Changeling General Buzzscar [READY]

[MudBug]

Name: General Buzzscar (Buzz)

Gender: Male

Age: Stallion/Adult

Species: Changeling

Eye colour: Blue

Character colour: Chitin Black

Mane/Tail/Other: Dark Teal

Physique: Muscular

Residence: Changeling Hive

Occupation: General of Her Majesty's Elite Forces / 'Royal Guard'

Unique Traits: Noticeably more strength and resilience to magic, not making him invulnerable, but allowing him more time than his brothers and sisters of the hive would have against powerful spells. Ofcourse he isn't immune and will eventually be felled/harmed by those spells.

History:

Buzz started as a regular Changeling of the hive, absorbing love and bringing it back to the hive to the best of his abilities like the rest of his brothers and sisters. One of the older generation, he had stayed behind to train the younger generation of Changelings like the others of equal experience, taking a few youngers into the wilderness or some hardly known pony settlement and letting them immerse for one week. If any of them came back in less than a week, they'd have to start all over again.

One day, when taking his newest group of trainees to the nearest settlement of ponies - a young traveler eager to become one of Celestia's guard - had amassed a group of other young warriors who had become suspicious of the Changeling group and attempted to ward them out. Buzz took the brunt of the assault so that the younger, less experienced trainees could flee back to the hive and eventually returned. With a scar as a reminder of the encounter and a memory of just how strong pony forces can be when put into actual organisation. The scar adding more insult to injury as it carried through most of his transformations and inhibited him from doing further work in the field.

Years passed and Buzz eventually earned the name Buzzscar, using his experience as a warning to most younger Changelings as he began to organize certain groups and formations of the hive like an actual military force - a portion that could protect the Queen and the Love Harvesters should something go into disarray or they couldn't handle themselves; not that he doubted his Queen...but a lady of Royalty shouldn't be put into danger. Especially not someone as important as the Changeling Queen.

Their defeat at the wedding of Princess Cadence and Shining Armor was the straw that broke the Changeling's back, more training had been enforced under his command and, once he had pleaded enough, his Majesty's permission. Scouting parties, sentries, a smaller portion of the hive to keep the bulk and important parts of the hive safe and looked after. Buzz himself started thinking of himself as the Queen's personal protector......but only in his mind.

Character Summary/Personality:

Buzzscar is a no-nonsense and almost cruel administrator and a loyalist of the Queen to a fault, in his eyes she can do no wrong and her pit falls are only caused by other people, not by her. Time has obviously hardened him, not having the strongest sense of humor or infact any humor at all at face value - unless ofcourse it's at the sake of another person's dignity. The only person he is willing to listen to or take criticism from is his Queen or some a trusted soldier and even then, it's mostly taken with a grain of salt if it's from the latter.

Despite his venomous attitude, it's obvious that he has some amount of care for the Hive's well fare at a whole, often patrolling the hive and making sure there is nothing out of the ordinary or checking that they're well fed and that the perimeters of the hivestead haven't been breeched by any assailants; pony or otherwise. He likes things to be organised and he believes that being properly organised will prepare his troops for better protecting the Hive and Queen.

He's surprisingly hard to get angry despite talking in a constant growl, but when he is angry, it's very obvious. But it comes in very short bursts that he quickly secludes himself after to 'recover' from such a burst of passion.

[MudBug]

Touched up the profile a bit and now it's finished/ready for review and some critique/help?

[Mojo]

Hi Mudbug!

Looking this app over, I can see it is very well written! All of the required fields are filled, and it has a nice flow to it!

One minor typo I'd like to point out in this line from Unique Traits field: "Noticeably more strength and resilience to magic, not making him vulnerable" I think you meant to write 'invulerable' there.

Other than that, this app looks ready for approval!

[MudBug]

Ah yes I meant to put invulnerable!

Just edited that now, sorry. Now it's all done. ^^;

[Mojo]

Fantastic! This is a great CC app! LOVE the illustration too!

[MudBug]

Thanks, Mojo

[Bellosh]