neck a little shorter. But it's quite an excellent first try!
  21. Canterlot Forum's most-sought-after OC!
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