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MagicaI

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  1. Since no one has replied, I will make a first post.

    For appearances, why not give her a black coat, blue eyes and pink hair? The cutie mark would suit better with those colors. The different highlights and white doesn't match well. Just a suggestion. I think it would look prettier. And maybe she could have long flat hair with curled ends? Same with the tail. It would be a little fluttershy-esque, but hopefully not too much! :)

  2. Hey everypony! I was wondering if any of you would be interested in an RP that would develop our ponies more in characterization and give them a solid "home"? To sort of flesh out a permanent story for them, you know? Agree or disagree? Any ideas on what the RP should be about? What genre? Should we go on adventures? Private or public RP? What pony(s) would you use and why?

    I'm using:

    http://www.canterlot...-desires-final/

    While I have pegged down a backstory, I'd like her to explore the world in and outside of Canterlot. Make friends, do stuff! Like our own MLP show or storyline, haha! We could all each have our own central or shared storylines.

  3. I am starting a RP based on my OC's shop.

    She creates and sells love and beauty spells, potions, wishes, charms, etc.

    Maybe your OC could purchase some and try it out? :3 You could also attempt a friendship or report back to her your results concerning your item of choice.

    Ideas? Any joiners?

  4. Velvet nodded happily. "I will be taking a train ride then. It shouldn't take too long and I will be back in a couple of hours or so. So nothing should go wrong, hm? I pray it will not." She leveled her bright blue eyes with that of Fire's and smiled. "Can you stay here with Giza? It would not only be helpful, but it would be a reminder that he must make the sign lovely." She eyed Giza for a brief moment and then spoke. "If you require payment, do make it clear what you desire so that I do not forget, dear zebra. And try not to be annoyed with Fire's flirting. She doesn't mean to press any serious advances." She giggled and winked before looking at the other ponies.

    She trotted over to the others. "Do keep the shop safe while I am gone. And if more ponies come in, please write their orders down on the parchment scrolls I have organized on the counter." The unicorn pointed her hoof towards the heart-shaped window, where they could see the counter. "I also need a pony to accompany me. Any takers?"

  5. Velvet backed away with a clear blush on her face. "N-now it wasn't anything like that..." She responded, clear with the memories she had when she had met Fire's cousin. "I was just trying to help her be more attractive and she seemed to be happy with the results. As for the horde of stallions that hit on her and requested my services in Canterlot that day...I won't discuss it." She laughed nervously, averting her eyes from side to side. "Um, so anyway...all I need are some Hearts' Desire and Honeymists from Zecora. As far as that is, I am sure I can find a train ride or pegasus to help me or I can just use my teleportation magic with another unicorn. If I can't find her, I will go out of the Everfree and head for Whitetail Woods in Ponyville. It is much safer and I heard it has plenty of flowers during this time of season." She explained to them, smiling confidently with her plan. "Of course, if one or two of you would like to accompany me, that would be lovely~."

    "I also need someponies to watch the shop." She said, suddenly turning stern. "It is a big responsibility and it is not something to joke about. The items I have in there can be very useful or absolutely dangerous."

  6. The shopkeeper trotted outside to see what the issue seemed to be after all the commotion and noticed that the ponies were crowding around the entrance. The striped zebra from earlier pointed out the problem with his hoof as she looked up at Enchant's sign.

    "Your sign was made with inferior impurity metal. It might break and fall off, hurting one of your customers."

    Fire Walker also chimed in telling her almost the same thing. The pink mare frowned, expressing some disappointment in herself. "Ah, I see. I can't believe I hadn't noticed this earlier." She answered while keeping her blue-eyed gaze leveled with the shop's label. She tore her focus from the problem and paced back and forth in thought. "A little magic can fix this, but in all honesty, it is quite an old sign. And to think I'm one for beauty, I would've done a renovation by now." She furrowed her eyebrows together, thinking of a solution.

    A sudden 'Aha!' look had taken over her previous bearing. She turned to the ponies surrounding her and directed her hoof at the Zebra. "You!" She exclaimed with a smile. "Earlier I saw you with a cart and some ores, and along with you, you had some tools. I assume you are a blacksmith, yes?" She asked and then turned to Fire Walker. "Fire, if he is going to fix up the sign, would you suggest any more renovations?" She looked at the other ponies who had stopped by. As she was thinking, she did remember Fire mentioning if she did need any ingredients. She wasn't missing any, but picking up a few Heart's Desires and Honeymist flowers wouldn't do much harm to collect. She could also ask Zecora for some suggestions on different spells she could try. It didn't sound too bad. With a toss of her purple curls and a delightful air, she had her plan.

  7. Dunder Blust was coming off of patrols again around the mines. Fortunately, there was nothing that needed to be reporting. Unfortnately, he was still full of energy and didn't want to go home just to be bored. He was flying along when he saw a familiar zebra trot into a store followed by Ironhooves.

    Dunder landed in front of the store Enchantment? I wonder what they have inside. He thought as he trotted inside. There were a lot of ponies inside, so he supposed that it was a pretty useful or popular store. He sat down in the back and took off his leather militia helmet. He set the helmet down and rubbed his eyes and temple with his hoof as he let out a sigh.

    Another pony walked in through the door, and Velvet greeted him with a charming smile. He seemed to be browsing her wares. She went back to concentrating on the current ponies at hand.

  8. Three other ponies suddenly walked in the dainty shop; one an unknown colt, a large male stallion and a very messy looking mare beside him, and the other a fiery red-maned pegasus named Fire Walker. She was a good friend of hers and a rather frequent customer. She had quite the zeal and brashness to her personality, compared to Velvet. She also had a horrible habit of crashing in and almost breaking something, whether it be the door, the sample potions, or the romantic floral lights that hung from the ceiling. It was a good thing that she had ordered a automatic opening door.

    She greeted the two new costumers before referring back to Fire Walker. "Ah, yes...I am so happy you received my letter. But right now I don't think I need much!" She replied sweetly, tossing back a strand of her purple curls. "You are welcome to stay if you'd like, though~" She then turned her focus to the other customers, but also noticed that the mare with the messy appearance had run off. Had something scared her?

    "Is there anything you three would like?"

  9. Walking back home to the rocky area after a long night in a dark mine, A familiar dark unkempt Zebra was walking over the hills with his cart behind him. It was a rough night dealing with the miner ponies on the other side of Canterlot but it was worth it has he was pulled cart of new pure mythril ore. He smirked as he looked back at the new ore in his old cart. He couldn't wait to smith it into many new things. Home then bed....I will smelt this stuff when I get up. He thought as he passed by a store that just seemed like it opened up. It was rather overtly cute and pink...It was not his kind of place. He was just about to pass by when he noticed something on the sign of the store...something that catched his smithing eye. He sighed knowing what he had to do. He parked and disconnected the cart from him. He trotted to the door and took a deep breath, walking into the store. "Hello. Are you the owner?" He asked in his gruff voice as he walked into the store.

    Velvet waited patiently as she read over some orders she wrote down on a parchment scroll. She steadied her focus on the works in progress as she used her magic to scribble down some notes on Whistle Wind's purchase. The brown and pink heart-shaped door automatically opened as she heard the dainty jingle of the door's bell. She calmly laid down her red quill and looked upon the visitor with her best smile. A black zebra with a variety of gray stripes came in. He looked rather tired, as if he had worked long hours into the night. His unkempt black mane and untidy appearance seemed prove it.

    "Hello. Are you the owner?" He asked with a rough tone. The pink mare maintained her expression and politely welcomed him in. "Yes, yes I am. My name is Velvet Desires. Do you need something, sir?" She asked politely and waited for his response.

  10. I'll have to take a look at it when it starts..I'm messing around with a few characters, seeing what works...I only ask that those who post on this new RP thing, please don't do any "one sentence" posting. That drives me CRAZY! :evil: We all don't expect a book on each post, but I HATE seeing this: "Tacobob smiles."

    Thank You :)

    Don't worry. I made sure that there can't be any one-liner posts. c:

  11. ((Hey everypony! Welcome to my temporary RP! I created this thread as a start-up for my character until I go into the main RP, but I hope we'll all have fun nonetheless! Keep in mind to follow the rules and be LITERATE! No one-liners! Be descriptive. That's all!

    Oh, and for those wondering about the plot: "While Velvet is out collecting ingredients from Zecora, she asks a few ponies to watch the shop, and shenanigans ensue as they start to explore her spells and items. When she comes back, chaos takes over the city of Canterlot."))

    The early cracks of dawn lit up the vast skies as the final specks of night faded away from the world. The bright shades of yellow, orange and red colored the glorious city of Canterlot into view, and with that morning had officially commenced. A tall and slender pink unicorn walked about her elegant room as she magically dried her long curly mane from a soothing shower. As she was preparing herself for work, she pondered on what sort of breakfast she should have. 'Should I cook?' The mare thought to herself, but quickly shook her head in disapproval as she brushed through her hair. 'I don't really feel like cooking.' She decided then that she would stop by at The Java for a light breakfast before nine.

    She continued planning ahead for the day's events as she touched up her face with some light blue eyeshadow. She had several orders to fulfill from the previous week, and there would be no doubt that she would have more. She did not mind, of course. This was what fate had called her for and she happily obliged. She finished with her guise and put on her crystal slippers. Before leaving her room, she focused on the disorganization of her room, which consisted of her scrolls, quills and writings scattered on the floor, and her bed a mess. With her magic, a thistle-colored glow enveloped her horn and with her vision at hoof, her room instantly transformed clean and orderly, with her bed made and her scrolls and ingredients put away.

    Her hooves carried her down the stairs and out the door as she began to walk to her designated cafe. The day was bright and the clouds were clear which called for a wonderful day. While basking in the warm embrace of the sun, Velvet Desires greeted several ponies with "good mornings" and "hellos". They responded with the same kindness she had extended. A few minutes later, she found herself at the quaint little cafe and smiled at the familiarly elegant exterior of lavender, purple and gold. She went on in and reserved herself a table. A short and rather skinny mocha-colored stallion came by to take her order. She asked for a simple daisy-and-lettuce sandwich accompanied by a cup of earl gray tea and the stallion complied with a quick nod and then nervously walked away with a blush, which left a small smile on her face. She enjoyed coming here to not only have a quiet place to dine, but to watch how mares and stallions reacted to her. She knew she was beautiful, and most ponies knew of it too. She did not act about it arrogantly, however. It was her belief that arrogance was one of the worst traits in attitude and she avoided it as much as possible. But it was always fun to watch them and their body language around her.

    Her breakfast came by fast and she had left after ten minutes or so. According to the clock from inside the cafe, it was almost nine, which meant it was almost time to open her shop, Enchant. She arrived to her home and locked the entrance upstairs. She checked the spiral heart-shaped clock. 8:59. Her dazzling blue eyes examined the room one more time. She deemed everything perfect.

    9:00.

    "I am open for business." She declared and waited for ponies to come inside.

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