ThatOneBrony

Midnight Moon was mesmerized by the huge battle, but he was wise to stay out of the conflict between the prince and his attacker. He just sat there in the shadows, just watching the battle unfold between the two.

Midnight Moon, weary and thirsty from his training in The Howling Mountains with the monks, was treading along as he found a small and quiet village. It was around midnight and he needed a place to stay. "Oh my, a village. I hope there's an Inn around here somewhere. I'm thirsty.." Said the Unicorn with a parched mouth. He continued to delve into the village as he came across an Inn, The Grey Dragon. "Wonderful. I could use a nice pint right now.." Midnight Moon quietly walked in the Inn. The Inn was quiet, with nopony around but the Innkeeper, who greeted him. "Aye welcome sir. Can I get ya' anythin'?"Asked the Innkeeper. "Get me a pint please.. I certainly need one." The Innkeeper patiently set up a pint for the weary looking Unicorn, who then quietly drank it. At one point he noticed somepony come down the stairs and leave, one that he would never expect to be in an Inn. The one who is known as Prince Silvan Dragoran. Midnight Moon was now confused. He whispered to himself. "Prince Dragoran? What could he possibly be doing at an Inn at this time? And shouldn't he be protected before leaving for somewhere?" The Unicorn finished off his pint and paid for it. He was curious as to what the prince was doing and decided to spy on him. "Take me to what you're up to, Silvan." Thought the sneaky Unicorn. Cautiously and Quietly, he follows the prince and sticks to the quiet shadows of the village, where he didn't have to wait long until he overhears the prince talking about a mysterious pony he was looking for. Midnight Moon gasped. He again whispered to himself. "So.. The prince is searching for a mysterious pony.. And who would tha-" He was cut off whenever he saw a mysteriously dangerous looking pony come out of nowhere and was confronting the prince. "Where on earth is Silvan's guard?" The unicorn questioned himself. Whatever was about to happen, Midnight Moon was about to be caught in the middle of it..

Alright now, here's the new and improved character. hopefully this is better.. Name: Pheladonius, or later known as Midnight Moon Sex: Male Age: Stallion Species: Unicorn Nationality: Coltara Organization: The Forerunners Eye color: Silver Coat color: Dark grey, with white slashes everywhere on his body Mane/ Tail: Black and white Physique: Medium height and healthy Cutie Mark/Destiny Mark: A shooting star, which can be spotted on his chest. It appeared when he defeated his teacher in a Baraki magic battle. He is well known for it in Ashen Gate. Origin/Residence: He was born in the outskirts Ashen Gate, and later lived in Ashen Gate Occupation: Sage of the Moon Personality: Wise and reasonable with a long history of Depression. Often tries to stay happy, but becomes depressed when bad memories are brought to his mind and shuts the world out when it happens. A force to be reckoned with when angry, he even injured a civilian out of blind rage. He also is a bit insane from the continent’s poisoned magic Family: Has a brother, but has an unknown location. He Became an orphan along with his brother at 5 years of age. His brother set off on adventure when he was at the age of 15,and was later never to be found again. Background story: Pheladonius was born into a poor and secluded Unicorn family in the outskirts of Ashen Gate and had a twin brother. Everyone in his family, except his twin brother, had died of a terrible disease when he was only 5 years old. Shortly after the incident, he and his twin brother were shipped off to a run down orphanage. Conditions at the orphanage were horrifying. Everything was dirty and tattered, and all of the food was either moldy or stale. Pheladonius’ and his brother were often hated by the other orphans, so the two brothers only had each other. Peladonius’ brother , when he was 15 years old, decided it was time to leave the orphanage and become an adventurer. So the adventurous brother left the orphanage without turning back, and he was never seen again. Pheladonius, at the age of 18, was forced out of his orphanage. He was an adult now, and he had to start his own destiny. He traveled to The Moontree to train in with the Baraki and learn their specific magic. He trained long and hard, and became very talented with his magical powers. He even learned a special healing spell for when he or others were hurt. He had become so talented, that his teacher was starting to feel challenged by Pheladonius. The teacher then challenged the student to a battle of Baraki magic. The battle went on for a long time, but in the end the student won, and had then received his Destiny Mark, a shooting star, and a new name, Midnight Moon. The newly named Midnight Moon then realized he had become a master of special magic. He then later joined The Forerunners, and became a devoted Forerunner at that. He now lives at the lap of power and isn’t afraid to stop a battle with his magic if he must.

Hello Valence, I have made my new character. Here he is: Name: Pheladonius, or later known as Midnight Moon Sex: Male Age: Stallion Species: Unicorn Nationality: Coltara Organization: The Forerunners Eye color: Silver Coat color: Dark grey, with white slashes everywheree on his body Mane/ Tail: Black and white Physique: Medium height and healthy Cutie Mark/Destiny Mark: A shooting star, which can be spotted on his chest. It appeared when he defeated his teacher in a Baraki magic battle. He is well known for it in Ashen Gate. Origin/Residence: He was born in Golden mane, but was shipped to Ashen Gate to learn Baraki magic when he was a young Colt. He has continued to live in Ashen Gate from that point on. Occupation: Baraki Archmage Personality: Wise and reasonable with a long history of Depression. Often tries to stay happy, but becomes depressed when bad memories are brought to his mind and shuts the world out when it happens. A force to be reckoned with when angry, he even injured a student out of blind rage. Family: Has a brother, but has an unknown location. He Became an orphan along with his brother at 5 years of age. His brother was adopted shortly after and was never seen again. Background story: Pheladonius was born into a prosperous Unicorn family in the outskirts of Golden Mane and had a twin brother. Everyone in his family, except his twin brother, had died of a terrible disease when he was only 5 years old. Shortly after the incident, he and his twin brother were shipped off to a run down orphanage. Conditions at the orphanage were horrifying. Everything was dirty and tattered, and all of the food was either moldy or stale. Pheladonius’ brother was shortly adopted into a wealthy Unicorn family and was never seen again (This is where the depression started.) Peladonius , when he was 7 years old, was then shipped off to Ashen Gate because the Head Mistress had of his old orphanage had died of old age. Pheladonius was then adopted by a Mage, who also became his teacher, and was instituted into a Baraki magic school, where he continued to live and learn Baraki magic until he was a young Stallion. He became the most talented Baraki Mage in his school, so much that his teacher had challenged him to a battle. The battle was long and intense, but Pheladonius had defeated his teacher. He then received his destiny mark, a shooting star, and earned the new name, Midnight Moon. He later abandoned the Baraki magic College and became incorporated with The Forerunners, who had accepted him as a brother and a friend. He has continued to live his life as a devoted Archmage and Forerunner and lives in the lap of power and is not afraid of anyone who gets in his way.