Azdgari
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'Twas very sad. A good idea story idea, though, and nicely executed. A story is as strong as its last sentences and this proved that. C: There's a lot of passive voice to be rooted out, though. 'was concentrating hard' vs. 'concentrated', "was standing" vs. 'stood', 'had been edging' vs. 'edged'. And a little more description of just what the moon is like would have been welcome. Good job, MLPT. Review-as-peace-offering? :]
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Why thank you! Lurv the av. ^^
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Well, I suppose that's not the end of the world. ^^
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Gosh, I need three posts?
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Hi everyone. I'm Az. I like ponies. HOW ABOUT YOU? C:
