Kilojoules

Mm, yes, I really enjoyed reading this, it's quite interesting. But the points that my friend (mind if I call you that? ) Lime pulled up are quite true, and I really like Light's idea! But, nevertheless, 'Drowsy Feather' is simply brilliant. So original. At least, original as far as I know.

Keep doin' what yer doin'.

You know those 'Sea Salt Icecreams' from Kingdom Hearts? They exist. And they're damn good.

Okay, comment when you've updated.

Alright! I updated, and it's between 'Pumpkin is generally very kind' and 'But, this has also made him rather anal about how things are done.'

Enjoy

This app is so CUTE! I want to grab Pumpkin and give him a big ol hug! I can't wait for him to get accepted and I certainly hope we do some roleplaying in the future Maybe you should have him swing by Zecora's hut

Lol, sure! Thanks, I tried really hard on him, so far he's my favorite OC.

Only thing I would suggest is a bit about how/why he moved to Manehattan, and how he got his bakery.

It's really excellent for a first Application. Needs no changes, just a little expansion. Well done!

Ah! Great idea! I shall get right to work!

I like trains.

No, but seriously, I believe in ghosts, but I also know that a lot of things could just be loose pipes, or things in the vents (like loose change or something...) banging around....

I dunno, but whatever, I'm a believer of ghosts, aliens, those Crypto things...but that doesn't mean I see them everyday, actually, I never have 'personal' experiences!

Okay, that was a lie, but not very often.

How is this Application coming along?

Actually, I think I'm done. I was waiting to see if someone would point out any flaws in it. Is this good enough?

welcome ta canterlot sir!

"See ya next time! Hah ha! Welcome to Fyrestone! I am CL4P-TP, you may call me by my locally designated name, 'Claptrap'. Before continuing, please accept this ECHO communication device and heads-up display provided free of charge by the Dahl corporation!"

Uhm...thanks? I'm slightly frightened now.

No, but really, thanks, you all have been so kind.

Roleplay Type:

World of Equestria

Name:

Pumpkin Bright

Sex:

Stallion/Male

Age:

Stallion

Species:

Pegasus

Eye Color:

Bright yellow, like a Jack-O-Lantern's candle.

Coat Color:

Jack-O-Lantern Orange.

Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style:

Pumpkin Bright's mane is much like a Douglas Fir green, resembling the stalk of a fresh pumpkin, which is cut short and spike downwards slightly. It often gets in his eyes when he's working. His tail matches in color, but is slightly longer and is held a little higher than the norm. He usually doesn't change this style for any occasion.

Physique:

Pumpkin is slightly shorter than his Stallion counterparts, and even some Fillies, and is only slightly skinnier than most Ponies.

Cutie Mark:

His Cutie Mark is a Jack-O-Lantern with a Muffin design cut into it, the light from the unseen candle pouring out of it.

Origin/Residence:

Originating from Cloudsdale, Pumpkin now spends his days and nights working at his little Bakery in Manehatten, which has a small apartment above it in which he stays.

Occupation: Baker (mainly Muffins and the sort..)

Motivation:

The thought of putting delicious muffins into hungry Ponies' stomachs, and smiles on their faces, is what keeps Pumpkin Bright going through his darkest of days!

Likes:

• Baking
  
• Muffins
  
• Nightmare Night
  
• Working (It's not even work, really!)
  
• All types of Pumpkin based treats
  
• His family
  

Dislikes:

• Nosy ponies
  
• Embarrassing situations
  
• Burning his Goods
  
• Quitting Time
  
• Disappointing his family
  
• Judgmental ponies
  
• Mixing up orders
  

Character Summary:

Being born in Cloudsdale, like a lot of Pegasi, was a fun, fun time for Pumpkin. He attended a prestigious Fliers academy as a Foal and learned how to fly earlier than most other ponies would, but never really enjoyed his teachings, always wanting to stay inside (he really wasn't very athletic as a Foal, and even now he prefers to stay indoors..) instead of going out and racing with his friends. Being such an Introvert, his Mother sent him to a Summer Camp in hopes he would get more friends, but all he really got was bullied. He doesn't remember (or at least, claims not to remember) being bullied, and whenever the subject is brought up (perhaps by his parents or an old friend..) he tends to try and change it as soon as possible. But, other than those rough spots, the Silver Lining in his Cloud of Foalhood/Colthood shines true-and-through, and is always something he is willing to smile at.

Pumpkin Bright's parents were two wealthy Pegasi of Upper-Class Cloudsdale, willing to splurge their extensive money at almost anything. Living in Cloudsdale at their manor home, still, they gave Pumpkin Bright a good Foalhood, even if they were slightly overshadowing. They are proud of him, in a sense, but still regret that he is not a competitive flier like his brother, though they do enjoy the occasional gift box of pastries sent to them by their Son in Manehatten.

Being a Jack-O-Lantern with a Muffin design cut into it, the candle light pouring forth from the Muffin Shaped orifice, his Cutie Mark could not fit him any better. Pumpkin Bright got his Cutie Mark a bit into his Colt years, having been helping out at the local bakery (which he found he really enjoyed doing), he had been allowed to make any sort of pastry he wanted, by himself! Delighted, he immediately picked Muffins, being his favorite type of baked good, and set off into the kitchen to make it. He had added in Pumpkin bits, Cinnamon, and a plethora of other ingredients, and the result: Pumpkin Bright's famous "Crumbly Pumpkin Chunk Muffins", a favorite both back in Cloudsdale, and in Manehatten.

The single most horrid (and happy!) moment in Pumpkin's Life was when he got his Cutie Mark. Having come from a long line of famous fliers, his parents

weren't too thrilled when he showed them the Muffin Baking Cutie Mark that had been placed on Pumpkin's flank. But, because they are not total monsters, they smiled and supported him, even if he didn't turn out exactly how they wanted. That sounds wonderful, but Pumpkin Bright overheard his father (who was slightly enraged) spew venomous words about Pumpkin's Special Talent. That moment, though slightly traumatizing, pushed him to work even harder to please his parents, so that he could show them that Baking isn't a useless talent for simpletons. But, this has also made him rather anal about how things are done.

Pumpkin left home on his first birthday of stallionhood, feeling that he needed a change in scenery, he headed on down to Manehatten, with the financial aid and approval of his parents. He had worked in a little bakery for a monotonous mare, who later passed away and left the Bakery to gather dust. Seeing this great opportunity out of an even greater misfortune, he sent word to his parents asking for the money to buy the Bakery, and after much pleading and bartering, he won them over. And with the money he made from the bakery, after repaying his parents of course, he added another story to his small bakery, the apartment in which he now lives!

Pumpkin is generally very kind, often handing a helping hoof to those who need it. He has a slight problem with OCD, and when something doesn't meet his standards he might start fidgeting a little, but because of his raising, he does not confront the offender about it. This makes it difficult to work with others, though he does his best. Serving his muffins with a kind, sincere smile, and occasionally an extra one for the Foals, he works his Bakery with slight timid loneliness, the only companion that he is willing to have is his Oven.

Though not entirely sure how he will go about it, he plans to get his muffins on a tray at the Grand Galloping Gala, so that even more ponies can delight in his muffins. But, to do this, he must have friends in high places! Thus, he wishes to get out of his shop and meet somepony new! But will this be as easy as it might sound?

Only time will tell.

Well, there we are, my very first roleplay application! I worked really hard on this, and personally I think it is good enough, though I am leaving it WIP until I get some feedback, just incase I missed something.... Feel free to give constructive criticism!

Oh, I wasn't trying to bump it. Whatever that means.

Heehee, when a Forum Post gets a reply (such as the one I am writing right now!) and it is posted (like it is now..) it brings that Topic to the top because it is the most recently active.

Now you know;

AND KNOWING IS HALF THE BATTLE! -insertcheesyGIJoepic-

I absolutely adore her. Brilliant name.

Welcome to the forums! Have an excellent stay!

Trust me, I will, and thanks.

Hi, welcome to Canterlot.

Heh, thank you.

Hi there! You're quite spirited. I like it!

Welcome to Canterlot, I look forward to seeing more of you around here!

I don't quite understand what you mean, but thank you!

Welcome to canterlot. Hope you like it here. Wonderful name for the intro by the way

Hehe, thanks, it sort of just popped into my head.

Welcome to Canterlot!

Hope to see you around in RP eventually!

Thank you, that means a lot.

Lol, welcome, and don't worry, my Mother makes jokes about my love for the Pony Fandom a lot, too.

About Myself: Hello! I'm Kilojoules, and I have a severe identity problem.

I live in a rough location, USA. My hobbies, though not very interesting, include:

Sitting inside all day, writing, reading, wishing I could draw, PS3, my Computer, and finally....Roleplaying. Yep. I was absolutely...what's the word? Stupefied? Sure. I was absolutely stupefied when I had found out that there was a dedicated MLP roleplay forum sight thing...

Now, while Forum Roleplays are not entirely unfamiliar to me, I find them a bit...hard to use. I'm use to IM rp, so, it'll take me a while to get used to this. (But it'll be easier to stay in 3rd person, thank Celestia..)

Anyway, that's all about me...minus the important bits.

How I found Canterlot.com: I found it from a user on FimFiction.net, who had made a comment about "His RP character on 'Canterlot.com'. I was delighted.

How I became a fan of MLP:FiM: This is the rough bit;

I don't really remember to well. I know that at least 2-3 of my friends were Bronies/Pegasisters, so one of them must have told me about it. Like most Bronies/Pegasisters before they were Converted, I was sceptic, but being bored at 3 in the Morning can force a man to do crazy things....for the better of mankind, in this case! I had instantly fell in love, and I've been converting all my Non-MLP friends and family. (I'm working on my Brother, and I think I broke my Cousin rather easily...Hehehe...)

My favourite main cast pony/s: AppleJack,Miss Rarity,Pinkamina Diane Pie
This is the part that confuses me...

I suppose I'll just compile everything into this.....LIKE A BAWS.

Hello! I'm Kilojoules, and I have a severe identity problem.

I live in a rough location, USA. My hobbies, though not very interesting, include:

Sitting inside all day, writing, reading, wishing I could draw, PS3, my Computer, and finally....Roleplaying. Yep. I was absolutely...what's the word? Stupefied? Sure. I was absolutely stupefied when I had found out that there was a dedicated MLP roleplay forum sight thing...

Now, while Forum Roleplays are not entirely unfamiliar to me, I find them a bit...hard to use. I'm use to IM rp, so, it'll take me a while to get used to this. (But it'll be easier to stay in 3rd person, thank Celestia..)

Anyway, that's all about me...minus the important bits.

I don't really remember to well. I know that at least 2-3 of my friends were Bronies/Pegasisters, so one of them must have told me about it. Like most Bronies/Pegasisters before they were Converted, I was sceptic, but being bored at 3 in the Morning can force a man to do crazy things....for the better of mankind, in this case! I had instantly fell in love, and I've been converting all my Non-MLP friends and family. (I'm working on my Brother, and I think I broke my Cousin rather easily...Hehehe...)

Well, there you are! My introduction, totally original....and from what I can see, no spelling errors that I did not intend.