DreamySunday Posted June 27, 2017 Report Share Posted June 27, 2017 Don't worry! I'm sure it'll be fine <gets popcorn> tbh, If you do upload it I will probably only be able to read it in the (eastern canadian) morning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowbolt0 Posted June 27, 2017 Report Share Posted June 27, 2017 Does anyone know if this website cencencores Blogs? If so, i might upload it to a out of party site since, well, the language isn't pg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted June 27, 2017 Report Share Posted June 27, 2017 The word censor was loosened recently. So unless you have a lot of sexual content and generous peppering of the F-words you should be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowbolt0 Posted June 27, 2017 Report Share Posted June 27, 2017 https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12547885/1/AU-SMAT-The-Midnight-Roses-Story Given my writing style, it'll be safer un this link. This is link to Chapter 1, not a ton happens other than establishment of a character, so yeah. I'll go over the other 3 chapters i have and upload them in the new few days, and work on chapter 5. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted June 27, 2017 Report Share Posted June 27, 2017 I will read in the morning! <passes out> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted June 27, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2017 Wooo, interesting! Another! (The gif never works on my phone, but I bet you guys know which one I'm talking about.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted June 28, 2017 Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 I couldn't help but notice these things(among others)while reading this fic, Midnight left the cafe without paying, and Johnathan and Callum became Jonathan and Thomas not even two paragraphs after getting their names... 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted June 28, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 I thought I was the only one. XD It was still good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted June 28, 2017 Report Share Posted June 28, 2017 1 hour ago, SymphonicFire said: I thought I was the only one. XD It was still good though. Eh, it didn't grab me super hard. It has some problems. I'll give it a few more chapters before I make my decision. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Probably because it's just the beginning, nothing interesting has happened yet. There are a couple clues from the roleplay I can look forward to, so I'm hyped. I should totally get on the fanfic train once the cat is out of the bag (heheh, get it?) because I think chasing down the White Fang would make a pretty interesting story. That's not going to happen soon though, much needs to happen before I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted June 29, 2017 Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Nah, the problems I have are more structural. Some sentences don't make sense or are just utilized incorrectly. It just feels weird to read. That being said, that's how progress is made. So keep going shadow! I'd like to edit add, I totally know you can apply everything I just said to my things. So you know. yeah Also yes. Pyro! Get on it too! WE all need to write a fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Yaay! Fanfics everywhere! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowbolt0 Posted June 29, 2017 Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Yeah, like i said, my writing is much to be desired. Hopefully the other chapters are better and i'll try go over them as much as possible before i upload them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted June 29, 2017 Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Yeah, like I said, that's how you improve. Keep trying! And you'll get better. However! How do you switch Callums name to Thomas Not three paragraphs later and not go back and change that!? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Eh, proofreading not easy. Even I miss things sometimes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted June 29, 2017 Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Yeah, it is. It's why I don't proofread my posts before posting them. I just post my perfection when I finish typing it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted June 29, 2017 Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 #humblebrag Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 I'm seriously obsessed with Persona now, played most of the games and I'm seriously hooked! P3P is my fave. P3 is great but playing as a female character made it even more special. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted June 29, 2017 Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Yeah, it's nice playing P3P Fem route because you can actually up your social links by just befriending your opposite gender friends instead of just nailing all of them. As much as I like the male MC that always bugged me. Dreamy is faithful to Yukari darn it But I need that Orpheus Telos.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 So true! I also enjoyed the soundtrack, the title screen one is so good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted June 29, 2017 Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Soundtrack wise give me vanilla p3 or FES. But yeah! Controlling your party was also real good. Thanks portable. when you say you played all of them do you include 1 and 2? I know a lot of people skip those. But I think they're worth a go around Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 I'm not done with 1 and I only did P2 Innocent Sin. FES looked interesting, can't wait to play that one when I'm done. I also want to watch the P3 movies just because. I really feeling like making an envoking animation with an OC, but my animating skills stink... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreamySunday Posted June 29, 2017 Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Neat! Hope your not playing revelations persona. It's a butchered port of 1. also if you ask me, 2 has the strongest narrative so have fun finishing up 2 the answer(the extra mode added to FES)is a bit weird. It's hit and miss. Some like, some don't. Speaking of persona animations.... https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=NIuVO1SsFYs Also! Do it! That's how you get better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SymphonicFire Posted June 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2017 Yea, so far 2 has a strong and straightforward storyline, I like how it's very continuous. Tatsu X Maya! That animation is hilarious, is it fan made or a cut scene? I want to make it look good though, it'll take a while to finish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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