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Rainbow Flying


BaconofChaos

Man, this angle was hard to draw. Still not sure I got the back legs right.

Anyway, it's Dash being awesome and stuff. Same old, same old. :P

Done for part of an animation I'm working on.

EDIT: Fixed various things (mouth, eyes, tail, hind legs)

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© Diego Havoc 2012

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I know she is supposed to be gritting her teeth but it honestly looks like she has large white lips around a closed mouth. You should have the lines that separate the upper and lower teeth come from either side of her mouth and fade towards the middle.

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*points up* I wanted to make a similar joke involving milk but thought it might not be appreciated.

Love these angles that show both cutiemarks though! :)

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I know she is supposed to be gritting her teeth but it honestly looks like she has large white lips around a closed mouth. You should have the lines that separate the upper and lower teeth come from either side of her mouth and fade towards the middle.

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I HAVE FAILED

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DrMmg.pngI HAVE FAILED

No you haven't failed, really it is the only part that really needs fixing and it isn't difficult to do so. I didn't just say what was wrong, I also gave a suggestion how to right it because I don't want you to drop the picture. :/

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No you haven't failed, really it is the only part that really needs fixing and it isn't difficult to do so. I didn't just say what was wrong, I also gave a suggestion how to right it because I don't want you to drop the picture. :/

I know, I know. Deliberately overeacting. It's just that I can't it unsee now >_<

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I know she is supposed to be gritting her teeth but it honestly looks like she has large white lips around a closed mouth. You should have the lines that separate the upper and lower teeth come from either side of her mouth and fade towards the middle.

Fixed!

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I... kinda want to see the original now too, since everyone was talking about it. :P

Also, while its not incorrect by any means, it is kind of interesting because she looks like she was viewed through a telescope or a camera with a long focal length. :)

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