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Application is a little confusing to me.

>Cutie Mark: A Berry shaped like a comet

>She discovered her true special ability lay in singing

Cutie marks usually play a role on special talents or personality traits. Yours simply seems to be only family-name related. If you mention that the cutie mark is simply family related then it might be fine... I'm still a little unsure about it.

Maybe instead her comet berry could be a desire to show all of Equestria the delights of her family's drinks. Maybe she's a little to disorganized, distracted, and childish to run the business like her family would like. But maybe she could be use that hyper-activity to help promote her family's juices! She could even deliver some to other towns to juice shops. Just a thought!

>Residence: Ponyville

We still don't know why she picked this as her residence. Distance relatives? Good friends? A new place to promote her family's products?

Very interesting character! I think we can detail her just a little bit more. c:

She might not use her her wings for flying to much, but maybe she has a "talent" for growing feathers, and she uses these beautiful feathers for props and costumes she makes for herself.

I think we should also detail a bit more on the accident too, a dragon accident during a performance would be really good. Or anything else we could brain storm. C:

Ok I thought they should go in the same app since they're twins, I'll fix it

One character per app. You should know that.

One character per app, RCTwilight. I need you to fix this.

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Looks good, Approved.

I think the term you're looking for eye colors is "pearlescent"?

Only thing we need to touch up on is where he's from. He needs a solid birth/nest place, the home technically doesn't still need to be there but just mentioned for history sake.

Residence: Born blah blah here but since there has left nesting grounds to his wonderlust ways.

Or something like that. c:

Also please add a species tag: [Dragon] to your title!

That's completely fine, you can leave them out. c:

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Edit: Also! Please add in (Griffin) tag to your title!

>living in a small Earth Pony town

Maybe Trottingham? c: It's the perfect place for a spoiled rotten high class unicorn filly!

Very nice character, Approved!

Perfect, thanks!

Ohhhhhh, cause of writing, that's really clever!

Thanks!

Looks good, only suggestion I have is maybe ponying up the name. Nahima is suitable enough, maybe keep it singular by itself or giving it a more "descriptive" secondary name. Ex: Feathers, Notes, even Ink? Lots of ideas.

That and might be a good idea to leave out the parent's names because they're very un-pony like as well.

Other than that, looks good, I approve.

Very impressive application! APPROVED!

I admit I was very worried as soon as I realized this was a Draggle is a remake.. But you've really taken away from the human and old pony tales and made her her very own character I'm very impressed.

Normally I would sincerely avoid any reference to the old pony tales, any of the movies/series before FiM in our RP. But you did sincerely put your own complete creative spin on it I have to Approve it. Very well done.

>Residence: "Heather Blossom's" flowershop in Trottingham

Wonderful to see ponies being spread out!

You could also mention she gets very excited when you get special shipments of exotic flowers and planets from the Great Nimbusgait Lakes possibly? Lots of very beautiful and rare floral grow there so it's only natural all of Trottingham would want the very best from there.

Other than that, Approved!

Approved.

Sounds like it would be a dream come true to her to get a shipment of rocks and clay material from the Clopton Shore! Might be nice to tie that in there so we can reference far off places. Her favorite materials come from there or she makes special orders for it.

Thanks for the answer and edit!

>I'm also thinking of making another character alongside her, a younger brother, if that's permitted.

That's fine, just be sure to fill out an app for him too.

Approved.

>Age: Somewhere in the Filly-Mare range

If you had to put a number on it, what would it be? Anything under 19 is filly. Anything 20 and up is Mare.

Other than that, consider you app Approved!

Approved.

In that case, consider this application Approved!

Traveling to Ponyville here and there wouldn't hurt at all. Maybe he's visiting old friends and family? But mostly relays in Canterlot since studying for law stuff is very heavy stuff. Doesn't leave a lot of free time for anypony!

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DERP MOMENT FOR MEEE.

Approved. Lol