Well, thank you. I will address all of the things you mentioned as best I can. Yes, he received his cuite mark when he discovered his love for grace and elegance, in essence. This occurred when the gust of wind knocked him off of his cloud and forced him to learn to fly. His mark represents grace and strength, which is symbolized within the wind that helped him discover his passion. His cutie mark ties in to his love for music [and aerial dancing] because they are both considered graceful arts. As for adding backstory, I didn't want to clutter up the application, but if you feel that it will help dimensionalize him, I will do so. I'm afraid it won't be all too interesting, though. And thanks for pointing out the fact that I had written "unobserved"; I revised the sentence, and forgot to change said word to "observed". Again, thanks~ Hopefully my revisions have made things more clear.