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A Journey through Memories [Incomplete/Cancelled]


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I've sent the first 2+1 chapters to EQD (still being pre-read), but I want editors for chapters after that.

Links (Google Docs format - no sign-in):


Chapter One

Chapter Two

Chapter Three

Chapter Four

Chapter Five

Chapter Six

Chapter Seven

Chapter Eight

Any advice, and please PM me; I'll get back to you on that.

Thanks in advance for your help!

EDIT: Mild coarse language; most of it's been ponified.

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How long til Chapter Four?  So far, I see no problems with spelling or grammar (my nitpicks in fanfics is the spelling and grammar issues!) and I love how you ponified the curse words.  There are none visible, which makes this great for kids to read (sorta.  The violence isn't geared for kids, but that's the least of the problems and it's definitely an element of intrigue!)

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Do you need another proofreader or editor? :)

I certainly would, but after writing up to Chapter Nine and onwards, it's becoming too Grimdark for canterlot.com (no longer a PG-13 rating). I'm really sorry, but I'll have to close this thread down. If you want to keep reading the story, it's here on FIM Fiction, all 12+1 Chapters written so far.

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