Qirai Hibana [Final]

[Kindheart]

Qirai

Name: Qirai Hibana [Hibana Qirai]
Sex: Female
Age: Young-Mare - Around early university age.
Species: Ryuma [Longma - Neighpon Descent]
Eye-Color: Light green going from (#b3ffb3) to (#e6ffe6)
Coat: Silver (#d9d9d9) with pale-green scales and hooves (#b3ffb3)
Mane/Tail: Cerulean-Sky Blue (#66a3ff) for the mane, with brown (#604020) horns native of her species on her head.  Her tail is the same cerulean as her mane until the tip where it's the same light green as her eyes and scales.  
Physique: Bulky, yet aerodynamic.  Her tail is extremely long and slender, which makes it easy for her to wrap around her torso when flying under the maglev rails.  
Residence: Lives in a small home underneath the maglev rails in Polohama, Neighpon, for easy repairs.  
Occupation: Maglev Repair mare in-training/Student
Cutie Mark: Maglev Front-car, streaks behind it.  
 
Unique Traits:
Breath Magic: As a Ryuma, she is born with an innate draconic-style breath magic.  As a member of the Hibana clan, her breath focuses on the chidori-style (aka Lightning breath), though she can do basic flame breath (hono-style) for simple maglev repairs.  
Maglev Repair: The Maglev trains are one of the greatest inventions after made in the world, let alone in the great city of Polohama.  Well, at least that's what one young repair-mare would say if asked about them.  She still attends the prestigous Polohama Institute of Maglev Advances, focusing on the repair of the rails.  In fact, the repairs can make use of either the heat of the flame breath along with the magnetic properties of the lightning breath.  

 

History:
Qirai was born as the next head of the family to the prestigous Hibana clan, born in the heart of one of Ryushima's oldest villages.  Her parents were ready to move into one of the neighboring larger cities when she was rather young, given that Ryushima probably didn't have the best education around, along with the safety problems of being out in the middle of nowhere.  The choice was second-guessed on their trip, set on hoof, down to the bustling city of Polohama.  It was only intended to be a short stop before continuing to move on towards Kyoma, but the young filly Qirai was fascinated by the Maglev trains roaring past above her.  She did however notice that one of the support beams had a sizable crack in it, so it basically was second nature for her to try and help.  After taking in a deep breath, and before her parents could stop her, she blew the hottest flame breath she could.  That not only resulted in the beam's crack getting temporarily repaired, it also caused her to emit sparks from her mouth as the breath died down.  She was exhausted from that, collapsing in her parent's hooves.  Waking up in a first aid station of one of the nearby maglev stops, they were...curious at the very least on how she did that for such a young ryuma.  Now, she couldn't really...talk very well for a good 2 to 3 hours after such a heated breath, but if she could've made noise, she would've screamed for joy when she pulled the covers off, to reveal her shiny new cutie mark.  
It didn't take long after that for the Hibana family to decide to settle down in Polohama (...mainly due to Qirai's little stunt making the rail company want to keep a close eye on her) and, ignoring those beginning years, her pre-adult life was rather...boring.  She graduated primary school early, so she started attending PIMA early, and she still attends classes to this day, working part-time as a repair-mare to not only earn an income, but to also hone her skills for when she can finally obtain a repair station of her own.

 

Character Summary: Quick to react and even quicker to action, Qirai is one Ryuma you do not want to cross.  She lives in Polohama and still attends classes when not working as an apprentice repair-mare in one of Polohama's various repair stations.  

 

 

[RainbowFoxxy]

Hi! This is looking good! I like how you have developed this character and her job is rather interesting. 

 

I noticed that you haven't filled out the Unique Traits section. 

 

Also, please change your title to ready [Ready] after your character's name.  

 

Let me know here when you've made some adjustments. 

[Kindheart]

The "Unique Traits" Section is separated into the two sub-sections detailing the history with her breath magic and her maglev repair skills.

[RainbowFoxxy]