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Blade Dancer (Ready for review)


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Name: Blade Dancer


Gender: Male


Age: Stallion


Species: Unicorn


Eye colour: Crimson


Character colour: Light Grey 


Mane/Tail/Other: his mane is Crimson with a Light Grey Streak, Short and Spikey mane and a Medium length Spikey tail same colours as his mane


Physique: Pretty average a bit skinnier then normal but lean with muscle 


Residence: On the move (Typically stays in Canterlot and has a apartment there)


Occupation: A Mercenary who typically is paid to be a bodyguard, or escort, but is also sometimes hired as extra security for other establishment.


Cutie Mark: Crossed swords with small musical notes around them.


Unique Traits: He typically carries two short swords and a long knife. He likes heading to clubs or concerts in his spare time as he enjoys music and dancing(sometimes he can find jobs in clubs as a bodyguard). If the situation calls for it he also has some Steel plate armor.


History: Blade Dancer grew up in Manehatten where he lived with his father as his mother died giving birth to him. His father and older brother raised him his father being part of the town guard and brother 7 years older then him. Their father typically brought him to the town barracks when he was young, and through out the school he often found himself there rather than hanging out with other colts which made him not all to popular and for a while was bullied but soon stopped as they met his brother and father both of whom by this point were in the town guard. After eventually graduating out of school he joined the town guard and although enjoying himself felt like it just didn't feel like it was what he wanted. Eventually he found his way to a club after a shift and found himself sitting at the bar enjoying the atmosphere and noticed that two people were arguing although the argument seemed a ok so didn't mind it until it turned into a screaming match and nearly became a full blown hoof fight before he stepped in and separated the two and kept them apart from each other until they calmed a bit. and escorted them out personally. The club owner who happened to be there and thanked him personally and asked if he needed a job. despite having one he said yes to the mare and started that night, in the morning he went to his CO and told him of his new job and reluctantly agreed to change his shifts to better match his other job. After his enlistment period as a guard was over he kept working there although had to leave as the place wasn't getting enough business. and decided that he wanted see the world and decided to make a job from it using his skills as a guard and a bouncer to become a mercenary for hire.


Character Personality: Stubborn, Loyal, Honest, Straight forward, values respect, can be a bit confident in his abilities, informal unless its needed of him, has a strong sense of good and bad, things can be good or bad, but it depends on the reason why it was done.


Character Summary: Blade Dancer is a stallion in his prime who was once a guard but has become a Mercenary based on his past occupations and how he was raised, he is fairly average having good and bad traits like everypony else

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Hi there! I’ll be happy to review this app for you :)

 

I really only have one thing for you to edit and then I’m ready to approve this. 

 

Please change his age to say stallion instead of a year number. 

 

Once this is done just let me know here. 

 

 

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