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Cosmic Breeze [WIP]

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( Artwork is not mine, but was commissioned.  Was drawn by xKittyBlue from DeviantArt )
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Roleplay Type: WoE

Name: Cosmic Breeze

Sex: Male

Age: Young Stallion

Species: Unicorn

Eye color: Green, and also wears circular glasses that were outlined in red.

Coat: Dark Gray

Mane/Tail: Red-orange in coloration, the tips of each strand a shade darker than the rest, his bangs stylized into individual spikes waving toward his right.  His tail was short, yet a bit bushy.

Physique: Mostly average for a Unicorn, but leaned very slightly toward stockiness.  Freckles also dotted the bridge of his snout and cheeks.

Clothes: He often wore a cape that resembled a clear night sky rather realistically, with the addition of a crescent moon pendent around his neck, visually expressing his love of the cosmos.

Residence: Ponyville

Occupation: 

Cutie Mark: His cutie mark was represented with a spiral galaxy, with the ends of its arms turning into wisps of air, like wind.

Unique Traits


History:
---- Foal Years:

Cosmic Breeze had been born into a family of five, consisting of his father, mother, big brother and little sister.  His parents and big brother were earth ponies, while his little sister was a pegasus, and he alone was a unicorn.  As a foal, barely a few months old, he started to have the usual magical fluctuations, and since the rest of his intermediate family were not unicorns, they had a difficult time dealing with the outbursts of uncontrollable magic.  It made it even more difficult since they resided within the town of Appleloosa, where few unicorns lived.  Thankfully, it subsided with time, and little Cosmic turned out to be a quiet, observant foal, only crying out when needing the essentials, and occasionally wanted to play with his big brother.

 

---- Colt Years:

As he grew older, he begun to become more self-aware of how different he was compared to the rest of his family, including his younger pegasus sister.  They excelled more on the physical side, while he did not.  His father and brother worked in the Appleloosa orchard, while his mother took on the occupation as a seamstress.  When he first attempted to do anything that required physical labor, when his father thought he was big enough, he either tired out quickly, or was too clumsy doing it, especially when he attempted to sew and earned himself a good number of pokes.  He ultimately stopped trying after a year or so, and despite building up a bit of stamina and muscle as a result, he knew he was not cut out for it.  Instead, he took the chore of watching over the various cattle and critters of Appleloosa, which he slowly grew fond of.

 

Since he was only one of the few unicorns within town, there was barely - if any - education within the magical arts, which led to him barely knowing how to use his horn.  This fact worried his parents, and they pondered on calling in a magic tutor from out of town to provide a unicorn specific education.  After finding out how expensive that would be, they regrettably gave up on that effort, and enrolled Cosmic in the public - and only - school house within Appleloosa.

 

During his early school years, Cosmic found enjoyment with mental stimulation, quickly picking up the subjects taught and learning how to read, and eagerly read whatever book he could get his hooves on.  This, however, resulted in many of the other students to start picking on him, and secluded him from any of their cliques, even when he attempted to join to try and make friends.  Downtrodden, Cosmic had shied away from his classmates, with only the books in his possession to keep himself company whilst in school.

 

On his ninth birthday, his parents had saved enough bits, and presented him with a very special gift: a series of imported books meant for teaching unicorns how to use magic.  They figured that the next best thing without an actual tutor would be to allow their colt to learn on his own.  Naturally, Cosmic was overjoyed, and delved into them, engrossing himself with the arcane lessons within the various pages.  His magical prowess had begun to grow, albeit slowly, which Cosmic was satisfied with.  By around his twelfth birthday, Cosmic had noticed that he was one of the few that had still yet to obtain his cutie mark.  Even his younger pegasus sister had already gained hers.  Despite being teased by many of his classmates for still being a blank flank, he managed to scoff it off, even if it stung a little.  He knew it would come when the time came.

On one particularly warm evening, as Cosmic tended and played with the cattle and critters, he, for once, looked out to the horizon, and witnessed a sight that changed him forever.  He watched as the sun slowly set below the horizon, and up came the moon.

 

(( WIP ))


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Edited by CosmicBreeze
Added more history, but have yet to finish it.

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How's progress on this app? ;)

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Please respond here within 1 week if you would like to keep this app open. :)  If no response is made app will be moved. 

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Please respond here within 5 days if you'd like to keep this app open :) 

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Just checkin' in on this sugar cube... yah want more time? :smug:

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Please respond here within 5 days if you wish to keep this app open ;)

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Howdy do! You need more time for this one? :D 

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Howdy! How’s this app coming? Need more time? :) 

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Please respond here within 5 days if you'd like to keep this app open :) 

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Howdy! How’s this app coming? Need more time? :) 

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Please respond here within 5 days if you'd like to keep this app open. If no response is made app will be moved. Thank you! ;) 

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Howdy! Need more time for this? :D 

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Does thou require more time for this app? :) 

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Please respond here within 5 days if you'd like to keep this app open. If no response is made app will be moved. Thank you! ;) 

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