WhiteSlash

what are hiccups, actually?

Gas bubbles!

why would anypony name a rabbit zoey?

Maybe the rabbit looked like a zoey

where is the love?

The Black Eyed Peas might know?

your head silly

I perfer oranges

is it more like an orange or a grapefruit?

Is what? O_o

no. its a book. reading is for eggheads! are you an egghead?

No im not an egghead

Roleplay Type: World of Equestria RP

Name: Plaid Haze.

Sex: Female.

Age: Young Mare.

Species: Earth Pony

Coat Color: Maroon/Burgandy.

Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: Completely white in the style of a Mohawk. The tail is kept in a tail wrap and mostly bushy. Missing part of her ear. Three black freckles on her cheeks.

Eye Color: Hazel eyes.

Cutie Mark: A tribal treble clef infront of a plectrum.

Physique: Tall sporty build.

Origin: Hailing from a faraway land her family arrived and set up in Manehattan. Since then she has became mostly nomadic where she drifts from place to place. Suprisingly close family ties.

Occupation: Currently busking across Equestria. Previously lead guitarist for The Filly Force Five

Motivation: Always striving to be different she took it upon herself to persue her dream of music. This alongside the need to make money for her family became her main reason for success. Before The Filly Force Five she had a short career with another band. During her time with the two bands she learned that she just genuinely loves to play music. Possessing an unbelieveable ability to shread guitar and alongside a suprisingly great vocal palet she took to the streets. Here she practices and is constantly striving to meet perfection at what she does. Every single profit she sends to her family and friends.

Likes:

• Loud music.
  
• Family values.
  
• The bonds of friendship.
  
• Trustworthy ponies.
  
• Guitar and singing.
  
• Cold weather.
  
• Ponies who stand up for themselves.
  

Dislikes:

• Power hungry ponies.
  
• Rich snobby ponies.
  
• Spicey foods.
  
• Warm weather.
  
• Awkward silences and silence of any form.
  
• Self failure.
  

Dress Sense: Whilst her dress sense appears dark and gritty at first glance her true sense is conveyed by how she handles herself. Whilst just liking her appearance and what she wears, she is a strong believer in not wearing a "social" uniform. Her clothes dont represent who she is, because she doesnt want them to.

Personality: A natural perfectionist and very cocky. Though for someone with those traits she does suprisingly well not to let them go to her head. A strong individual whom is always first to throw her hoof in the air for what she believes in. Being very courageous and the complete opposite of shy, she tackles everything head on. She thrives under pressure and conflict and dislikes being confined to silence for long periods of time. Family values take priority over everything.

Character Summary: Whilst growing up in a very supporting family she was naturally headstrong and believed she didnt need them as much as she would soon realise she would. When her family hits financial chaos their thoughts were placed squarly on their children. Whilst her siblings were too young to do anything Plaid seen her parents devotion and took to the streets to make money with her natual talent.

They soon pulled through and Plaid vowed that it would never happen again. As soon as she could she shot for independance and got a place of her own. She paid for everything by busking. Eventually she hit a big time break with a band and gained substancial profits from this venture. Every bit of the money was sent back to her family.

Soon after this she encountered her soon to be best friends forever. Rabble Rouser, Vivre Vrai, Plan B and JD. They became the Filly Force Five and so began the chapter of her life she would find herself missing every day. The band gained phenonemal cult following but no major success. So eventually they disbanded.

Since then she has took to the streets once more. Now she busks from town to town and city to city. Everynow and again money will fly back to her family or appear to each of her ex band mates in the form of odd gifts suited to their personality. With every chord she strikes and note she hits the feels a deep yearning for her old friends and the times they shared.

Plaid's song: “It weren’t supposed to end up like this, the deal with V2 it went up tits. Cos now i reside down at the clubs, I tell all the bands just how it’s done. Listen lasses I’ve had my time, Wish you coulda seen me in my prime. Yeah me and the boys yeah we were fame back stage at canter with the modcropped manes".

Young Mare Plaid and Filly Plaid:

Welcome back!!

PS Aye sure, "wee" Im taller than you!

Woo! Many thanks to all those who helped

A few more..

Babette Brighteyes

Bathsheba

Belladonna

Bimbette (Or Bimbo!)

Bluebell

BELLADONNA! Thanks I'll use that if its okay with you?

Let me try to come up with a few names. THINKING

How about:

Bright Bubbles

Bright Eyes

Bubbles

Barb Dwyer

Bobbie Sox

Belle Bottoms

Bunny Bare

Big Bertha

Im thinking very feminine as it is something the character wouldnt like, also im leaning towards Bright Eyes

Also what is her true given name?

I cant think of one D:

Reading the application, I feel the character has a lot of potential, but I still have several questions regarding her.

Is PlanB also a nickname along with Bee, or is this her true name? If her true name, why did her parents call her this?

Didn't her folks search for her? Feels like a rather weak reason to abandon home and family just because classes were not to her liking.

I think you mean the band breaking up or dispersal,; departure sounds like they left her behind or something similar rather then the band ending.

My main question though involves her cutie mark, which you described thusly: "Cutie Mark: A Cog behind a triangular test tube filled with a red colourful liquid. It symbolises her talent for inventing things. The cog representing the machinery side of things, whilst the test tube represents the science side." This is all well and good in itself but I do not understand how a special talent that involves invention, especial associated with machinery and science jives with her using her magic (and music brewing) to dispel a magical curse placed on her friend. Like I said, the cutie mark is perfectly fine, it just does mix with the origin story at all.

I changed the bits in question. Magic no longer features into her cure. Her musical talent is the same as Applejack being a pro at what she does and baking, Music is just a small talent she possesses. The curse was lifted alone by her inventive skills and as for her name, Plan B is a nickname, she resents her real name. I hope its okay now

Regardless, she now has a cutie mark adding to her strength as a character

I've stated that JD had been cursed and that Bee did infact use her inventive skills to help her. JD was distressed due to the curse and that the cutie mark represents her natural talent and the two sides to it. The cutie mark doesnt mean much to her as she had bigger plans. Her parents are also mentioned more at the end.

What caused her to run away from home?

She cured JD of her shyness... or her being mute? I'm pretty sure muteness can't be cured. Also, this says nothing about an invention. Did she use an invention to help her friend? Why was JD distressed in the first place? I mean, what does the Cutie Mark represent? What does it mean to Bee?

Also, where are her parents now? Did she ever got back to them?

This is a pretty good Application though.

I just clicked on a way to sort pretty much all of that!

Also her reason for running away is explained in her Origin

Thanks for the input!

I have reference pictures in my Gallery section! If you need more let me know

If you could do my OC Rabble Rouser that would be awesome?

dont read them. just watch.or...gasp is it too late? did you already read them?

No I know why i shouldnt read them. Its fine in the first book but then it all gets very repetitive?

so would ginny's body really have lied in the chamber forever?

I dont know, I dont really like Harry Potter to be honest, my girlfriend is attempting to make me like it though :L

Yes. But due to certain circumstances and over a great deal of time

for an english paper (hides again, looks both ways, comes out) where you had to compare a book to another piece of literature, would you/have you ever you MLP just to see if you could get away with it and still pass?

Having been off on study leave for a while and only recently becoming a brony, I havent. I might though :L

Well tbh It would depend on my writing skill, Maybe i could turn spongebob to my advantage I got an A pass on my last exam writing a short story about the exploits of Pirates

so when you make a boo boo you just skip over it and hope it goes unnoticed?

No i said i still correct my errors but with the general quality of my handwriting and artistic skill one would probally not notice that i fixed an error

what if you make a mis-doodle. do you have an extra eraser?

Yeah, It wouldnt make much of a difference. Im not very arty and my hand writing is horrible so It's hard to tell i even made a mistake :L