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Time for your daily dose of Nasty. Sadly you haven't had your daily dose for I've been away with homework and all that shiz. lolnastymerryfreakin'christmas
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I'll read it. I enjoy reviewing people's stories. What would you say to... a swap... A trade in stories. You review my story, I'll review your's.
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That's fine. I don't really get what you mean. I comprehend the you're too busy, because frankly I've been swamped in homework and I can relate, but I don't get what you meant by different style from your bulk. You mean the genre, or font style?
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HOORAH! Finally received a reply on my story. It's been so long. Nonetheless, I'm winning, and a review to keep my motivation going would be ever-so lovely. If there are any reviewers among us who'd like something to do, feel free to check out my story: http://www.canterlot.com/topic/3603-the-brony-chapter-five-added/page__pid__72711#entry72711 Also: Winning
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It'd be grand if someone could give me feedback on my story, but sadly it's rather long. It's roughly 17 pages. EDIT: May you find your muse Fawkes and good luck with your story, Conor. I'm happy I could help.
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Hoorah. Hopefully my post can inspire people to give me feedback. Sadly, on my thread, I've been: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ny5qIH7v1SQ
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UGH, DEFEATED MY WRITER'S BLOCK AND GOT THE NEXT CHAPTER OF MAH STOREHHHHH. And I'm winning.
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Finally, the fifth chapter. Have no idea if anyone was actually waiting for it, but it's up. Please, please give me some feedback, it's awfully desolate. I wnat to become a better writer, so constructive criticism is very appreciated.
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Winning.
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No problem. I feel the same way because I posted my story here on the Writing Discussion and got a review from someone. It appears as though I've received a lovely number of views, but, no reviews. So, when's the next chapter? I must depart now, so PM me once you're finished. I love being politely pushy.
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That was rather lovely. The only bad I really found is some I's that need to be capital, or some accidental spaces, simple typos. I almost always make them, the annoyance of messing up one simple key always gets me. Some sentences could be revised, but it doesn't hinder the reading experience. The plot is pretty grand, I rather like it. You used a very nice vocabulary, which added to the humor and description. I hope to see some more All in all, it was great.
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Thank you. What would you like me to critique? I can fix up grammar, plot, or anything else. of course, along with that, every critic should remember to say what's good about it. From the first few paragraphs it's already rather nice. I love the idea.
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Well you know what you must do? Link me, for, 1. I'm much too lazy to find it myself (sawwy) 2. I must give you some feedback. Also, when it comes to feedback, there's a way to go about it. If it's constructive criticism, it can be tough, but literally take what they said was wrong with it, and implement it. Unless it's something like "need moar dragons." As for proofreading, I cannot proofread my own work. I will never notice the mistakes. However, I can proofread someone else's. So. Link. Nao.
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Depression is a writer's worst nightmare. That, and homework.
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You saying that entices us to know what it is.
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Sure. I have no ideas for I'm having a writers block. For the past month. I feel as though people are counting on me to update the story, but I didn't really have any feedback. Possibly your idea on whatever would help me come up with something.
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I was saying it in sadness. Interwebs and their tone-proofness. Damn it all.
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No one loves Sheen.
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Hello thar. Welcome, come bask in our citizens' secksieness.
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Dungeons of Dredmor is taking away my life. And I accept it.
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Really? That's too bad. I searched it and I came up with something a bit similar but it was to do with the Yogscast using it.
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Thith ith thuper pwnage. http://www.brohoof.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=22&t=1558
