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Name: Princess Twilight Sparkle
Gender: Mare
Age: Young mare
Species: Alicorn
Eye colour: Dark Violet
Character colour: Violet fur
Mane/Tail/Other: Straight mane and tail. It is dark blue with purple and pink lines in it
Physique: Slightly taller and slender than the average pony, but not that much in comparison.
Residence: Rainbow Friendship Kingdom castle in Ponyville
Occupation: Princess of Friendship.
Unique Traits: Twilight is skilled in magic spells since she had been studying and practicing since she was a little filly. She is also capable of adapting and learning new things easily, even if it looks hard. Twilight also loves readying and studying a lot, as well as practicing her magic.

 


Cutie Mark:

A 6 pointed purple star with 5 smaller white stars around it. It represents her friends and her need for them to unlock her full potential.

Time ago, when Twilight was just a filly, she went to see the summer sun Celebration at Canterlot and see Princess Celetia herself rise the sun on that event. Twilight was fascinated by what Celestia did and that inspire her to study magic. She spent entire days and night studying and practicing magic all she could for a really long time, until one day her parents came with the news that they enrolled Twilight into Celestia’s school for gifted unicorns. She was really exited about that, but she was not prepared for what was yet to come

She had to take a test in order to enter the school, and it was not a simple task. She had to hatch a baby dragon egg. at first, she was not able to hatch it and after a few more tries she gave up, but at that same moment, Rainbow Dash made her Sonic Rainboom and startled Twilight, making her have a sudden burst of magic. She was not only able to hatch the egg, but also transformed her parents and levitated the judges, not able to control her magic. It was not until Princess Celestia arrived and controlled the situation before she realized she now had her cutie mark

 

History:

Twilight was not born in a rich family, but neither a poor one. She had a middle class family in Canterlot city, having an older brother, Shining Armor. Twilight was never the social filly, spending a lot of time on her books and studying rather than going out, and the only social communication she had was with her family, making the bond with her brother and her family even stronger.

 

As Twilight grew older, she went to the summer celebration at the castle in canterlot and after seeing Celestia rise the sun, she got inspired to study magic. After some time, she was enrolled into Celestia’s school for gifted unicorns and after barely managing to pass the exam thanks to Rainbow’s rainboom that startled her and made her have a magic burst, Celestia offered her to be her personal student, and also hatching the one that would be her closest friend and assistant, Spike. After accepting, she almost immediately started studying under her supervision. Celestia knew she had a great potential, so she did her best to teach her what she could.

 

Years later, Twilight moved to a library in Canterlot that Celestia allowed her to so she could study all she wanted and satiate her need of readying and learning new things, but that just also made her even more antisocial than she was before, just focusing on all that big collection of books she had at her disposal. As she read the books, she found one of ancient legends, and got interested in one in particular. Nightmare Moon. She decided to leave that book in a special for later studying.

 

Years passed and one day, Celestia tasked Twilight to go to Ponyville and supervise the summer sun celebration in there. Twilight remembered that in the book she read, that day was the day Nightmare Moon would return to Equestria, and she sent a letter to warn her, but Celestia told her in response to stop reading those old books, and even tasked her a new mission in Ponyville, make some friends.

 

When she arrived to Ponyville, the first place she went was to Sweet Apple Acres and met Applejack, one of the ponies that soon would become one of her friends. She kept going around meeting other ponies that also would become her friends, that were Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie, the last one at the place she would adopt as her new home soon in a welcome Party Pinkie made for her. Later that day, when Mayor Mare was just announced the beginning of the summer sun celebration, Nightmare Moon appeared.


After she declared that the night would last forever, Twilight lead her new friends to her library, and after searching for a while, she found a book that had the story of the elements of harmony that were stored at the old castle in Everfree, then they decided to go and get them to defeat her. After passing several problems that the ponies managed to surpass and showed what element they would have, they finally reached the castle, where Nightmare Moon was waiting for them. After they got the elements and defeated Nightmare Moon and freed Luna, they became the new bearers of the elements, Twilight having the one of the element of Magic.

 

Soon after, Celestia asked Twilight to send her a letter every week of what she had learned about friendship after tasking her to stay in Ponyville and learn about it. Twilight and her friends had several adventures on Ponyville, even going to the Grand Galloping Gala in Canterlot, but after some time, the next task appeared, Discord. He was set free and Twilight and her friends had to stop him from bringing Equestria into chaos, but she and her friends managed to stop it, proving yet again why they were the bearers of the elements.
 

Months later, they were asked to help organize the wedding of Twilight’s brother, Shining armor and her old babysitter, Mi Amore Cadenca, or Princess Cadence, but it all ended up being a ruse from the changeling empire that they kidnapped the real princess and took her place in order to invade Canterlot. This time, Twilight and her friends were not the ones that stopped her, but Shining’s and Cadence’s love magic the one that made it.

 

Not so long after the wedding, an old kingdom, the crystal empire, appeared on the north of Equestria, and Celestia sent Twilight and her friends to help Cadence and Shining help defend it from King Sombra. When they arrived and investigated, Twilight started looking for the Crystal heart while her friends kept entertained the crystal ponies, and at the end, Spike was the one that saved the crystal empire by saving the crystal heart from shattering as it fell.

 

A few months later, Celestia sent a letter to her in her library telling her that she needed her help to finish a spell that Star Swirl the bearded never finished, saying that she was up to the task. After accidentally reciting it, the cutie marks of her friend swapped, but she managed to help them get their cite marks back by showing them their real talents and soon, the elements chose her and fired beams to her. After a white flash, she appeared with Celestia, where she told Twilight she had accomplished great things, and she had won the honor of becoming and Alicorn and the princess of Friendship.

 

A few days later, the everfree forest attacked Equestria and took prisoner the Princesses, Twilight went on with her friends to stop it. After figuring out with the help of Discord and a potion that Zecora gave her what was that happening and a possible lead, they went to the forest to stop it. When they arrived, her friends convinced her to go back, and after she did that she had a talk with Discord, she knew it was a bad choice to leave them, then rushed back to them.


Once in the deep parts of the forest, they found the tree of harmony, where the elements of harmony were once there, then gave the elements back to the tree to control the forest and bring it back to normal and freeing the princesses, then they figured out why it happened. Soon after that, a small box appeared in front of the tree with six key wholes, and they wondered what it was, but they decided to investigate later and carry on with her lives. One day, when she went to read some of the books of the old castle of the two sisters, she found a book that had the records of things the princesses made, and agreed with her friends to do the same in the book, writing things they had learned about the magic of friendship.

 

As days passed, certain events happened that made her friends get certain objects from ponies they managed to change their point of view according to their element, all except Twilight.

 

Time passed, and one day Celestia got reports of ponies getting their pony magic drained, and soon realized it was an ancient creature that escaped from Tartarus. Tyrek. Celestia called Twilight and made a plan, in which she, Luna and Cadence gave her their Alicorn magic so she could remain hidden. Soon after, she found out what the box in the tree meant and she went for her friends to get the objects they had collected, but one was missing.
One from Twilight. Later, she confronted Tyrek since he made prisoner her friends, but surrendered to him when he threaten her to harm them if she kept fighting. Tyrek let them go, and Discord, being betrayed by him, gave Twi a necklace as a token of their friendship, and she knew it was the last key they needed. She then lead them to the box and opened it, getting new powers they used to defeat Tyrek, save Equestria and get a new castle in Ponyville, but looking her old home thanks to Tirek when he attacked Ponyville.

 

Time after she got her castle, in the main room was a table with several chairs with the elements of she and her friends, but the table was actually a map that showed her where in equestrian help was needed from them, making new and exciting adventures to she and her friends, going to different places like a town where the cutie marks were being removed, and even sending her friends out of equestria itself.

 

The firsy location the map showed her was a small town where the cutie marks of the ponies were being taken by a mare called Starlight Glimmer. 

With the help of her friends, Twilight was able to free the town, but Starlight escape from them.

Soon after that, the map kept sbowing places she or her friends needed to go, as well as she helping other ponies in several ocations, but one day, Starlight Glimmer returned with a plan to take revange on the princess.

Starlight finished and used one of Starswirls's spells to travel back in time and make Dashie mever make her sonic Rainboom so she and her future friends never get her cutie marks, but Twilight went with her to try to stop her, but failed every time she tried to stop her, and every posible future was worst than the last one, as she and her friends were never able to stop evil. It was not until she showed Starlight what would happen that she stopped and decided to ask Twilight for help, the two soon becoming friends and Starlight her new student, just like Celestia and Twilight were long ago

Who know what exciting adventures they will have in the future, only time will tell…

 

 

 


Character Summary:

Twilight is one of the four alicorn princesses in al Equestria, she being the princess of friendship. She is a nerdy pony, but really friendly and loves to learn new things every day, as well as study hard to achieve her goals, but also accepts the help of her friends to get there.

 

She had an older brother, Shining armor, who is married to Princess Cadence, her old babysitter from when she was just a filly, who also is niece of Princess Celestia herself, the mentor of Twilight when she studied in Canterlot and her studies on friendship.

 

Twilight is really skilled when it comes to the use of magic, being one of the most talented and powerful magic users in the modern era, perhaps even since Celestia herself was born, but is hard to tell. Even though that, she has a really high level of potential that became even more powerful when she became an alicorn, that boosted her powers even more, and finally with the help of her friends she can become way more powerful thanks to the spirits of the elements of harmony being inside her and her friends.

 

Even though she is now a princesses and has to deal with all the duties a princess must do, she still has the time to spend time with her friends and help around Ponyville with any problem they have, as well as have time to read her favorite books and study magic when she can.

 

When it comes to clothing, she rather have a more simple design than a stylish one, since she likes being organized and have something that fits her because of that rather than having something really ornamented on her. She is also not that skilled when it comes to flying, but she does her best even if she finds it hard for her to do, but with the help of Rainbow Dash she managed to do it properly, not fast, but enough for her to move around all she needs.

 

She now lives at the castle in ponyville that the box gave her when she opened it to defeat Tyrek. She felt that the castle was lonely since it was quite big just for her and her assistant, Spike, but with the help of her friends, they managed to make it feel like home for her.

 

 

 

 

 

Personality:

 

Twilight is a nerdy pony but really friendly and cheerful, always trying to do her best to surpass any obstacle she might encounter, as well as how much she loves her family. She also likes meeting new ponies and spending time with her friends, study hard and read books in her free times, daring do being one of her favorites. She is also capable of learning new things easily and adapting to the situation better, but she was not always like this-

 

When she was just a filly, she was almost the complete opposite to that. She was really closed, antisocial and just spent time reading and studying, but all that changed when she arrived to Ponyville and met her friends.

 

 

 

Rp Prompt

The sun came through the window that morning, illuminating the room of the Princess of Friendship, Twilight Sparkle. She was snoring in her bed, and the light of the sun soon reached her eyes, making her mumble something in her sleep as she slowly sat up on her bed and looked outside.


"I-is it morning already?" She asked sleepily with a yawn as she got off her bed, then rolled of it lazily. She barely had any time to sleep as she had been working really hard to get ready the next summer sun celebration in Ponyville. In normal circumstances, she would have everything ready by this point, but Ponyville had been attacked several times by different creatures and monsters over the past few days, and the progress had been pushed back several times thanks to that, and now she was in a hurry. What would she do?! She had been sleeping late the past couple of days to plan and try advance all she could, but she still wouldn't have enough time for that!
If she hated one thing, was being late to something. She was obsessed with perfection, although she knew that and knew when to control it. Still, when it came to events this big... she had to hurry, or else, the celebration would be canceled!


There was just one thing she could do. She quickly jumped off her bed and hurried to her bathroom. She took a bath quickly and got herself ready before heading to the kitchen to have some breakfast with Spike.
Soon after, she hurried out of her castle into the town. What was her plan? It was easy. She was going to ask help around ponyville! But to whom? She could ask her friends, but they were busy as well with their own jobs for the  celebration, and many other ponies she knew were busy as well with other jobs. She would have to improvise something... something she didn't excelled at, but she had came up with better plans over time, so she knew she could do it!


She walked over to the town hall and having a small chat with the town mayor, she got ready to give a small announcement to the ponies, not the ones that lived there, but the ones that came to visit or were not working.
"Attention, residents of Ponyville and visitors!" she soon started saying so the ponies around the town gathered to hear her speak... which gathered quite fast. "As you may know, tomorrow we will Celebrate the summer sun celebration, but we are behind schedule!" She added as the group became bigger and bigger slowly. Who wouldn't want to hear a princess though?
"I am going to be hiring ponies to help with the preparations as we are late for it! Anypony interested please report to my castle. Anyone that wishes to help is welcome! We are desperately in need of extra hooves to work." She finally added before rushing to her castle. This way, ponies that wished to help would be able to join... she just hoped this would attract some ponies...

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Hi! I've given this a review for you!

You've got all the info you need here. It is a pretty detailed account of Twilight's history. Good job!

Basically you just need to give this another read through as there are quite a few typo's. There are also some run on sentences especially in the cutie mark section. Go ahead and give those a fix up as it's difficult to RP when sentences are not structured correctly. 

Lastly, if you could take out some of the extra spaces between paragraphs and get this all in the same size and font that would be fantastic.

Once this is done I'll be ready to recommend this for a second review. Let me know when you've made the edits :)

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On 23/4/2016 at 7:20 PM, RainbowPony said:

Hi! I've given this a review for you!

You've got all the info you need here. It is a pretty detailed account of Twilight's history. Good job!

Basically you just need to give this another read through as there are quite a few typo's. There are also some run on sentences especially in the cutie mark section. Go ahead and give those a fix up as it's difficult to RP when sentences are not structured correctly. 

Lastly, if you could take out some of the extra spaces between paragraphs and get this all in the same size and font that would be fantastic.

Once this is done I'll be ready to recommend this for a second review. Let me know when you've made the edits :)

Did my best in that. I hope it is fine now.

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Since this is a Mane 6 cast character, you'll have to answer this final RP prompt before we can stamp your Twi app:

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How can you make the character unique, interesting, and expand on them beyond what we've seen in FiM? What happens after the episode ends? That is a question cast players are asked to answer. For your RP prompt, please give us a short example of the character doing what they do best. Be as creative and detailed as possible, and play them how you would in a live, opening roleplay. Be sure to finish your prompt with an opening for another character to realistically reply.

 

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8 hours ago, RainbowFoxxy said:

How's this app coming along? Need more time for the RP response? :)

I am working on it, but slowly.

Finals are soon and I dont have that much time for it. 

More time would be appreciated, thank you

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(The prompt will be also added to the very bottom of the app)

(finally did it!)

The sun came through the window that morning, illuminating the room of the Princess of Friendship, Twilight Sparkle. She was snoring in her bed, and the light of the sun soon reached her eyes, making her mumble something in her sleep as she slowly sat up on her bed and looked outside.


"I-is it morning already?" She asked sleepily with a yawn as she got off her bed, then rolled of it lazily. She barely had any time to sleep as she had been working really hard to get ready the next summer sun celebration in Ponyville. In normal circumstances, she would have everything ready by this point, but Ponyville had been attacked several times by different creatures and monsters over the past few days, and the progress had been pushed back several times thanks to that, and now she was in a hurry. What would she do?! She had been sleeping late the past couple of days to plan and try advance all she could, but she still wouldn't have enough time for that!
If she hated one thing, was being late to something. She was obsessed with perfection, although she knew that and knew when to control it. Still, when it came to events this big... she had to hurry, or else, the celebration would be canceled!


There was just one thing she could do. She quickly jumped off her bed and hurried to her bathroom. She took a bath quickly and got herself ready before heading to the kitchen to have some breakfast with Spike.
Soon after, she hurried out of her castle into the town. What was her plan? It was easy. She was going to ask help around ponyville! But to whom? She could ask her friends, but they were busy as well with their own jobs for the  celebration, and many other ponies she knew were busy as well with other jobs. She would have to improvise something... something she didn't excelled at, but she had came up with better plans over time, so she knew she could do it!


She walked over to the town hall and having a small chat with the town mayor, she got ready to give a small announcement to the ponies, not the ones that lived there, but the ones that came to visit or were not working.
"Attention, residents of Ponyville and visitors!" she soon started saying so the ponies around the town gathered to hear her speak... which gathered quite fast. "As you may know, tomorrow we will Celebrate the summer sun celebration, but we are behind schedule!" She added as the group became bigger and bigger slowly. Who wouldn't want to hear a princess though?
"I am going to be hiring ponies to help with the preparations as we are late for it! Anypony interested please report to my castle. Anyone that wishes to help is welcome! We are desperately in need of extra hooves to work." She finally added before rushing to her castle. This way, ponies that wished to help would be able to join... she just hoped this would attract some ponies...

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