sleeps

Well I am glad we are moving to a 13+ limit since it will allow a little bit more wiggle room what can and can't be said. Will this fresh start also allow us to redo some characters for the mane RP area? ( I know I have wanted to redo Promontory for a while in the mane RP but I was hesitant since I figured it might be a bit to much for the mane area. Though I'm still not a fan of the "all ponies must have a cutie mark" since even some canon ponies are blank flanks but that is just a petty detail) Also were you serious on the black listing of Autumn or just joking? I can't tell by just reading...

Yet again waited for denim but I think this rp is dead

bummer for some reason doctor whooves RPs die off before they can even can get started.

yeeaahh not sure if this is still going but I'm still waiting on you two to finish your clothing scene

Soooo is this rp going or did it die before it could begin?

Look carefully again... I did...

whoops my mistake didn't notice it the first time.

Character Name: Ignius

Race: Earth Pony

Gender: Male

Coat colour: [colour=#660000]#660000 (Looks like a very dark shade of red, kinda like Blood Red)[/colour]

Mane/Tail/Markings colour & Style: Mane is shortly cut and roughly arranged, as if it was ill maintained or neglected, shows signs of being cut in battle. Same goes for the tail, but most strands of hair are ill-placed. Both hair elements are coloured [colour=#a9a9a9]Dim grey[/colour]. He has a scar on his left cheek, gained in battle with one of his more stronger opponents.

Eye colour: [colour=#b22222]Well apparently, the colour picker calls it "Fire Brick"[/colour]

Physique: Slightly bigger than usual Earth Ponies, muscular, the seasoned and veteran look.

Hometown/Province of Origin: Violi (+2 Str)

Element of Chaos/Harmony: Hatred (+1 Str)

Perk: Berserker

Skills:

Speech

Persuasion - 3

Intimidation - 4

Lying - 4

Charisma - 2

Total: 13

Strength

Sword - 3

Mace - 1

Axe - 5

Block - 3

Stamina - 4

Armour - 3

Total: 19 +3(from bonuses) Grand Total: 22

Stealth

Sneak - 1

Speed - 4

Pickpocketing - 1

Lockpicking - 1

Reaction Time - 4

Dodge - 4

Weapons - 3

Total: 18

Smarts

Magic - not applicable -

Strategist - 1

Leadership - 2

Medic - 1

Alchemist - 1

Total: 5

History: The colt of a retired warrior sired by a Stallion from Violi, his mother perished during a great upheaval after three years, far too young for Ignius to remember, and his Father worked his time around their small part of the province, keeping their townsfolk out of danger, repelling encroaching monsters and bandits. Life was hard, food was minimal at best, and free time was spent with his Father training with the axe and he sword. Although Ignius aspired to be more than just another pony forced into a life of a warrior, it was either his fierce temper against those who poked humorously about his parents or his limited perspective on academia that prevented him from going on with a normal life. Each day was a training routine of discipline, each session allowed him to master his weapons, to defend those he would be entrusted to when his Father would no longer be able to.

All that changed after one fight. A group of bullies was gaining ground in the school, and they were brutal, as their wrath extended to everyone, including Ignius. For days, they decided to make him the prime target, poking at his attitude, poking at his future, his family. Then they poked as his Mother. The fair mare who his Father had spoken of highly and dearly. He would not stand it. So he went up to their leader, and landed a hard punch at him. The others looked towards their leader, then back at Ignius, before charging at him. Try as he might, he was still outnumbered four-to-one, despite both skill and strength, it was clear that even when he took out two, he was tiring. And just as he was getting cornered, he felt a sudden surge of energy through him, different from adrenaline. With a surge of fury, he quickly delivered quick and painful, but not fatal blows to the other two, leaving them on the floor in pain. And just as he stood over their leader, he was stopped by a passing teacher, which after due process, he was expelled. Much to the chagrin of his Father, who hoped his training would keep the young colt's fiery spirit down, but it didn't, it went as far as to grant his Cutie Mark, an axe on fire.

Fast forward a few normal years, and Ignius joined his Father, the axe his favored blade, his strategy next to none, but his determination unbroken. At this point, his Father only taught basic discipline and survival in the realistic world, but when it came to battle, Ignius' spirit was next to none. But eventually, he would be pushed into another level. One day, a group of marauding bandits raided the town, setting ablaze structures, and taking the innocent captive, as this transpired, Ignius knew none of this, as he was out hunting, but when he returned, he was faced with a heart-wrenching scene. All ponies gone, a town burned out, and his Father's absence only made him assume the worst. Ignius thought that he would live on like his Father, and when he had his colt, he would teach him, and perhaps Ignius would cool down. But since fate had other plans, Ignius hated fate. He hated the bandits from their wanton destruction. He hated it all.

And as that anger grew, his judgement was clouded, and his perception of justice twisted. For him, there was no mourning and moving on, no attempts at happiness, and definitely no more family. Going back inside the remains of his house, he gathered his belongings, and when he was satisfied, left his home for the outside world. To hunt down those who committed such atrocities, to sate his hatred with the ending of scum, to ease his mind knowing that the devils who caused destruction were gone, and to satisfy his need for vengeance. And he would start, by severing the links to the heart.

((Abit violent history where I applied abit of Euphemism to keep it site-friendly. Tell me if it's still too violent, or not violent enough.))

don't forget it add a perk.

[colour=#006400]I have to go in a moment, but thank your for your applications; I shall look them over later when I return. Depending on levels of interest, this may become JUST the Elements of Disharmony, so as to make it smaller. We'd just have the current elements as NPC's. :-)[/colour]

Well just let us know whenever you are done.

i updated it and i hope's its all right

It looks alright to me. Just remember to include your bonus stat points for race, home town, and element.

(Of course Bones could change this since s/he is the DM of the RP)

Vision the unicorn

[colour=#006400]Skills : [/colour][colour=#006400]Smarts[/colour]

[colour=#006400]Class : [/colour][colour=#006400]Industrios[/colour]

[colour=#006400]Race:[/colour][colour=#006400]Unicorns[/colour]

[colour=#006400]Perk:[/colour][colour=#006400]Attraction[/colour]

[colour=#006400]Element of Harmony:[/colour][colour=#006400]Generosity[/colour]

[colour=#006400]i hope i did everything corectly if not point it out and i will fix and my oc wont be at full power since i just disabled him to make him weak for this rp and i will try to make my rp post long just dont have any high hopes im on my phone half the time.[/colour]

I think you also need to include your skill points and what is in them.

Well it is certainly an interesting concept. I'll give it a shot. I'll also include my Character sheet just for this.

character sheet

User name: Sleeps

Character Name: Promontory

Race: Earth Pony (+ 1 strength bonus)

Gender: Male

Coat colour:Burnt Toast Brown [Hex#: A1745E]

Mane/Tail/Markings colour & Style:

Primary colour: Mine Shaft Black [Hex#:343333]

Secondary colour: Gray Asparagus [Hex#:4B4C4B]

Style: cropped mane and tail

Eye colour:Picton Blue [Hex#:5BBCEC]

Physique:Work Horse Build/Extremely muscular, Average height, Has Furry Fetlocks, Discoloured Hooves (same as primary mane/tail colour)

Hometown/Province of Origin: Industrios (+ 1 Strength bonus, + 1 Speech bonus)

Skills:

Speech:

Persuasion:**** (4)

Intimidation:**** (4)

Lying:* (1)

Charisma:**** (4)

Stealth:

1. Sneak:* (1)

2. Speed:*** (3)

3. Pickpocketing:* (1)

4. Lockpicking:* (1)

5. Reaction Time:**** (4)

6. Dodge:* (1)

7. Weapons:**** (4)

Strength:

1. Sword:**** (4)

2. Mace:* (1)

3. Axe:*** (3)

4. Block:***** (5)

5. Stamina:***** (5)

6. Armour:*** (3)

Intelligence:

1. Magic:

2. Strategist:*** (3)

3. Leadership:*** (3)

4. Medic:* (1)

5. Alchemist:* (1)

Perk:

Attraction:***** (5)

Element of Harmony

Loyalty (+ 1 strength bonus)

History:

As a young colt Promontory grew up in a small working class family that mainly dealt with sword forging and armor creation for fellow ponies to wear into battle. Though Promontory wasn't the most skilled in creating weapons like his father, the colt was good at bringing in a crowd and demonstrating how each blade worked. Still, as Promontory got older and the land became filled with more and more creatures, the Earth stallion started using his strength to help out fellow ponies in exchange for basic living goods and materials thus making him become muscle for hire. With more and more experience in the battle field the Earth stallion became better at becoming a leader figure when in the face of danger even though he still has a way to go. Still, to some it made him look like a rough and tough warrior who would pick a fight whenever he could. However, Promontory tried to live by what his father had taught him that it was better to bring others over to his side and only use the blade if all else had failed.

Though Promontory home and family were in Industrios, His father and him usually went out and about to as many towns as the could in order to sell their products and craftsmanship. This gave Promontory a good sense of what the land was like and how to make a fast plan encase a bandit pony showed up or a creature.

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If you really want a writing example I'll send you one.

are guys by chance waiting on me? Because I'm waiting on you guys since Big Mac doesn't need a disguise.

Big McIntosh:

As the large work horse watched the two ponies argue over some theories about time and space the red apple stallion couldn't help but feel like the odd pony out. Still from what he could gather the three of them being in "1644" wasn't going to have much of an effect by what the Pegasus mentioned even though the unicorn thought it would.

[colour=#ff0000]"Well ah can think of some way ta figure out if'n were back in 1644."[/colour]

Big McIntosh thought to himself as he remembered where him and Applejack had carved there names into a stone on the farm. If it was there then the Pegasus was lying about the time if not then he was telling the truth. However a large smack sound brought the earth stallion back to the two when he noticed that the mare had hit the fellow stallion in the face with her hoof mentioning something about taking it slow. Big McIntosh couldn't help but roll his emerald green eyes as he quickly pieced together what the Pegasus had done while he was thinking about how to prove if this really was 1644.

[colour=#ff0000]"He may look like ah stallion bud he still a colt a heart."[/colour]

The work horse thought to himself when Jack went up to him and mentioned if he wanted to go see the caravans and see if they needed help. Even though Big McIntosh didn't exactly know when or really even where he was if this was Ponyville it was still the neighborly thing to do.

[colour=#ff0000]"Eeyup."[/colour]

He simple replied to the question as he turned towards the caravans and began to walk. However before the three even began to get close the Pegasus suddenly stopped and mentioned that they need a wardrobe change.

[colour=#ff0000]"Nnnope. No thanks."[/colour]

Big McIntosh replied in a simple manner. Sure maybe the other two might need some changes; mainly the Pegasus, but Big McIntosh didn't like the idea of changing his work stuff. Besides his yolk was originally from his great great grand pappie so it more than likely fit in.

Big McIntosh:

Future devices? Fabric of space and time being undone? time traveling? The large stallions head was spinning from all the odd things the Pegasus was mentioning.

[colour=#ff0000]"Eyup."[/colour]

Was the only thing that Big McIntosh could think to say when Jack asked them not to tell anypony about him,the doc, or anything else.

[colour=#ff0000]"Not like any pony would believe me if'n ah did mention ya'll."[/colour]

Big McIntosh thought as he watched the unicorn look around the empty field mentioning that she was convinced that they had time traveled. It certainly did look like they had time traveled since the large work horse had never seen such fields before and only heard about them but the stallion wasn't hundred percent convinced.

[colour=#ff0000]"Now ah ain' no mathematical pony bud ain' us bein' here gonna have some affect on da time stream 'er somethin?" [/colour]

Big McIntosh asked as he made a few steps back from the pegasus as he continued to watch the small caravan in the distance wanting to go see if it really was the caravans that Granny Smith had mentioned in her stories.

yo saronyx I waiting on you.

Yep same with me.

Well I posted so what should the main problem be for while they are in 1644? Maybe the cider twins great great grand parents try to swindle the land? Or maybe something about filthy rich trying to buy the land?

Big McIntosh:

Before Big McIntosh could even react the dark blue Pegasus grabbed onto him and started to play with something on his pastern until suddenly there was a flash of light blinding the large red apple stallion. As Big McIntosh adjusted his emerald green eyes to his surroundings he noticed that the ponyville was no longer around and instead the three ponies stood in a prairie field.

[colour=#ff0000]"Whad'n da hay? Where are we an whad happen ta Ponyville?"[/colour]

Big McIntosh asked still not quite understanding what had happened. As he looked around in a daze off in the distance the large red stallion noticed a small caravan moving towards their direction. Though Big McIntosh couldn't completely make out the details of the caravan it had a similar shape to the caravans that Granny Apple had described in her stories when she would tell him bed time stories back when he was a young colt.

[colour=#ff0000]"Ah guess I should more ask whad'n da hay did I get myself into?"[/colour]

The large stallion thought to himself as he looked from them then to Jack trying to determine if this was some kind of prank that maybe Pinkie pie or the cutie mark crusaders had set up.

Big McIntosh:

When the Pegasus shot down his suggestion and went back to mentioning dates Big McIntosh tilted his head again in confusion.

[colour=#ff0000]"Nod 'xactly sure why he keeps goin' on 'bout dates. Maybe he's one dem historical ponies."[/colour]

Big McIntosh thought as the unicorn named Denim mentioned a couple of fairly well known dates in Equestrian History. History had never been a big part of the stallions life since he was a simple orchard keeper but there was one day that he remembered being told about when he was little.

[colour=#ff0000]"Uh..well Ah know of one time ah like'd da see. Ah always wanted da see when mah granpappie founded da Sweet Apple Acres back in 1644. Bud mah question is is hauw are ya'll gonna ged back den? Las' Ah checked time travelin' ain' doable by a Pegasus or even normal unicorns. Only da elite kinda unicorn under Princess Celestia can do that." [/colour]

Big McIntosh commented Jack mentioned that he would leave a note for the other pony who was still looking about at the town.

Big McIntosh:

When the pony mentioned that it smoked all the time the large red earth stallion tilted his head a bit confusion.

[colour=#ff0000]"Nauw how'n Equestria does he all know dat Dis thing smokes all da time? Did him'n that earth pony install it? Is it some kinda hay smokin' machine?"[/colour]

Big McIntosh thought to himself as he tried to figure out what the Pegasus meant. Still the Pegasus quickly switched the topic asking if he wanted to go along on an adventure with him and the unicorn.

[colour=#ff0000]"Er sure....nod 'xactly sure whad ya'll are 'xpected da fine seein' that Ponyvilles pretty peaceful durin da summer but ah was moseyin' dauwn to da supply store ta get some nails if'n ya'll want ta join me." [/colour]

The Earth stallion replied as he pointed a hoof down the road to the convenience store that was on the horizon. Sure it wasn't the most exciting idea but it seemed that the pegasus wanted to explore the town a bit judging by the way the fellow stallion grinned at everypony he met and looked at something as if he was a colt seeing it for the first time.

I'll be responding to the RP a little later tonight gotta head to work.

Well I just sent Firedash a message. hopefully we will get a reply.

ok then its Saturday at what time do we just let the doctor stand around and gawk at the scenery?

Well seeing that it is about 2'o clock in the afternoon where I am I'll give him until about 7 PM just encase he or she is doing something special for father's day weekend then I'll send him a message and we will continue.

and Denim?

Well I haven;t heard from her lately but yeah she could also come along though I think we might also need to send her a PM on Saturday too

lets do so on Saturday. just in case he is finishing up school and has some thing else more important to worry about.

Yes that would probably be the best course of action. though I suppose in the worst case scenario jack and big mac will go on an adventure

im waiting for the doc

we might have Private message Firedash if he or she waits to long.

Hey just wondering where everybody is.