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I've sent the first 2+1 chapters to EQD (still being pre-read), but I want editors for chapters after that.

Links (Google Docs format - no sign-in):

Prologue

Chapter One

Chapter Two

Chapter Three

Chapter Four

Chapter Five

Chapter Six

Chapter Seven

Chapter Eight

Any advice, and please PM me; I'll get back to you on that.

Thanks in advance for your help!

EDIT: Mild coarse language; most of it's been ponified.

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How long til Chapter Four?  So far, I see no problems with spelling or grammar (my nitpicks in fanfics is the spelling and grammar issues!) and I love how you ponified the curse words.  There are none visible, which makes this great for kids to read (sorta.  The violence isn't geared for kids, but that's the least of the problems and it's definitely an element of intrigue!)

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I've actually finished up to Chapter Eleven, but I'm not sure I want to let it all out in one go...

Chapter Four will go up later today (AEDT) and Chapter Five tomorrow, probably.

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This better not be clop-fiction or shipping. Maybe slight hinted but that's about it.

It's shipping. Read the tags, but it's not clop, I assure you of that.

I will hint at it, but it's not going to be explicit.

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Eh, what can I do. Enjoy writing your shipping. I don't really care much tbh. If you need a proof-reader I can assist. *winks sensually*

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Chapter Five is now in the OP

Eh, what can I do. Enjoy writing your shipping. I don't really care much tbh. If you need a proof-reader I can assist. *winks sensually*

Good colt. I might call on your help as a proofreader in the future.

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Do you need another proofreader or editor? :)

I certainly would, but after writing up to Chapter Nine and onwards, it's becoming too Grimdark for canterlot.com (no longer a PG-13 rating). I'm really sorry, but I'll have to close this thread down. If you want to keep reading the story, it's here on FIM Fiction, all 12+1 Chapters written so far.

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