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Gale Force (Ready)


Lux

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RP Type: World of Equestria

Name: Gale Force (or just Gale)

Sex: Female

Age: Similar age to an older filly.

Type: Griffon

Eye Color: Amber

Body Color: Her head, neck and wings have a reddish brown color similar to a red-tailed hawk while the rest of her body is colored and patterned after a Bengal Tiger.

Physique: Gale possesses a very sleek and powerful body that is a hybrid of a red-tailed hawk and a Bengal tiger. Her physical strength rivals that of an earth pony, and although she isn't as fast as a Pegasus she makes up for it with her endurance. Because of her attitude and her apex predator form this makes her a formidable creature should she be challenged.

Residency: Manehattan. Gale Force's parents own a three story brick apartment building filled with interesting tenants. Her family's home is actually in a larger apartment on the third floor where she has her own room with a skylight that allows her a great view of the sky. Near her apartment is the stairs to the roof which gives her extra space to play.

Occupation: Student

Cutie Mark: None

History: Gale Force was born in Manehattan to her loving parents. Ever since she was a mere chick her parents knew that she was going to be quite a talon-full. She would always be looking to discover new things and test the limit of her strength. This lead to quite a few things being broken and even a couple of injuries but the young Gale was quick to rebound. Life in her household was confusing at times as her parents wanted her to act more like a graceful and dignified lady rather than the tomvboy she was turning out to be. To her a fancy dress and ribbons attached to her head feathers was a fate worse than death. She saw acting lady like as a way to cage her independent self and for this reason she became very rebellious.

School life was not really better for Gale Force. With the appearance of an apex predator and her tendency to react strongly against those trying to control her, she was as a result given a bad reputation as a bully. Because of this she often spent time alone in her school whether it was eating her lunch or during recess. She often wished that she could go somewhere where there were more griffons than ponies, like this would automatically fix her life. Sure dealing with adversity made her more resilient but she lacked friends and a good image.

One teacher, however, was not so easily willing to give up on her. He told her that while she was very strong in will and physical strength she had to learn to control herself. At first she balked at this, fearing control meant part of her would be taken away. But her teacher calmly explained that she could still be known and would do better if she worked with others rather than against them. He then began to try certain techniques with her after school like teaching her to breathe deep to calm down and teaching her how to effectively respond to bullies. It wasn't in instantaneous thing, but soon she began to rebuild her reputation with her classmates. Now Gale Force looks forward to what new adventures and new friends she can meet in her urban playground of Manehattan.

Character Summary: At first glance one would assume Gale Force to be intimidating. By looks alone she is a formidable creature, and she keeps her trust close to her until she really gets to know somepony. Once a pony gets to know her though they will find a very adventurous and fun griffon who sees the city she lives in as her playground. She is fiercely protective of her friends once establishing their trust. The downside is that she tends to lash out at those she perceives as a threat, but the griffon is quick to calm herself. She loves sports and competitions and although can feel down when losing is a good sport. She loves to fly around the city, free-running, exploring new and even forbidden places, and meeting others. In all Gale is an interesting griffon to meet who wants to enjoy all life has to offer her.

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Hi Lux!

Gale Force IS ready, in my humble opinion!

Very well written app, all of the required fields are filled and this seems like a very fun character!

Well done!

:D:D:D

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