LemonSoda Posted July 5, 2017 Report Share Posted July 5, 2017 Roleplay Type: WoEName: LemonSoda Sex: Female, Young MareAge: FillySpecies: Pegasus Eye colour: A very deep blue.Coat: Lemon has an almost yellow coat that fades into an eggshell color at her muzzle.Mane/Tail: Lemons mane matches her muzzle as well as her tail, it is a sort of Eggshell color.Physique: LemonSoda is a small pony, smaller than most her age. She doesn't have a lot of strong features since she is so young.Residence: LemonSoda lives with her Big Sister in Ponyville.Occupation: She helps out at the bakery every now and then, but her sister would tell you thats just a hobby and her real job is doing well in school.Cutie Mark: She has yet to find her cutie mark. It is going to be a lemon soda pop bottle, and shes going to find it while she's helping out at the bakery one day and invents a drink called Lemon Cream Soda.Unique Traits: Lemon is extremely smart and takes school very seriously. She is also shy and timid and often has her nose in a book rather than talking with others. She really wants to make friends and she is actually really excitable and nice when you get to know her, she is just really scared of meeting other. History: Not much of a history had been developed for Lemon considering she is so young. She has been sent here from her home in Canterlot to attend school in Ponyville, she is staying with her big sister, PeachFuzz Character Personality: LemonSoda reads as much as she can. She loves book and learning and can always find it easier to talk to ponies older than her rather than ponies her actual age. She really wants to make friends but everytime she tries to talk she just starts rambling and trails off. She apologizes a lot for random things and sneezes when she's nervous. Character Summary: LemonSoda is a timid shy young pony that really wants to make some friends and help out as much as she can. Character Appearance: (Profile Pic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ross Posted July 5, 2017 Report Share Posted July 5, 2017 For "age", don't put numerical value, we don't really know how the MLP world work with ages. Put "Filly" instead for a child. Who is her sister? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LemonSoda Posted July 5, 2017 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2017 I'm hoping to find someone to play her sister! So I dont know yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted July 5, 2017 Report Share Posted July 5, 2017 Howdy! I'd be happy to review this app for you! Overall this character is looking just fine. It's ok to just say she's living with her older sister, no need to have someone playing the older sister right away. I would like to know why she's living where she is as far as where her parents are... Also, could you please add correct punctuation to your app? Part of getting an app approved is showing that you are proficient in writing to the grade needed for WOE. Please respond below when edits have been made and I'll take another look! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LemonSoda Posted July 5, 2017 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2017 Okay I think I fixed it! :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowFoxxy Posted July 6, 2017 Report Share Posted July 6, 2017 Look adorbs! Have fun! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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