Centauri Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 I've sent the first 2+1 chapters to EQD (still being pre-read), but I want editors for chapters after that.Links (Google Docs format - no sign-in):PrologueChapter OneChapter TwoChapter ThreeChapter FourChapter FiveChapter SixChapter SevenChapter EightAny advice, and please PM me; I'll get back to you on that.Thanks in advance for your help!EDIT: Mild coarse language; most of it's been ponified. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilia Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 How long til Chapter Four? So far, I see no problems with spelling or grammar (my nitpicks in fanfics is the spelling and grammar issues!) and I love how you ponified the curse words. There are none visible, which makes this great for kids to read (sorta. The violence isn't geared for kids, but that's the least of the problems and it's definitely an element of intrigue!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Centauri Posted October 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 I've actually finished up to Chapter Eleven, but I'm not sure I want to let it all out in one go...Chapter Four will go up later today (AEDT) and Chapter Five tomorrow, probably. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solos90 Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 This better not be clop-fiction or shipping. Maybe slight hinted but that's about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Centauri Posted October 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 This better not be clop-fiction or shipping. Maybe slight hinted but that's about it.It's shipping. Read the tags, but it's not clop, I assure you of that.I will hint at it, but it's not going to be explicit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
solos90 Posted October 17, 2011 Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 Eh, what can I do. Enjoy writing your shipping. I don't really care much tbh. If you need a proof-reader I can assist. *winks sensually* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Centauri Posted October 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 Chapter Five is now in the OPEh, what can I do. Enjoy writing your shipping. I don't really care much tbh. If you need a proof-reader I can assist. *winks sensually*Good colt. I might call on your help as a proofreader in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Centauri Posted October 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 I just put chapters 6 through 8 in the OP.Enjoy, everypony. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beat Match Posted October 25, 2011 Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 Do you need another proofreader or editor? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Centauri Posted October 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2011 Do you need another proofreader or editor? I certainly would, but after writing up to Chapter Nine and onwards, it's becoming too Grimdark for canterlot.com (no longer a PG-13 rating). I'm really sorry, but I'll have to close this thread down. If you want to keep reading the story, it's here on FIM Fiction, all 12+1 Chapters written so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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