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Killer Frost


Davroth

A picture of Opal Shards in her SB-uniform.

I'll colour it later this week.

But, more importantly, this marks the first time I drew an OC with no reference material at all. So please, if there's anything wrong with it, feel free to point it out. :)

From the album:

[zz] uncolored

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Dunno who Opal shards is, nor what SB is. On that note...

-Note that the wings folding over means the order of smallest to biggest feathers is reversed, and so the right wing should go biggest to smallest from the left to right (and vice versa for left).

-The only other problem I can spot is the hind leg on the right. If it is a front on picture, it shouldn't be showing to the side. If it is front on but slightly to the side, the recurve bit under the rear/tail should go away from the screen, not perpendicular to it (and thus not visible.)

-Her hair looks like noodles, but I like noodles so that's great. :D

More power to you, Davvy. I dig the lightning bolts and the facial expression! Despite what I say above, it's a fairly good drawing. If I can only pick out two things, that's a whole lot of things you've done perfectly well. XD

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