Glitchy

Actually.. You know what... Maybe scrap the Roleplay Type: World of Equestia RP I now have now idea what RP she should be in. The most general one, I suppose. What do you guys think? Crossover RP?

The part about eating it was a joke, by the way. ..Haha.

*notes down* Hrm.. Fantastic idea..! She could have a pouch to keep an essence of storm cloud with her to help store some of the electricity.. Just a small amount. It only lasts a few hours, so before she is able to use static, she would have to "stock up" before hand. Or, you know. She could just eat/drink it. ...Can you even eat clouds? o.O

Yeah, "sciencing it up" was what I was going to go for. Though that is rather strange in the MLP universe... ..Anyway. It's a fantastic suggestion. Only it's not exactly weather based - not REALLY anyway as it's not altering the environment around her, she's manipulating the surges of electricity stored in her mane and tail, so it's more of a body based thing, I suppose. She just uses the weather based elements around her to charge up.

Woah, Bramble thank you SO much for your critique, seriously. I honestly do appreciate it. I'm constantly looking for new ways to improve anything I do.. ^-^ My character has much depth to her and I've spent months of my time giving her a proper back story. (When I'm not working, that is, and trying my best NOT to make her sound like an emo Mary-Sue character...[despite the fact I am not much of a writer]) I suppose her getting that electricity in the first place would either be a combination of how a normal being would acquire static (most common example here is rubbing your feet on carpet in dry conditions, kind of "charging up".) Using that storm cloud idea is a FANTASTIC idea. Almost like a storage box. She'd need to be fully charged for an entire day to be able to "put on a performance" though. I'm so pleased you understand her core - the electricity/static is (sadly) a main and important trait with Spark. I'd hate for her to be mistaken as "overpowered" though. I know how hard it is to actually accept someone elses idea/character when it looks so out of place. I know because I've seen many characters in the past and just kind of gone.. (Most of the time, they're people with Alicorns...lol) And I'm also very, very happy you like her.. What did you call it? Gorgeous, beautiful, dancing. I think I'm going to need a tissue. If you had any idea how much it means to me for someone else to like this so obscure and strange idea... (And thank you very very much for complementing my art! I only just drew it today as a matter of fact. It's hard for me to get my idea across of Spark "dancing with lightning", so now there's an image to refer to! Hooray! ) Hrm. Crossover RP? I might just go check that out. Thanks again! But I guess for now I could stay here and brainstorm/talk/figure out everything to do with Spark. And as for the timeline.. Well.. Hrm... I'm not so sure as to how I could make that work. I might need some more time to think about that as I draw.. I've got sketches down for her as a filly. :3

I love it here so far~! and thank you very much!

Anymore opinions/suggestions? Anything at all? (I do plan to spend quite some time on here)

Glad you pointed that all out! I can fix this, allow me to explain.. Spark Heart bears NO magical abilities. Perhaps I should have mentioned that and made it clear. (We all know she isn't a unicorn. XD) It's really nothing special; she is just able to store a generous amount of static electricity via her mane and tail, and expels it in short bursts through her front hoofs. It's no magical ability.. The fact that she can do that does NOT make that her special talent. Her special talent is being able to kind of "manipulate" it from something practical and functional into something simple and pretty, mainly in her dancing she does whilst in flight. Something a little like this: http://www.canterlot.com/gallery/image/2034-light-show/ (I'm not the worlds best artist, just trying to give everypony an idea here.) As for the issues regarding her age and time, I'd say she is a very young mare. (Sorry, still very new to all of this.) I never mentioned when the incident happened with Luna happened. It takes place long after Season one. She has only been told of the Nightmare Moon tales but was never around to see it happen. But that's not really important.. I just kind of wanted to get her personality and special talent out of the way. She isn't the most perfect RP character, I admit, (nor have I ever Role Played before) but I don't mind if this doesn't pass approval I suppose. It was fun making a kind of reference for her, anyway.

I'm flattered you put in so much effort.

Thank you very much! ^-^