MicCheck14

Oh I'd love to use Cloud Streaker in Flight School sounds like loads of fun

thank you for the feedback is everything ok now?

World of Equestria Name: Cloud Streaker but called Clouds by her siblings Sex: Female Age: Young Filly Species: Pegasus Eye colour: Crimson red Coat: Dusty gray with chocolate brown patches Mane/Tail: Dark blue some would say true blue with white streaks. They are both thick and her mane is pulled back into a tight ponytail that her pointed ears curve to unless shes flying then its down and loose. Her tail is long alittle to long for her small size but its not styled its just down with a natural curliness to it. Physique: Abit average height and weight wise for her age but shes also shorter than most. Cutie Mark: Shes still a blank flank. History: From the time she opened her eyes she's always been close to her older sister Mic Check. She tends to have an extra skip in her step but is also a very weak flyer. She CAN fly she just isn't very good because she prefers walking. She gets alittle better with the help of her siblings who take her flying at night outside town. She has an affinity for ribbons and other things that go in her hair that came from her mother. She has all sorts of colours but never really wears them unless its for a reason. At a young age she had a hard time seeing and often flew and walked into things. One day as it started to become a problem at school she was sad in her room. Her sister came in with a big smile and sat in front of her younger sister."It's fine Clouds. Alot of little foals cant see well. Here. These will help." The older placed a pare of light blue glasses on her face and Cloud Streaker blinked. The world had become clear and she was so excited to see clearly for the first time since she could remember! At dinner a year later her older brother announced he was leaving for Manehattan to work the next day. Mic Check was dissapointed but decided to go with him to follow her dreams. Little Cloud Streaker couldn't fathom a life with out her sister and brother and pleaded with her parents to go. The little girl played the baby girl card well, and reminded them how they left home early to follow their dreams. She wanted that same chance. After abit of negotiations they agreed, imagining there little girl could find out more about herself in a big city with more opportunities. She had promised that if she missed home, anything went wrong, or she didn't find out anything about herself she'd return home. Living with her siblings proved to be very different but they soon all adjusted and Clouds made friends in school. Her joyful personality made other happy to see her just walk by. She isn't very good at making friends for she never really ventures out of her close knit circle but those close to her are always there for her just like her siblings. She has alot of smarts and while her sister got the creativity and her brother the resourcefulness its clear she got the most brains of the three. From being in Manehattan for so long she eventually developed the accent while her siblings didn't. She tends to spew out random facts or other different sayings when silence falls since the normally bustling city life has made quiet very uncomfortable to her. Some find her shy but its just because she's timid. She loves people and goes out of her way to help others which is an admirable trait, she just cant work up the nerve to help strangers and others she doesn't know leaving her abit paranoid. Residence: She lives in Manehattan with her adult brother and sister but was born in Cloudsdale Character summary: She isn't very sure what her talent is but its clear she is very mathematically and logically inclined. She is very knit-picky with everything she does everything must be perfect and how she planned, something those around her have learned to accept. Her sisters approval is all she searches for, not knowing that her sister is so free-spirited and open minded that whatever she decides to do will be fine. She loves the soft feel and look of ribbons. From pale ones, shiny ones, old ones, new ones, she has a vast collection. She collects them for the sheer pleasure of seeing how pretty and different each one is. In her free time she reads and plays with her friends. Racing through town and practicing her flying skills. She is a very happy and giggly foal. She's abit of a math fanatic and everything in her world is in its place for a perfectly mathematical reason. She sees many things as a giant math equation in her head. Learning more and more only increases her ever growing love for the subject. Likes: She loves ribbons and listening to her older sister sing. Its calms her and helps her sleep since her brain is forever racing. She likes apple strudel and carrot cake to the point its abit of an obsession. She also loves math, the subject in general just makes her smile. Dislikes: Math problems she can't understand irritate her. If its to advanced she gets annoyed because it seems as though it questions the intelligence she possesses. She tends to frown when people are either ignorant of others or just seem to not care in the sense they hurt others for no reason. Bullying is not something she takes kindly to and will stand up for people especially her friends. She doesn't like violence and believes that everything can be solved with talking things out. Edit

Ok, i took your words into consideration and to heart and I think Mic Check is officially ready. Anything else that I should change please let me know! I would love for her to be a usable character in WoE. I enjoy constructive criticism.

I apologize! I didn't realize that the font size had changed, I hope its better now.

World of Equestria Name: Mic Check Sex: Female Age: Young Mare Species: Pegasi Eye colour: Crimson red that fades to a pale pink towards pupil Coat: Dark redish brown...sort of like a dark rust colour that she tends to keep obsessively clean since image is important to her Mane/Tail: A spiked black and purple mohawk at night she lets it fall and it covers her right eye her tail is a choppy black that is lined in purple Physique: She a slim and tall for a mare. As much as she tries shes very lanky and uncoordinated. Cutie Mark: Its a Microphone with a green check mark on it that she got as a little foal. She was a small and shy little blank flank and had signed up for a talent show, per Kickstarts request. She thought she would never get her cutie mark since she was the last one in her class. She was on stage looking down at her brother. He gave a rare smile and she took a deep breath. She began to sing a song her mother sung to her as a lullaby. As she poured her heart out into the song her voice gradually got louder and louder and she found the strength in it. She put her all into it and at the end of the song her cutie mark appeared along with the roar of applause and a first place ribbon. History:As a little foal she was so shy, barely talked and was like her brothers shadow. From an early age it was clear she had a deep rooted affection and sought comfort from her big brother. She was always humming or singing quietly to herself or to her brother when he asked. She was raised by her mother and older brother, Kickstart. They had a small little house in Cloudsdale, but frequently visited the woods outside of Ponyville to get abit of flying practice. Their mother was very supportive of her little foals and lavished them with attention while their dad was away on business dealings in Phillydelphia. Whenever her dad came home she grew more and more rebellious leading to her personality and look now. Her mother supports her creative streak but her dad...not so much. His dislike for his daughters actions and way of life was gradually accepted and her mother having another baby girl Cloud Streaker whom Mic Check affectionately calls Clouds. She loves her smart baby sister and sings her to sleep like her mum used to do for her. At the birth of a new foal she was so elated to not be the youngest and immediately made that deep connection to her new sister just like her and her brother. She soon found the house of 5 cramped and felt a yearning need to leave...but where would she go? One day her older brother got a job Manehattan, fixing things, since he was good with his hooves. The fear of losing her brother and her need to spread her wings and explore her singing talents lead her to move with him, and Cloud Streaker followed naturally. As they all left home to live together she meet other musically inclined ponies. She is with them constantly and learns from others. She is still wild and unruly but a very desperate pupil to anyone who can just get her to pay attention and deal with her. Her brother still asks her to sing for him and she still sings lullabies to her baby sister before bed. She learns so she can one day meet her goal of being the best singer in Equestria...maybe even perform for a princess one day. Residence: She lives in Manehattan but was born in Cloudsdale Character summary: Shes a little of a ditz but has a kind heart. She can be overbearing with her loud voice and not really choosing her words carefully. Shes a talented singer and excels at anything that requires a beat. Including, but not limited to beatboxing and singing soft melodies and more pop inclined music. Her motivation is lead by the smiles she sees on her siblings faces as they listen to her singing and she wants to see everypony smile when they hear her music. In her free time she can be found flying above Manehattan or walking outside town...or even in town, all you have to do is follow the voice. It's hard for her to make friends as strangers make her shy again. Her faults are her recurring shyness and her loud voice which she has a tendency to not realize as it increases in octave and strength. Her ultimate fear is losing her voice or the strength in it. She a little clumsy, constantly falling but she never lets it deter her. She gets back up and sometimes doesn't hit the ground thanks to her quick reactions with her wings. Don't let the slim build in her legs fool you. They've have got some serious muscle and kick in them. She's an 'apprentice' singer of sorts, if that's what you want to call it, performing just for her love of it and constantly learning. It's all to see others enjoying it. Likes: She loves seeing others enjoying all types of music, especially when the rare pony comes up to her and says the enjoy her music. Although such public things make her shy self return. She's very family inclined and will defend her family with everything she's got. Walking around town and hearing anything with a beat like carriages or even singing birds makes her heart soar. She enjoys sharing her fascinations with her baby sister and older brother. As odd as it also seems she loves the quiet bliss of nature. Being a Cloudsdale-born pegasi and moving to Manehattan left her yearning for the quiet of nature again. Dislikes: She dislikes those who don't appreciate family or have a good familial bond, but she appreciates different views. She is a very loving pony if you can bare with her shyness and learn to like her loudness. She absolutly detests waking up every morning to the noise of the city but refuses to leave, as annoying as it maybe she couldnt bare to leave her sister or brother and stays because of all the friends she made.

how do I sign up for WOE? I'd love to become a certified Roleplayer, but since I just got my account I'm having a hard time figuring this site out.