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The only hangup I have on this application is the mention of age as a number. I understand where you're going wiht it and what you mean by it, but I'd simply suffice with 'Older Colt' and leave it at that. Or 'Young Stallion' since he has his cutie mark, either would work fine.

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The only snag I've hit here, is the name of the town he comes from. You spell it 'Hufenheim' which I recognize as a more Germanic spelling. However, on the map it -is- spelled 'Hoofenheim'. Correcting this but adding something like 'Origin: Hoofenheim (Locally called Hufenheim by its residents)' would be more appropriate for this. If you could make that change, I think that'd just about do it!

Also, please be sure to verify the relationship with Quicklime and if you could, have her make a post about it here.

The only hangup on this app is 'Administrator of The Manehattan Golf Club'. We're trying to steer people away from assuming lofty positions such as head honchos of incredibly prominent organizations or leaders or anything that could very easily be contracted from the show, reserving these roles for the potential appearance of potential cast members. However, if this was changed to 'Administrator of a Prominent Manehattan Golf Club', this would be fine as it's possible there are several. That way, even if it appears in the show and someone claims there to be 'The Administrator of The Manehattan Golf Club' we can still use this because in that instance, we can claim that the character in the show is merely bragging. It's easier to work backwards from that, than to turn around and Retcon a contradicting application.

That goes for the 'largest department store' in Manehattan. This should be changed to 'One of the largest department stores'. As it is possible there are several, this also allows for any possibility of contradiction from the show to be more easily remedied.

Even though there is mention of Twilight, I would imagine being two classes behind would be ample time for her to hear about and learn about the events that took place, so I think this will be allowed.

Well done. This is precisely how Hippogriffs are supposed to work.