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  1. 34 minutes ago, Pretzelparty said:

    Taira let out a warm chuckle towards the Guard pony, "You're concern is well appreciated, Sir Shield." Perhaps in an attempt to ease the stallion, Taira dipped  his head towards him with a subdued smile. As the Old wolf allowed himself to get more comfy around this crowd he would try to distract the pony from any intimidation with another question, "Will I be seeing you at Boulder's party tonight?"

    Heart Shield smiled upon Taira's response. The large wolf lowered his head to his level, He still seemed like such a huge wolf. Heart Shield had never encountered a Okami before. Heart Shield never imagined he would be talking to one this very moment, He couldn't say that now tho. He was actually rather interested in learning more about his kind now. "this is something I'm going to have to tell my parents about" He thought to himself "They probably won't believe me anyway" Heart shield chuckled to himself. 

     

    In the middle of his thought Taira had voiced a question to the pony. "Ohh, ummm, A party? I didn't think i would be invited." Heart Shield replied shyly. He realized he didn't really know anyone here real well. "I mean i will go if you want me to, I just wasn't sure..." He stopped his sentence kind of awkwardly. He was getting a little more comfortable around him now, But it just seemed a little awkward going to a party with people he didn't know. Maybe he could get to know this Okami named Taira more. After all it might be a chance to make new friends Heart Shield convinced himself. 

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  2. So I am pretty new to writing (probably as you can tell :P). I have been interested in writing my own stories outside of Rping here. I figured i could practice sharpening my writing skills up here before i try anything else. On a day to day basis, I am constantly coming up with ideas and daydreams in my mind, and I would love to get them out of my head and onto a piece of paper, or screen. That's the problem tho, I have tried to articulate my ideas several times, But what i write or draw on the paper, and what i am imagining in my head doesn't always match up to my expectations , And it really frustrates me sometimes. Or sometimes I'll get that "good enough" attitude and leave everything lacking detail. Maybe I am expecting to much out of myself. 

     

    Would anyone have any suggestions on who to overcome this, and able to write in a way that it goes into detail smoothly without lulling over the details?  Sorry if this is hard to understand. :P 

  3. Heart Shield eased up a little, a smile returned to his face. It seemed every pony had kept calm, and this version of the kirin wasn't harmful but rather his true form. He had never seen a Okami or heard of one before, and was rather intrigued by it. He couldn't wrap his head around it, This pony he had raced with was actually a wolf, and he mentioned something about the last dance party he was to was a millennia ago. Heart Shield had a hard time making sense of it, Admittedly he did look rather cool looking in his wolf form, "wish i could do that" Heart Shield thought to him self.

     

    The large wolf responded to his earlier question "Oh um, tissues, uhh i don't think i have any on hoof, but I'm glad your alright." Heart Shield had said with a little bit of a nervous smile. He knew Taira wouldn't do anything to him, but he was rather intimidating looking tho. The large wolf overshadowed the now seemingly small guard pony. Turning His thoughts to other things now, He wondered now that the race was over, what other festivities would take place? How would he spend the rest of his time in ponyville? 

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  4. Crossing the finish line Heart shield finally was able to take a breather. 10th place was far behind, but he thought it was pretty good for joining in the race way late. The main thing was he had fun, and that was all that mattered to him. He did manage to miss the sap in the whitetail woods, and recovered from a spill near the end of the race. Heart Shield convinced himself he could do better next year. He thought about what he was going to do now that the race was over. As he looked around there where celebrations everywhere, ponies where cheering in the stands. Watching as the top racers where put on a podium and handed out rewards, When out of nowhere there was a loud boom and sudden burst of mist and air! Panicking Heart Shield looked to see that the source was from a kirin which had been standing on one of the podiums. It was hard to see because of the mist surrounding the kirin, but he seemed to be a bit taller than he was before. Finally managing to catch a glimpse there was a large wolf standing in his place! Heart Shields mind raced 100 miles a minute trying to figure out what was happening. As a Royal guard it was his duty to resolve all problems that may arise. Heart shield started to trot cautiously towards the wolf that stood among the mist, but froze before going more that a few steps. What was he going to do!?  So many things raced through his mind that he could not comprehend it all. Knowing this wolf was one the ponies that took part in the race, he didn't want to have a confrontation with him. "Ar... Are you okay there buddy?" Heart shield asked keeping himself ready for anything, what ever that may be. Standing frozen like a statue Heart Shield was conflicted on what to do. Should he try to help him, should he stay right where he was? His mind overwhelmed him, standing there with a confused and worried look on his face. He knew he wanted to help this kirin, and didn't want anything bad to fall upon him. "What should i do!?" Heart Shield asked in a bit of a panic looking around at the ponies who stood around him 

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