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  4. Last post wins

    in Last Post Wins (formerly Spam Stables)

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    I played the original AC on GC and made the My Little Pony theme song my town's bell theme -- and my town was named Mossflower. I'm half-tempted to see what all the critters in town have to say to me after being away for yeeeears. And the WEEDS. OH CELESTIA THE WEEDS. NOOOOOOOOOOOO! (I know there's a ghost I can talk to, iirc, to pick all the weeds.)

    Pants in AC? Who needs pants?!

    I'd really like to play as an animal and be able to live in Angie's house/Angie's closet. And it should let me bake and give goodies away to other characters/animals/people. Wouldn't THAT be fantastic?

    Oh right, time for school! I have to teach today too. *drags Aria away*

    There's a ghost?

    What??

    I bought a whole cheat pack to remove the weeds when there was a ghost all along? -,-

    My first town was called Sunset, my four characters had colour themes - Aria, yellow; Skyler, blue sky; Kaylah, Pink; Tyson, Green.

    See?

    Wait, can you connect to specific people across the world? How? How??

    --

    Also, if we're talking about the cartoon, I just started watching it about a week ago, I'm quite far into the first section. Man, that show's AMAZING.

    I'm in love with Appa.

    If we're not talking about it, ignore me TT.TT

  12. [Earth Pony]Kimono[Final]

    in Original Characters

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    Kimono looks really sweet!

    I see that this is a WIP and I'm here to help you improve your application.

    I was just thinking that maybe you could add some more to her description. Every pony has a past. Did she have many childhood friends at all? Did she like sport and games? School?

    The "woods of Ponyville". Do you mean the Everfree forest? If you do, I'd recommend her living just on the edge, as Everfree is not a nice place for ponies to live. Especially such a kind pony as Kimono.

    Next, I'm wondering why her name is Kimono. Why did her parents call her by that name? Do they just like Kimonos?

    You say that her hair is long and purple, but what style? I know you have a picture but it's just nice to have a bit of description, like "curly" and that sort of stuff.

    Health care is her occupation, fair enough, but where does she do it? Does Kimono own a hospital or just work in one?

    What was Kimono's reaction when she got her cutie mark? Had she wanted it a lot or wasn't really bothered?

    Finally, her mother was a farmer so she must have lived on a farm. What was the farm like? Did Kimono like it there?

    Also you may want to include some more stuff about her recent life. what's her home like? Does she have any love interest or want to meet anypony?

    And the very last point. Kimono seems very nice. A little too nice. You may want to add some bad things about her. As well as her judging others, are there any other bad things about her to even out the good? A pony that's perfect isn't a very interesting pony.

    Thank you very much for your time, I hope you get accepted soon!

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  14. Epithet [Final]

    in Original Characters

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    Okay, this looks like a cool, creative idea for an OC pony and I'm looking forward to seeing Epithet around the RP forums. Since you asked for a review, there's just a few things I'd like to mention.

    Firstly, it is mentioned in the guide to applying for a character not to colour the writing. While it's not a big issue, I just thought I would let you know that the best colour for text is black, and the best font is the simplest when it comes to applications.

    Next, I'm just going to point out that you haven't filled out the name field. Probably just one of those silly mistakes we all make.

    Next onto the layout of the application. This isn't a specific rule, but I tend to put blank line gaps between each field. It makes it easier to read and looks neater.

    Next, another point on the presentation, it looks as though the bolding of the field titles (e.g. "age") hasn't worked properly. Instead of seeing bold writing i can see the .

    Forgive me if i am wrong - it may just be my iPod. But you may want to look into that.

    I know how Epithet looks because of the picture, but where you've said the colour of his mane and tail, why don't you go into some more detail about the actual style?

    I don't think you've mentioned that he's a unicorn. How about giving us some insight to Epithet's magic skill; is he bad at magic, what does he use it for?

    Finally, and this is just me speculating now, but you did say he didn't fit in well with "upper class ponies". If this is the case then what about lower class ponies? Does he have any friends at all? Cousins he likes maybe?

    Hope I've helped and good luck! :)

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