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Comic - Long Live the Frontier


Hirsan

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Okay, I'm not necessarily a new artist, but that doesn't mean I'm the best in the world. Far from it... really.

 

Something I can show you guys to explain that above point is a webcomic I am working on called Long Live the Frontier.

 

http://longlivethefrontier.webcomic.ws/comics/1/

 

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This is the first page, and although it's only at 3 pages currently (Working on the fourth, and another comic as well known as Shadows of Abaron), I wanted to see what fellow bronies might think.

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  • 2 months later...

Ooo...nice sketches.  The art is pretty decent, and the ponies are proportional.  I personally think it would look nicer with some colour, though.  Another tip I would add is to minimize the visibility of lines within the art.  It would add to the effect on some occasions, but often just makes it look very elementary.   This can be deducted with either digital drawing, using other drawing materials (chalks are pretty good for smoothed look), or just paying really careful attention with the pencil.  Great job, though!

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