Nasty

Winning.

No problem. I feel the same way because I posted my story here on the Writing Discussion and got a review from someone. It appears as though I've received a lovely number of views, but, no reviews. So, when's the next chapter?

I must depart now, so PM me once you're finished. I love being politely pushy.

That was rather lovely. The only bad I really found is some I's that need to be capital, or some accidental spaces, simple typos. I almost always make them, the annoyance of messing up one simple key always gets me. Some sentences could be revised, but it doesn't hinder the reading experience. The plot is pretty grand, I rather like it. You used a very nice vocabulary, which added to the humor and description. I hope to see some more All in all, it was great.

Thank you. What would you like me to critique? I can fix up grammar, plot, or anything else. of course, along with that, every critic should remember to say what's good about it. From the first few paragraphs it's already rather nice. I love the idea.

Well you know what you must do? Link me, for, 1. I'm much too lazy to find it myself (sawwy) 2. I must give you some feedback. Also, when it comes to feedback, there's a way to go about it. If it's constructive criticism, it can be tough, but literally take what they said was wrong with it, and implement it. Unless it's something like "need moar dragons." As for proofreading, I cannot proofread my own work. I will never notice the mistakes. However, I can proofread someone else's. So. Link. Nao.

Depression is a writer's worst nightmare. That, and homework.

You saying that entices us to know what it is.

Sure. I have no ideas for I'm having a writers block. For the past month. I feel as though people are counting on me to update the story, but I didn't really have any feedback. Possibly your idea on whatever would help me come up with something.

I was saying it in sadness. Interwebs and their tone-proofness. Damn it all.

No one loves Sheen.

Hello thar. Welcome, come bask in our citizens' secksieness.

Your avatar is quite intriguing along with your responses.

Dungeons of Dredmor is taking away my life. And I accept it.

Really? That's too bad. I searched it and I came up with something a bit similar but it was to do with the Yogscast using it.

Thith ith thuper pwnage. http://www.brohoof.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=22&t=1558

I never used that; it wouldn't allow me to be Nasty enough. Shame it isn't working, I'm having similar troubles with the Mine Little Pony Mod. Won't make my pony skin right. Sad day.

Likewise. Steam is the closest passage to my heart Well, no, it's a simple tactic to remind me to come back and keep up with all of your ever-so entertaining posts.

But you avatar's leaving, right?

lolno. I shall also be uploading Nasty's Art. Sadly, the skin code never works for me so not only can I not think up a better title for my story, but I cannot link my Art page either. Shame.

That post was incredibly confusing. I was meaning how I said I was back another time and never posted again. Nasty is never leaving anyone's side again

If only.

I'm back! After a month of leavership (pwnage word) I finally managed to return. I dunno how many of you are actually reading this, but, I'm starting up this again. Schoolwork's been hectic.

BLAH! I say I'm back and then have to leave again. I love you secksie chums. Srsly broz. Well. Yeah. Winnin'.

Your avatar has a ravishing mane.