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The Name Made Me Rofl Because It Reminds Me Of Amnesia:The Dark Descent

My Face When I Got Skyrim And A Graphics Card That Could Run It On Ultra With No Lag

:C No Just No Thanks what I Think About Them

FUUUUUUU- I Made A Nemesis Already Tho :C But This One Is cool

I Can't Go My Parents Don't Even Know I'm A Brony. And New York Is A 3 Day Drive

Oh dear I missed the Crossover part. I feel like the biggest ass now.

Zecora is a mystic zebra who was ostracized from Ponyville for being different, hence why she lives in the Everfree. Even after she was accepted, it's clear that Zecora enjoys her privacy as she still lives there. At least, that's my interpretation. Take it with a small grain of salt.

As per our canon description of the Everfree, it is, and I quote, "largely empty of ponyfolk", and "largely unexplored". I'm not saying you can't have a character from the Everfree, I'm just saying that it would probably require an explanation to pass modstaff inspection: what are his parents doing there, if they lived there why not nearby Cloudsdale, Ponyville, or even further away in Manehattan? Were the too ostracized from the village? If so, why? What could be so bad as for Thunder's family to live in the Everfree, known as a dangerous place to most ponies? Did they not know? And while they were there, how did they get by? Once he escaped, how did Thunder know how to get to Ponyville?

I'm not saying you have a bad character, in fact, you have the makings of a very unique, and very interesting character. Just needs a bit of work, that's all.

Also, I tried to be as pleasant as possible in my criticism, and don't really appreciate the patronizing tone I got from your reply. I'm trying to lend a helping hoof here to help you on your way to RPing with a great character.

Sorry For The Late Reply And I Will Change Where He Lives Maybe In A House In Cloudsdale Or A Inn I'll Think About That Thx For Your Help

Zecora Lives In Everfree Forgot That?

If You Do This I Would Like To Join The Rp

Name: Dashing Thunder

Sex: Male

Age: Colt

Species: Pegasus

Pelt Color: Navy

Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Mane Is Brown With A Red Stripe And Tail Is Poofy And Brown

Eye Color: Lime

Cutie Mark: Lightning Bolt

Physique: Regular Colt Size Sorta Skinny

Origin: Born In Everfree

Roleplay Type: Crossover

Occupation: Cloud Manager

Motivation: Hoping To Race Rainbow Dash

Likes:Strawberries,Races,Battling And Secretly Likes Derpy

Dislikes:Losing,Boring Things,Cupcakes

Character Summary:

He Was Born In The Everfree Forest And Moved To Ponyville After My Parents Were Attacked By Diamond Dogs And Forced To Work I Escaped Telling My Parents I Was Going To Come Back. 17 Years Later I Have A Job At Cloudsdale Setting Up Thunder.Sometimes I Like To Race With Other Pegasus I'm Still Hoping To Get A Chance To Race With Rainbow Dash.Still Looking For My Parents And Searching For My Destiny I Live In Ponyville Hoping To Find my Parents And My Destiny.

His Parents All He Knew Was That They Were Cocky And Rich Always Wanting The Best Things For Dashing Thunder Going To Big Parties Fancy Conversations And Getting Whatever he Wanted His Parents Went For a Drive In Carriage Going To The Gala Just Then The Carriage Stopped Screams And Dragging Were Heard Outside The Carriage Door Flung Open 3 Diamond Dogs They Grabbed His Parents And Left Him There Alone He Thrived By Find Hay Making A Camp And Looking For Supplies They would Probably Be Proud On How He's Doing.

Dashing Got His Cutie Mark By Stopping a Out Of Control Hurricane From Getting To Ponyville Flying Around It In The Opposite Direction After That Lightning Went Through His Tail And Mane His Eyes Were Glowing White And He Went To Mach 10 And Stopped It Getting His Cutie Mark People Think It Means he's Fast But Only 3 Ponies Know He Stopped It Dash,Zecora, And Pinkie And It Means To Him That he Saved Ponyville

He Is Willing To Take A Challenge But Even Cheat If It Means winning He Tells The Truth But Not If He Has To Save Himself He Gets Caught Rarely But When He Does He Tries Not To Do it Again He Feels Great that he Told The Truth But Not About His Evil Side He Wishes He Never Drank It In The First Place

He Doesn't Be Mean Unless They Be Mean back he will Never Turn his Back on You And Go Through The Whole Way He Won't Quit Until its Done he is Loyal Brave And will Help If he Can

Photo:

Name:Dark Stallion

Sex: Male

Age: Colt

Species:Pegasus

Pelt Color: Black

Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Rad And Black Mane And Tail

Cutie Mark: Never Seen

Physique: Regular Colt Size

Origin: After Zecora Threw Away Potions They Mixed Into Eachother Curiously Dashing Thunder Licked Them Causing Him To Transform Every Midnight Into The Dark Stallion

Roleplay Type: Crossover

Occupation: Super Villain

Motivation: Conquer Ponyville

Likes: Anti-Friendship,Hate

Dislikes: Friendship,And Kindness

Character Summary:

After Zecora Threw Away Potions They Mixed Into Eachother Curiously Dashing Thunder Licked Them Causing Him To Transform When He Is Angry Into The Dark Stallion, Causing Havoc And Evil All Over Ponyville Having One Nemesis The Mysterious Mare Do Well.

Attacks:

Impulse-Throwing Himself At The Enemy This Is Good For Close Ranged Fighting

Teleport-Good For Dodging Attacks And Sneak Attacks

Separate-Can Rip Things In Half But Consumes His Power By 75%

Regenerate-Heal Himself

Dark Kick-Bucks His Enemy Sending Them Flying

Chaos Blast-Sends A dark Cloud Of Light Towards The Enemy

Steal Power-Takes The Life Force And Friendship From Ponies Near

Clone-Create 3 Clones To Help Him in Battle

Photo:

Can Transform into Death Stallion:

Attacks:

Jab-Stabs A Pony With his Horns

Stallions Rage-Does A Combo Of Kicking Hoofing And Blasting A Enemy

Sonic Blaze-Increases Speed And Damage For A Short period of Time

Happiness Sucker-Turns Everything around Him Gloomy By Taking Its Happiness

Combustion-Sends 3 Explosions To Destroy Things In Hi Path

Steal Power-Takes The Life Force And Friendship From Ponies Near

Growth-Increase Size And Strength By 10

Dance Of Anger-Bucks Enemies 10 Times Then Blasting Them With Blazing Death

Blazing Death-A Huge Beam Of Anti-Friendship Gets Hurdled At The Enemy Causing Internal And Outside Injuries

The End-A Huge Beam 10x More Deadly Then Blazing Death Causing Craters And Horrible Abominations To Appear Allover Equestria (Takes 90% Of His Power)

Let's see Im:

Random As Crap

Honest

Loyal

Kind

Not Too Generous

And Smart

Jesus I'm

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Mine Were 'Time To See This Show.'

I'm Hoping To Rp With One Of You Soon

Thanks Guys

About myself.: Hello I Am Hector I Am From Florida And My Hobbies Are Playing Steam,Making Minecraft Mods(Or Any Other Computer Game),Dinosaurs,Video Games,Creating Sound Effects,Voice Acting,Rping And Riding Bikes. My Passion Is Studying Dinosaurs And Making Games

How did you hear about Canterlot.com?: Youtube

How did you became a fan of FiM?: It Was A Dare After Watching It I Quickly Went On Youtube To Find More Episodes Then Finish The Whole Series

My one favourite main cast pony?: Rainbow Dash

Sorry If I Always Put A Capital Letter In Front Of Every Word I Can't Stop It's A Habit Also My Grammar

Ok My Rp Name Is Dashing Thunder I Was Born In A Field Located 10 Miles From Ponyville After My Parents Were Attacked By Diamond Dogs And Forced To Work I Escaped Telling My Parents I Was Going To Come Back. 17 Years Later I Have A Job At Cloudsdale Setting Up Thunder.Sometimes I Like To Race With Other Pegasus I'm Still Hoping To Get A Chance To Race With Rainbow Dash.Still Looking For My Parents And Searching For My Destiny I Live In Ponyville Hoping To Find my Parents.