BlazeBright3 001

i added some shades and depth to the previous image made her neck a little thicker too.

I'd say you should make the back of the neck a bit thicker, still. It's hard to pinpoint how much, because it's usually covered by the mane.

Here, take a look how Celestia's neck looks like:

http://arch.413chan.net/289px-PrincessCelestia-(n1296687156327).png

You might need to shorten the neck, too.

i see your argument now and if i wernt doing this for someone else i would agree with you.

Im sry i really do value you advice, its just that this isnt my work for me its someone elses.

As long as I don't annoy you, I'm good.

hmm curved by the mane THAT GIVES ME AN IDEA!

i will upload my latest version soon.

no davroth im still new to ponyart so criticism is good keep it coming:D