RCTwilightSparkle Posted June 23, 2012 Report Share Posted June 23, 2012 Being moved back to apps for revisions on the user's request. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales Posted June 30, 2012 Report Share Posted June 30, 2012 Is this finished? You never gave a comment that it was [Final]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoyalDice Posted June 30, 2012 Report Share Posted June 30, 2012 Oh, sorry, yes.It is final again, i should've commented on that, my bad! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted July 4, 2012 Report Share Posted July 4, 2012 As a cutie mark represents a special talent, I am wondering if not only does he like playing dice, that he is also considerably skilled at the game. This is the only area I feel could use some additional information as we are not told at present how his cutie mark relates to a special talent, just that they represent something he enjoys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoyalDice Posted July 4, 2012 Report Share Posted July 4, 2012 As a cutie mark represents a special talent, I am wondering if not only does he like playing dice, that he is also considerably skilled at the game. This is the only area I feel could use some additional information as we are not told at present how his cutie mark relates to a special talent, just that they represent something he enjoys.Ah, thanks for your input!I've added a bit of information about his cutie mark, i hope it's okay now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted July 4, 2012 Report Share Posted July 4, 2012 Looks good to me; I'll add it to the list for the final stamp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Talking to the powers that be, they asked that a few tweaks be made:Brash and stubborn, the stallion has a long lists of terrible occupations that he often wishes he hadn't done, but one thing is for certain. He will not stop doing these, until him and his mother can live back the way they used to live. The part about "terrible occupations that he often wishes he hadn't done" suggests criminal activity, and that in itself isn't the issue, it is later in the above quote where he has no moral issues with continuing such activity that likely results in purposely bringing harm to innocents. It would be much better if he regretted such activity and mentioned he would avoid any that would directly being harm (like physical harm) to anypony.It should also be made clear in his bounty hunting that he does it within the general laws of Equestria (no killing, no brutal activities, think along the lines of a modern bounty hunter).Sorry about this; hopefully with these tweaks, the application will be approved/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoyalDice Posted July 13, 2012 Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 The information regarding his job has been changed as requested, and i .. think i've added a little bit of extra info about him! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted July 13, 2012 Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 Diggin' it; I'll link it again for final approval. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brianblackberry Posted July 17, 2012 Report Share Posted July 17, 2012 Sorry about this... But they asked that this part be changed:Character Summary: Suave, cheeky and rather rude overall, Royal Dice is known to work against the rules for as long as it suits him. Often speculated to be fairly arrogant and foolish, the stallion has been known to plainly insult ponies even without doing it on purpose. When he does it on purpose, he often uses Churchill wit, ( in Equestria, referred to as Discordian wit ) a form of word play created by Discord a long time ago which consists of comparing one subject to another in a synonym of the other inside of yet another synonym. Even though his brawn is usually overlooked, he is fairly smart, yet fairly ignorant and often looks nothing more than a bitter earth pony. The issue I was told that is still there is coming up with a head canon story in regards to Discord by making him the creator of a certain word play. It is alright to call it Discordian wit and all, but it is much better to simply say it is named after Discord (with its origins being obscured and unknown). This way his image is still conjured in regards to this but it isn't directly attributed to him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoyalDice Posted July 18, 2012 Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 Alright, i've changed the Discordian wit ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armony Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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