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My Little Fanfic: The Journey


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Hey everypony. So, i have this fanfic i'm writing, and i'd love some critique/ideas if you have any.

 

First though, i would love it for you to read the fanfic in it's entirety so far. Three chapters.

 

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11343292/1/The-Journey

 

If you could, favorite and follow the story, and leave a review? They all help!

 

I'd love advice on my how to improve my writing, and ideas/things you'd like to see in future chapters, and what your favorite part is so far!

 

Thank you!

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