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    Empress Yuè took only a couple moments to process Medo’s request. While her words may have sounded awkwardly vague and stilted on a surface level, the unicorn’s unspoken, taboo desire was unmistakable. But given the circumstances, who was the Empress to refuse? And besides; Yuè was loath to admit it, but with the sibling duo Presteza and Silverheart having both returned to their Equestrian homeland, her private dinner table felt rather lonesome as of late. At the very least, Medo deserved the chance to get to be known better.


    A smile crept its way onto Empress Yuè’s muzzle after a few seconds; “.....Then a friend you shall receive. My servant will show you to our Peony Garden after you acquaint yourself with the Chamberlain and your new quarters. My royal duties for the day will be concluded then... and we’ll have a moment to ourselves, so that we may have an opportunity to get to know one another better over tea. I hope that arrangement will be to your liking....?”

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  2. Howdy! It's been quite a long time since I last did one of these app evaluations myself, so my apologies if I'm a bit rusty. Anywho, I see this fellow is essentially a ponified D&D-style paladin. The thing with our World of Equestria RP environment however is that all characters conform to the setting/worldbuilding details established by the TV show. Your Greymane app... doesn't do that. Honestly, the work it'd take to get him in line with WoE standards would destroy much of the unique flavor you envisioned for your character.

     

    For these reasons, I sincerely recommend making Greymane a Free For All character instead. Over there, you'll have all the freedom in the world to RP your knight the way you originally intended. :) 

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    With an uncharacteristically despondent voice, Princess Cadence barely managed to eek out an answer to her mama’s question; “Oh, uh, we’ll see I guess, if Flurry likes singing that is.....”


    “Princess Twilight Sparkle requests an audience with everypony gathered here.” The overly formal voice came from a Twilight Guard stallion standing at the doorway; guess Twily was finally able to drop what she was doing to spend quality family time. “This way please..."


    As all the guests got up from their seats to follow their armor-wearing usher, Cadence took a brief moment to put on a smile and leaned in close towards Flurry Heart, whispering; “Mommy hoped you like our moving picture, you cutie pie. Maybe you’ll be in one of them someday.....”

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    As cute as it was to see Twilight’s snout being utilized to activate her device, Sunset Shimmer was genuinely excited to see Twi appear on her own screen. She could genuinely video-chat with her friend across dimensions now! That WAS super rad!!!


    Once she waved back to the alicorn, a grinning Sunset looked back up at the elderly Starswirl; “This is... this thing is wonderful!!! I can’t wait to give it a go once I get home! Say though Starswirl, have you given this device a name yet?”

     

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    Being lost in thought, it took Sunset Shimmer a few moments to realize her turn to step up had finally come. “Ohh, uhhh,” the unicorn stammered as she adjusted her mental bearings; “Hello, Applejack. Whatever types of apples you’ve got left are fine by me. Preferably those suited for snacking instead of baking.” Miss Shimmer might not spend all that much time in the company of her fellow friendship professor in this world, but a little bit of apple facts taught by Applejack’s counterpart Over There HAD managed to rub off onto Sunset.....

     

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    For a brief second, Filthy Rich looked almost taken aback by Diamond Tiara’s sudden assertiveness. Truth be told, the middle-aged stallion had serious misgivings back when all this election campaigning started when his still-young daughter volunteered to assume the role of campaign manager. Before then, Mr. Rich’s planned on hiring a professional with a proven track record out of Manehattan to do the job. As he saw it, giving that responsibility to a little filly was a huge gamble when her only prior political experience involved a school election.


    Spoiled Rich however saw things in a different light. Yes, Diamond Tiara was not yet an adult, but she was bursting with potential. Mrs. Rich was quick to remind her husband about the stupendous sky-high success the Foal Free Press enjoyed under Diamond’s brief tenure as editor-in-chief, proving the child had a knack for understanding adult audiences. On that note, Diamond also possessed the vital attribute of being Ponyville-raised; something no outsider consultant could match when it came to a local election.


    It was with that point that Filthy’s gaping flaw with his own plan became apparent. Spoiled had always been a headstrong mare, habitually prone to disagreeing with anypony with a contrary opinion to her. Although Mrs. Rich made a show of making nice every now and then, for the most part, the one pony she’d shown consistent respect for over the last couple years — even more so than Filthy himself — had been their precious daughter. It took a little time to do so, but Mr. Rich eventually conceded that nopony else could get through to Spoiled the way Diamond could, which would be important if his wife didn’t want to be done in on the campaign trail by her own prickly demeanor.


    Getting his headspace back into the moment at hoof, Filthy Rich swiftly regained his composure and Diamond’s question. “Oh yes,” Filthy retrieved the opened envelope and placed its contents on the table for the others to read; “The private eyes I hired got back to me with the results of their background investigation. See here, this Strong Copper fellow has pretty much spent his adult life chasing off monsters. As far as they can tell, Mr. Copper is very competent at what he does... but he’s never stuck around any one place for long. He’s not a stud who plants roots, as you might say.”


    Filthy Rich now laid his notebook on the table; “If his appearance at today’s Town Hall is any indication, Mr. Copper may be making an exception for Ponyville thanks to all the magical critters that live nearby. Humph, I guess our town’s a curiosity case to him, or something..." A rare hint of indignation from the business pony. “Anyway, Mr. Copper spent his time talking about what he did for a living, and how he’d improve monster control if he was elected mayor. He gave little indication otherwise on how exactly he’d run the town outside his area of expertise.....”

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    Sunburst was going to mess around with an unidentified rune? ...Sunset Shimmer had a bad feeling about this. On a couple of occasions, Princess Celestia had harped about the dangers of casting mystery incantations without proper safeguards in place, which Sunset failed to truly appreciate at the time. Nowadays ironically, the amber unicorn believed this was one department where her friend and former teacher's pet, Twilight Sparkle, was kinda reckless at times.


    “Ummm,” the mare asked nervously; “You uhhh, HAVE worked with runes before..... right, Sunburst?”

     

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    Sunset Shimmer offered a knowing nod to Luster about the grades not coming easy. Back then, the amber unicorn had quite happily made a ton of sacrifices in her single-minded quest to become the best of the best. Few others tended to be willing to go without things like social connections and recreational time.


    After a few moments of silence — which Sunset used up to finish her sandwich — Luster Dawn’s next round of questions caught the older mare a bit off-guard. “.....You know,” Miss Shimmer scratched her chin; “I’ve haven’t really thought about becoming a mentor at all. Maybe if I didn’t have to jump between worl-... make long-distance commutes every other day, I’d have the time to give somebody a proper arcane mentorship.”


    With a sigh, Sunset glanced back towards the window; “...If I choose to relocate to Ponyville once this current school year ends, then it’ll something I’ll consider for the future...” Great; now the Equestrian Girl was once again reminded of the anxiety-inducing time bomb that was Graduation, and what it would mean to six of the most meaningful friendships in her life. As if she didn't need more to worry about already.....

     

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    “Ehhhhhh.....” Sunset Shimmer’s unsure mind drew up a blank; “This is my first time visiting Las Pegasus; I have no idea at all where to eat here. Gee, I don’t know... I GUESS I don’t really care where we go, just as long as it isn’t a total dive.....” In other words, the sort of establishments that Temy was drawn towards. Aside from that, Sunny wasn’t all that motivated right now to take charge and assert what type of restaurant she’d like the group to eat out at.

     

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    Speaking of the pony devil.....


    “I’m back! Sorry to keep all you darlings waiting, but the town hall meeting ran a bit long...” Filthy Rich was back home at his family Manor, clutching a notebook and an opened letter marked with the eyeball logo of the Canterton Maneland Detective Agency. After giving Spoiled an affectionate smooch on the lips, Filthy gave lil’ Diamond Tiara a loving pucker to her forehead, and it was then that the stallion’s eye noticed his daughter holding what appeared to be a poster design.


    “Hmmm, what’s that?” Setting his own stuff down on the closest table in leg’s reach, Filthy scooped up Diamond’s parchment. Almost immediately, the stallion grinned as he beheld Mrs. Rich’s alluring visage. “You made this just now, Diamond Tiara? My my, it certainly captures your mother quite well...” Filthy offered his wife a knowing glance.....

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  11. *BACK DURING THE MARCH 8 TOWN HALL MEETING*

     

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    Off to the back of the meeting hall, a certain husband of Strong Copper’s electoral opponent was busy quietly scribbling down notes. Ever since the Ponyville mayoral candidates all threw their hats into the ring, Filthy Rich had made a point of paying close attention whenever they made public appearances or announcements. “Opposition research” wasn’t exactly his forte, but his darling daughter had been MOST insistent on the need to dig up dirt on Mom’s rivals and keep tabs on their popularity.


    .....It made Filthy ponder just where Diamond Tiara was getting these instincts from in the first place. Spoiled was well... spoiled, but a Machiavellian political operative she was not.


    From what Mr. Rich has observed of Strong Copper so far, he seemed to be a decent sort of fellow. Dealing with magical creatures was his prior occupation, which while admirable, Filthy still believed that it wouldn’t be enough to outweigh the civic experience that his wife brought to the table. All Mrs. Rich had to do was add a commitment to improved beast control in her campaign platform... heck, even promise Mr. Copper a job if she is elected mayor, and that would do much to take the wind out of his sails-

     

    “If I may ask,” the voice of a fiery unicorn mare from up front broke Filthy’s line of thought. It was somepony the stallion didn’t know all that well, having only spotted her around the Castle and School of Friendship district once or twice. “What is the toughest monster you’ve ever been up against in your career?”

     

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    There was no such thing as an easy day around these parts. Not one day after recovering from her illness, Princess Cadence was already replying to a doozy of a letter. Although the letter itself didn’t specify WHAT sort of significant life change happened, the alicorn inferred that it had to be on a Blueblood/Bluebelle level of magnitude to explain how the colt described didn’t know he was friends with the letter’s author in the past.....

     

    Dear School Filly:


    Congratulations on your life change! I know other ponies who have gone through alterations as dramatic as yours, and you certainly seem to be taking things like a champ!!!


    About your friend, I must stress though that it is important that he learn the truth about how the two of you were connected before. I know it seems scary contemplating what could happen if things go wrong, but believe me, the blowback will be a thousand times worse if your friend finds out you have been concealing your former identity from him. He will be deeply hurt by the fact that you didn’t respect his feelings enough to come out with the truth.


    There is always the possibility that the connection between the two of you grows awkward if you reveal who your past self was. However, by showing that you place such intimate trust in your friend, there is also the chance that it enables a relationship between you and the colt to grow even deeper.


    Special someponies do not keep secrets from one another if they want to maintain a blossoming partnership with one another. That is why it’s important to let your friend know about your past as soon as possible. If this colt you admire doesn’t alter his (probable) feelings for you upon finding out, then he is a guaranteed keeper!


    Love,
    Cady
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    As the ursa retreated from Tempest Shadow’s newfound rage, the creature’s growls subsided into pathetic whimpering as it became enveloped by the darkness from whence it came. When the phantasm faded completely, so did the very darkness itself! Both ponies could now see that they were actually in the middle of a small chamber, with barred doors at each end. Conveniently enough, the bars over each door lifted upward in a synchronized fashion while a faint magical chime played from an unknown source... probably a parting illusion. Either way, escape at last!


    Coming back to Sunset Shimmer, her body ached immensely from Tempest Shadow’s protective shoving. She hadn’t fully appreciated just how physically strong her partner’s body was until now. Despite the pain however, Sunset beamed with joy, for she had seen her friend taking mastery over her fear and transform it into courage. Tempest was not as weak as she supposed!


    Sunset walked up to her companion’s side; “Let’s get a move on, shall we?” She’d give Tempest the mercy of getting able to dodge a feelings chit-chat for now.....


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    “Yeaaaah, puzzle room. It was basically like a hall of mirrors designed as an escape room. Each clue you unlocked allowed your friend to move on to the next room, and so on and so on. It was kinda getting a bit tedious at the end, but we overcame that challenge, and at last it seemed like we had finally found the Nameless Wizard’s treasure room. Tons of gold and jewels and other treasures piled everywhere! Temy was just about to snag some loot for herself when, ummm... all of a sudden...”


    Sunset Shimmer didn’t seem too particularly keen on telling this next part of the story.....

     

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    “WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS?”


    An authoritative voice shouted from behind the two unicorns; each mare turned around and saw no other than Her Majesty — Crown Princess Twilight Sparkle of Equestria — staring at the two of them. She was Twilight... but not the one each girl knew. This Princess of Friendship stood as tall as Tempest Shadow did, and her mane... it flowed with the power of aether, just as it did with her predecessor. Twilight looked every bit the part of Celestia’s heiress... and she looked most displeased.

     

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    Sweating bullets, Sunset Shimmer did what no good friend was theoretically supposed to do; she LIED. “Well, there was this purple flash in the middle of the room, and you wouldn’t believe this, but remember when I told you about the Midnight Sparkle incident Over There? Well, there she seemed to be right in front of us... in pony form of course, heh eh-heh heh....!”

     

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    Following Sunburst’s lead, Sunset took a sip of the Unyasian tea. “Hmmm..... pretty good!” She set the cup down on the desk; “You know Sunburst, you should consider tracking down Mage Meadowbrook one of these days. She’s quite the expert on tea too, and I betcha’ she’s got knowledge of some special ingredients that have never been written down anywhere!” While Miss Shimmer didn’t know this for sure, it did seem highl to hery likely considering the special gift she received from the legendary healer some time ago.


    The unicorn mare let out an “Ooooooh” as the other stallion revealed his latest find. “A rune, huh?” Sunset gazed intently at the parchment; “I remember from my World Arcana class that the Viking Caribou rely heavily on runes for their magic rituals.” She briefly looked back at Sunburst; “You don’t think this rune is of caribou origin?”

     

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    ‘Yeah,” Sunset explained about the school; “But then again, you can’t really use normal teaching methods to explain Friendship, can you?”


    While Liviel was busy describing life story, Sunset noticed that a few other ponies had arrived. None of them were ponies she knew; all of them seemed like the sort of folks you’d find lurking in the background, not saying much. At least the diamond dog monk would have an attentive — if quiet — audience.


    Once Liviel finished, Sunset nodded with a knowing “Ahh.” The unicorn was ready for whatever the monk had in store this afternoon!

     

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    Hmmmm..... Sunset Shimmer wasn’t quite sure what to make of Starswirl’s latest invention yet. On the one hand, Sunset and Twilight already possessed a reliable means of interdimensional communication that’s worked out well enough for them so far. Then again, said interdimensional friendship journals also didn’t have infinite pages, and they could only display written messages. Maybe this artificed contraption had a feature which made up for its limited power supply? Only one way to find out...


    After affirmatively nodding in response to the wizard, Sunset asked; “So how do we use this device?”

     

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    "I've thought about transferring to the Friendship School more than once. It would be so cool to be educated by...well by famous ponies! And saviors of Equestria...and now you!"

     

    The filly’s exuberance earned a blush out of Sunset Shimmer. “Well, I remember the professors over at Cel-Twilight’s School were pretty top-notch too. Oh and don’t forget; if you show a really REALLY high aptitude for magic... Princess Twilight could very well take you on as her personal apprentice!” Sunset nodded and smirked; “You gotta admit she’d make an awesome teacher...”

     

    "I guess I never even thought about self defense as a form of magic to focus on. But the way you talk about it, it sounds like I've been missing out on!"

     

    “Sounds like you don’t get into many magic duels at school,” the older mare quipped; “Do you, Luster?” She quickly added a disclaimer; “That’s not to say that you SHOULD be dueling, being against the school rules and all. Not to mention the risk of serious injury when participating in unsanctioned duels!” It was here that Sunset betrayed her inner rebel with a cheeky grin and a flip of her mane; “...But I wiiiilll say I was a pretty good duelist at your age, kiddo.....”

     

    "Looks like I'm part Twilight and part Sunset as far as what I'm liking about magic!"

     

    Sunset chuckled, admitting in her mind that this kid was starting to grow on her a ton; “Heh heh, I betcha you’d be able to conjure stun rays yourself in no time!” If only the unicorn mare could go back in time and relive the sheer joy of beginning the voyage of learning the secrets of arcane magic…

     

    "I bet you got up to all kinds of fun stuff at school! What were your friends like? Do you keep in touch with them?"

     

    With this pair of questions, Sunset grew ill at ease, which was a real shame because of the good vibes she was feeling between herself and Luster up until now. “Ehhhhhhh,” Miss Shimmer grimaced as she rubbed the back of her neck; “I keep in touch with a FEW alumni who were there at the same time I was, but well... let’s just say I used to be the sort of girl who focused more on making good grades than making friends.” Sunset wasn’t quite up to the task of conveying her complete Magic School story right then and there.


    “If I had to guess though,” Sunset forced herself to smile; “You’re probably doing a better job at the whole Friendship thing than I did back then.....”

     

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    While Sunset Shimmer kept up appearances by manufacturing a friendly smile and waving back at Wind Dancer when introduced by Tempest, her heart was already experiencing a sinking feeling. Like it or not, Sunset was tagging along as a third wheel. That wasn’t entirely a new situation for the Equestrian girl; there was once a brief time when she had acted as a 6th (or 7th) wheel in her then-new friend group, just hanging back at the periphery. As a mare who wanted to feel useful... it wasn’t exactly the most pleasant of times.


    And now, Miss Shimmer by accident would now be joining an outing that was originally intended to involve only Tempest and this... Wind Dancer gal. Considering that Sunny wasn’t the invested fangirl in this VIP duo nor the designated object of fangirlism, she was already preparing herself to be regarded as little more than an afterthought for the next couple hours.....

     

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    “.....Huh.” Sunset Shimmer absent-mindendly nodded in understanding, not having a comment ready at that present time. If she understood things correctly, Prince Lián and the Empress did not share the same pair of parents as the other royal heirs. It also sounded like jealousy ran rampant in the Imperial Family. Heh, and Sunset believed her family situation was messed up!


    At the very least however, Empress Yuè could count her sibling as a loyal wingman. Sunset would have killed to known somepony like Lián during her Hope Hollow days. But alas, the past was in the past, and all this thinking about childhood pasts and siblings gave Miss Shimmer the uncomfortable remembrance that she herself had left behind a sibling who had not yet been born when the then-filly abandoned everyone and everything she once knew. Sunset wondered how that kid was holding up, what sort of pony he or she was... and whether that kiddo would have been better off with a faithful older sister by her side....?


    Sunset Shimmer quickly dismissed that thought. She herself had been a horrible filly back then; factoring in the corruptive influence of Hopelessness Magic, in all likelihood, Sunset would have been nothing more than a resentful tormentor to her younger sibling. No... the unicorn mare’s family was clearly better off without her.


    Lost to her rueful thoughts, Miss Shimmer appeared to develop a thousand-yard stare as she appeared to disconnect from her surroundings.....

     

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    “My attendant will show you to the Respected Sir’s chambers once our meeting is concluded,” the Empress informed Medo. Just as there was an official taboo against referring to the Imperial Sovereign by her name, it was tradition to always address the Chamberlain by his title or appropriate honorifics... and the current Chamberlain was a huge stickler for the Old, Venerable ways.


    With nothing else important that needed to be addressed, Empress Yuè sat up from her luxurious chair and gracefully walked over to Medo, stopping mere inches away from the unicorn. “...My meager expression of gratitude today cannot fully repay the debt I owe you,” the qilin mare placed a hoof over her heart as she stared deep into Medo’s green eyes; “If you have any request to make of me, then as long as I have the power to grant it, it shall be yours.....”

  21. 47. I never really planned on writing a lore writeup devoted to King Faba. Basically, the important guidelines to follow are that Faba is of the Lawful Evil persuasion, REALLY hates chaos, and is a dragonified take on the "First Emperor" Shi Huangdi. King Faba was active around the same time Grogar was running amok in Equestria, during the Hyponian Age. Although I haven't made it official, I've played with the idea that the Imperial Watch was essentially founded by Faba to serve as his spies and elite agents during the Tyrant King's reign of terror, and that they switched their loyalty to the Two Champions and their dynastic successors upon Faba's imprisonment.

     

    Sorry I don't have much more to provide for King Faba at this time.

    PS: Long Kong is not an actual colonial possession of Equestria's, but Princess Celestia was heavily involved in developing that land roughly a couple centuries ago into the modern metropolis it is today.

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    “Ahhh,” Sunset Shimmer nodded in understanding; “Yeah, I’m down for that. We didn’t really get into practical down-to-earth applications of the Path during Magic School. It was mainly just going over its history and yada-yada-yada... basically dry academic stuff that can be taught in classrooms.”


    With cat-like curiosity, Sunset asked the diamond dog; “So, how’d you become a monk, anyway?”

     

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    If Cadence had this straight..... Mama didn’t even remember Papa‘s name! How. Very. Lovely..... if it weren’t for the fact that Flurry Heart and Shining Armor were around, the pink alicorn would be giving her mother the biggest earful that Canterlot has ever heard. As it was, it took every inch of Cadence’s willpower to prevent herself from exploding into a ball of frustration.


    But it was all fine. Really. It was. For everypony’s sake, Cadence would wait until she and Mama were behind closed doors before venting out her aggravation over the simple fact that the daughter may never get to know a fact so minor and trivial as the identity of her very father. So no, although the princess’s thousand-yard stare looked on the verge of erupting into a furious gaze, Cadence was okay. Nothing is wrong. Nothing wrong whatsoever. Let’s just all finish watching the projector show and carry on like a normal, healthy family. Because everything was fine right now.....

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