Nasty

I'm in the need for a sad fanfic. Already read Bittersweet.

My new avatar is secksie. Jus' sayin'.

I see. Well, I'll grab your story and edit it for you. I'm happy to help other writers. Now, I won't change how it's written, but I'll fix misspelled words and pop in some paragraphs, alright? Would you like me to list the changes I made and why? Expect it tomorrow or the day after, I might be leaving soon. That is if you want me to. if I'm invading then by all means tell me.

No fair. I already pulled off the age-old C-C-C-Combo Breaker.

C-C-C-Combo Breaker is the best meme ever. It is used to completely ruin a chain of events. In this case, people kept posting vehicles. I decided to have fun with memes. Memes are fun.

No one likes that meme anymore D:?

Hey yo guys check out mah sweet ride C-C-C-Combo Breaker.

Tell them NastyMann, the emperor of the Empire of Nasty Mann, says 'they r liek dumb n'stuff'

D: Do not feel glum Sulvuss. Your art will forever be accepted by us. They hath no taste to reject your amazingly dark artwork.

Alright. I read the prologue thus far, I'll get to the first chapter afterward. For starters, I really like the characters. I enjoy not always having a likable good guy protagonist. The story line is rather nice, you have something going here. Grammar is another thing. I do realize that no one gets it perfect, but there's a lot of mistakes that can be fixed. Paragraphing is another thing, while you have some, you aren't paragraphing... correctly. Remember, you make a new paragraph whenever someone speaks as well. Fix up these issues and this story will really shine. Good job so far.

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Ah yes, your review. I'm a nub at it, so here goes: Your story thus far has an interesting story line. You have passed the first test: I wanted to find out more. You are keeping the Mane Six well in character, Pinkie Pie made me lul at times, I also liked your Cupcakes reference. Sort of like what Normandy said when it comes to how it was made, but my suggestion is make it more subtle. Make it so that we know what you're talking about, the more subtle, the more humorous. As far as grammar goes everything is spelled correctly, it's more for the other side, it's hard to explain, but it didn't take away from the reading experience. All in all you're doing well, and keep up the good work.

I am a troll, so I cannot succumb to rage or feeling insulted . And even if he honestly felt that, all the review will do is make my story better.

I'm glad you read it. I lol'd at what you said abou Josef, and the story isn't really meant to be taken as a drama. But thank you for reading.

That's probably the toughest part about reviewing, not trying to sound mean.

LOLDERP

Angie Cakes, yes. Just yes. Well, I propose we all help each other. Everyone read each other's. Colton, tell me when you finish your story's next chapter. Everyone else who has a story or part of one that they wish to be read and reveiwed unprofessionally, gimmie. Also, hurry, because I'm leaving in a half an hour or less. Expect reviews tomorrow. It'd be nice if you'd review my stor-- Hell, I'll quit damaging my pride and ask plainly, would someone if you have a while, read my wall of text in my signature?

Was that becuz of nastywasty? I doubt it but nonetheless, let us rejoice! What I think everypony (it felt so right saying that) needs is a review person/station/thread/everyonejustrevieweachother'sstoriesforthelulz. Something that'll kick writing into shape. Because we all want people to read our stories, but we don't want to prance around and burden people to read it because it's a thirty-some page story that no one has the time to read (my situation) But who would be up to such a task?

I love everyone.

I made a GrimDark MLP Fanfic. I'm debating on whether or not I should upload. I was in a bad place when I made that...

NASTY'S BACK TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLO That's been the hundreth time I said that. Just you watch, I'll be gone again. But, I finished 'The Brony'. Yay for me. Speaking of stories and whatnot, Conor Colton, you wouldn't have happened to add anymore to your story, would you?

I pushed my father into the snow today. Snow went all down his back, and he pathetically fell into it. i don't know why, but all I could say was "like a baws." The reason as to why is amusing.

Ehe. If only I could. Alas, schoolwork likes me too much.

I only wish to be here more often.