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Name: Amore
Sex: Mare/Female
Age: Mare
Species: Unicorn (crystal)
Eye colour: Brilliant Amber
Coat: Very pale Vermillion
Mane/Tail: Gradient from brilliant raspberry to moderate cobalt blue.
Physique: (picture)
Residence: Crystal empire (formerly), unknown
Occupation: former ruler of the Crystal Empire 
Cutie Mark: (picture)
Unique Traits: Wise and loving. (Since i couldn't find much about her, I'll put some quotes.) "I've always believed that we have the power to control our futures"  "i saw you had the potential to be better. I see it even now."

History: she was the former queen of the Crystal Empire. She had an adorable daughter and a forbidden love. When Sombra was dealt with, before then her daughter was already looking for her destiny. She had another daughter that lived in another room and did not know of her older sister's existence. Hope disappeared, then her significant other, then it was her turn to disappear. She's been in a deep sleep ever since then and has been watching her folks and family while in that sleep.

Character Personality: Wise and loving (again XD). She cares for her folks and helps them whenever she gets a chance. She will be confused after being freed, since it HAS been a few years since she was last seen or even felt anything. She will use her wisdom to help and guide those in need of help. She is sad because she had to miss her folks and family for too long and is worried that they won't recognise her when she returns. She's also outgoing and a social Butterfly as well.
Character Summary: since i made Hope Amore's daughter, she will be a small bit out of character, but i did try my best to keep as much of her canon story in this one. I will be roleplaying her as i would roleplay a sweet and caring mom.

 

(Tell me if i need to change something. I did try my best, though) latest?cb=20150404020236latest?cb=20150401230216

Edited by HopeGoldy
Forgot to put ready in

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Please put (wip) or (ready) after the name of the character in your title so staff will know when it’s ready for review ;) 

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Howdy. I'll be reviewing your app in the absence of others. Let us get to work!

Importantly, for cast characters, we have higher requirements and standards, especially ones with royal heritage and bearing. With that in mind, here are some thoughts to ponder:

Her history, unique traits, and personality are a bit barren. I would add a great deal. She was the ruler of the Crystal Empire from before the brief rule of Sombra, so you have the time and space to work with her. Ask yourself some questions and allow them to inform your writing! :)
How was her rule? How did she come into the position? How did she lead?
How did she meet the stallion who helped her start a family? What were her parents like, her subjects like? What was the relationship between her and her citizens?
What crisis situations, what disasters, what events transpired under her watch and how did she react? What was she like beyond direct canon sourced information?
What hopes did she harbor, hobbies did she have, flaws, strengths, and fears?
Who is she as a character, not as a plot device for another? For the purposes of this application, ignore anything and everything else that isn't tied directly to who she is or was.

For unique traits, try to come up with something that is unique, or at least something that is interesting and defining. Wise and loving are wonderful qualities but can describe any number of characters. What is unique about Amore that makes her stand out?
 

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