Windwright Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 [ Pony Related Character ] Name: Chocolate Chip Gender: Male Age: Colt/teenager Species: Unicorn Pelt Color: Sandy brown Mane/Tail Color & Style: Dark brown with medium streaks highlighting them. Both mane and tail flow down and curl toward the ends. Eye Color: Brown Cutie Mark: Three chocolate chips arranged in a triangle pointing forward. Physique: A little bit on the heavy side, but nothing out of line. Residence: Cantorlot Occupation: Cook Motivation: Chip loves to cook, and ESPECIALLY to bake treats. Likes: Chocolate, Cookies, Cakes, the colour brown, Autumn Dislikes: Summer, the colour black, Fish, Mint (the flavour, not the pony) Character Summary: Chip comes from a small family that lives on the outskirts of the terrace the Avalon is built on (in fact, his father helped build the building that would eventually become the inn) so when his cutie mark showed up one day while he was baking cookies with his mother, it was a natural choice for him to work for an inn. The Avalon was the closest one hiring when his parents decided he was old enough to have a job, and he's been happy as a clown since then. He tends to have a lot more control over his magic than most unicorns his age, but that stems from the fact that he knows his limits, and mostly uses it to help him cook. When he's not working he tends to be withdrawn and timid, especially around new ponies, and both in and out of the kitchen he tends to avoid taking risks for fear of upsetting folks. This leads to him not really handling direct criticism well, even when it's honestly well-intended. He also has a bit of an eating problem that's really only kept in check by his metabolism and the long walk from the inn to his house that he takes at least twice a day (even on days off, he goes in to check on things and hang out with Mint and the other ponies usually in the Avalon.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brown Sugar Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 This looks great so far, but I think you could do with a bit more personality info. We see that he loves to cook, but how does he act when doing so, with others, what are his flaws? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windwright Posted March 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 Edited in a bit more of his personality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brown Sugar Posted March 10, 2011 Report Share Posted March 10, 2011 Perfect! Accepted C: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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