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Name: Amore
Sex: Mare/Female
Age: Mare
Species: Unicorn (crystal)
Eye colour: Brilliant Amber
Coat: Very pale Vermillion
Mane/Tail: Gradient from brilliant raspberry to moderate cobalt blue.
Physique: (picture)
Residence: Crystal empire (formerly), unknown
Occupation: former ruler of the Crystal Empire 
Cutie Mark: (picture)
Unique Traits: Wise and loving. (Since i couldn't find much about her, I'll put some quotes.) "I've always believed that we have the power to control our futures"  "i saw you had the potential to be better. I see it even now."

History: she was the former queen of the Crystal Empire. She had an adorable daughter and a forbidden love. When Sombra was dealt with, before then her daughter was already looking for her destiny. She had another daughter that lived in another room and did not know of her older sister's existence. Hope disappeared, then her significant other, then it was her turn to disappear. She's been in a deep sleep ever since then and has been watching her folks and family while in that sleep.

Character Personality: Wise and loving (again XD). She cares for her folks and helps them whenever she gets a chance. She will be confused after being freed, since it HAS been a few years since she was last seen or even felt anything. She will use her wisdom to help and guide those in need of help. She is sad because she had to miss her folks and family for too long and is worried that they won't recognise her when she returns. She's also outgoing and a social Butterfly as well.
Character Summary: since i made Hope Amore's daughter, she will be a small bit out of character, but i did try my best to keep as much of her canon story in this one. I will be roleplaying her as i would roleplay a sweet and caring mom.

 

(Tell me if i need to change something. I did try my best, though) latest?cb=20150404020236latest?cb=20150401230216

Edited by HopeGoldy
Forgot to put ready in

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Please put (wip) or (ready) after the name of the character in your title so staff will know when it’s ready for review ;) 

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Howdy. I'll be reviewing your app in the absence of others. Let us get to work!

Importantly, for cast characters, we have higher requirements and standards, especially ones with royal heritage and bearing. With that in mind, here are some thoughts to ponder:

Her history, unique traits, and personality are a bit barren. I would add a great deal. She was the ruler of the Crystal Empire from before the brief rule of Sombra, so you have the time and space to work with her. Ask yourself some questions and allow them to inform your writing! :)
How was her rule? How did she come into the position? How did she lead?
How did she meet the stallion who helped her start a family? What were her parents like, her subjects like? What was the relationship between her and her citizens?
What crisis situations, what disasters, what events transpired under her watch and how did she react? What was she like beyond direct canon sourced information?
What hopes did she harbor, hobbies did she have, flaws, strengths, and fears?
Who is she as a character, not as a plot device for another? For the purposes of this application, ignore anything and everything else that isn't tied directly to who she is or was.

For unique traits, try to come up with something that is unique, or at least something that is interesting and defining. Wise and loving are wonderful qualities but can describe any number of characters. What is unique about Amore that makes her stand out?
 

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Do you have any suggestions of what i can put in? I tried to keep it as canon as possible but this wiki page doesn't provide much information. And I'm afraid that if i don't keep it as canon as possible i won't be allowed to rp as her because of the 'as canon as possible' rule...😔

https://mlp.fandom.com/wiki/Princess_Amore#Crystal

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She has very little canon on her so that gives you a lot of room to work with. Be as canon as possible is meant to inform the applicant that they should be careful to not add elements that would oppose what we know of her. Everything else is open to her- as long as the canon is kept respected, you have a lot of room to move.

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I'm kinda a slow worker to make sure to get it right or good enough. So what should i edit or add in first?

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I'll quote what I said earlier:

"Ask yourself some questions and allow them to inform your writing! :)
How was her rule? How did she come into the position? How did she lead?

How did she meet the stallion who helped her start a family? What were her parents like, her subjects like? What was the relationship between her and her citizens?
What crisis situations, what disasters, what events transpired under her watch and how did she react? What was she like beyond direct canon sourced information?
What hopes did she harbor, hobbies did she have, flaws, strengths, and fears?"

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Oof..that's a lot of questions...I'll have to make some notes about that on my phone and then add it on this form.

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How's this app coming along? Need more time? :) 

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I can't think of anything so far! I made notes but can't make anything of it...😤

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Perhaps take SteelEagle's questions and answer them one at a time. You can post your answers here and we can help you get them inserted into the right part of the app. :) 

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Howdy! How's this app coming along? Need more time? :) 

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Please be aware that this thread will be moved in 3 days if no response is made ;) Apps can always be moved back at the request of the writer. 

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I DIDN'T GET NOTIFICATIONS OF THIS AND I HAVE A LIFE TOO LIKE ALL OF YOU DO!

 

So. That's relieving.

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This site's picture insert is seriously broken i swear to effing god. Here's a large copy paste instead! I hope this is going to be approved if i put it in. The other answers are a work in progress. 

 

Amore smiled sweetly at her peers when she walked by. They adored her, since she was always there for them when they needed her. She had simple laws that kept peace in the Crystal Empire; for example, always have respect for eachother. Many ponies had arguments but they always resolved it with talking, which ended with respect. Another law was: no stealing, and if you do it, at least be careful with it. She almost never had to jump in an argument except when somepony invited a Changeling in that had disguised itself as a friend. She reacted to it kindly, saying that it could stay if it didn't steal love from her peers. That caused the Changeling to stay as their own identity. She wasn't born into royalty at all. She was just a unicorn! But she felt like the empire needed changes so decided to take over kindly, since the old prince was about to die.

 

 

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I would like to remind you to please remain respectful.

 

The posts made to check if someone needs more time and to notify writers of posts being moved are standard to this site. Every app that is in progress gets a notification when the app idles for two weeks or more. 

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1 hour ago, RainbowFoxxy said:

I would like to remind you to please remain respectful.

 

The posts made to check if someone needs more time and to notify writers of posts being moved are standard to this site. Every app that is in progress gets a notification when the app idles for two weeks or more. 

I know but when i spam anyone i get a "if you do not respect i have a life, i will no longer be chatting with you" kind of thing. And now i do that, it's seen as disrespectful. It really confuses me sometimes.

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When a reply from a site mod asking if you need more time is added to your app thread all you need do is to make a quick response such as: “yes I need more time.”

 

If you do not have time to reply, the time for response lapses and your app is moved all you need do is message myself or another site mod and the app will be moved back without a problem. 

 

This process is to keep the app board clean and organized and to assist writers in completing applications. 

 

As a site moderator, all I ask of members is to extend the same curtesy to me as I do to them. “Spamming” and following the moderation procedures of this site by posting application replies in the prescribed amount of time are two different matters entirely. 

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