Fireheart

Fireheart flared his wings to keep him from crashing to the earth. He just landed as he saw the mask attack Discord and slam him towords the earth. He's gotton stronger somehow. He said casiously.

Song looked at her instrument whisch was set a light and shook it until the flames went out and the violin didn't have a scratch on it. Honestly Discord fire or any kind of chaos magic can't effect my violin you should know that by now.

You're not the only one who can teleport old one. Fireheart declared then vanished for a second and reappeared above Discord and released a jet of flame from his nostrils that engulfed the Chaos God.

Fireheart flicked his boredly hoof and sent the chaos ball back at Discord. You've gotton boring Discord. where's that fire I knew you had. He taunted rearing in the air and striking the ground with his forehooves. A few seconds afterword a geyser of fire erupted under Discord's feet.

Oh dear me what am I going to do? Song replied dramaticly lifting her violin and raising the bow. All I have is this bueatifull violin.

Sunddenly the sky turned crinsom as bolts of fire started raining down upon Discord and Strife then the scarlet red alicorn Fireheart apeared in front of song and faced towords Discord and said. Discord I don't know how in Equestria you broke free of you stone prison, but I'm here to seal you away once again.

Song's horn began to glow as she shut her eyes tightly in concetration. After a few minutes she opened them again and gave a sligh smile. Let him come She said confindently.

Oh dear he won't be happy to see me. Song replied nervously looking in the direction of increasing chaos magic.

OOC hey perhaps we should some kind of tornament to see who is better at Discord hmm?

Yes I'm "one" of the first, and as for the mask not even Fireheart's books mention it. As for the princesses, two thousand years ago they weren't even born yet at the time Fireheart's or should I Solarflare's mother ruled the land. I bet the mask was one of the first creations to fight against Discord. Am I right? She replied back thoughtfully then she turned to captive unicorn. And I have a question. When you said gear you don't mean the Elements themselves do you?

I like it. I feel like this is a type of story that would be told to fillies and colts when they're little and before the event with twilight and her friends. You said this is the beggining to your story? Because you did a nice job with the ending and it feels like there isn't going to be any further story. I'm not saying that you shouldn't continue it but maybe edit a sentence or two in the last paragraphy to hint at further conflict. This may not be proper critiquing but readers opinoins don't hurt either, right?

Also the names are really reminding me of the Warriors serirs by Erin Hunter; Fireheart and Morningstar xD

Seroiusly I came up with those names I didn't ever know about that book. As for my story as it reads its only a prologue I'm working on chapter 1 right now, buy it will take me awhile. And thanks for the opinion I need that to see what to add and fix with my writings.

Yes I did dear I guess if you add this generation I'm little over two thousand years. I am Sweet Song one of the first element bearers. I represent kindness. Song replied to the young pony.

It's about time you decided to give up. Goodness I've forgotten had hardheaded Discord's followers can be. Song said then turned to the amber pony Oh and darling do me a favor? Never try to save my life again please I can hold my own. I might be a thousand years old but I'm not helpless. To balance. Alright I think you can talk to him now dear.

Heh do you honestly think you can take me little colt. Come back after a few thousand years and try to face me if you dare. She replied cooly staring mockingly back at him then her pesonallity swiched back and her coat went back to white. Oh dear did I do it again? She said ashamed putting a hoof on her head shaking it sadly.

Blood wasn't going to let this pony interfere with her interagation. She gave Silver a murderous look and levitated him high in the air and strangled him for a few moments before sending him back to the ground. Don't interfere or it'll be your last She threatened. And you she snarled at the unicorn, what did you call me a "snobby Dress-Making wannabe"? The only gods I know are Luna, Celestia and Fireheart, my best friend who originally created the first Elements so don't Buck With ME!

good luck

Typical from a pony who is limited in magic how tragic. How does is it feel to be such a weakling before all of us I even asume you thought I wasn't even a threat up till now. Blood violin shot back her eyes blood red. Now are you going to cooperate with us or do we have to resort to more...drastic matters "bro"

I have sad news to report. Saucy passed away last night. I have no idea why she died. Like any good amazon warrior spider, she left a pile of her victims under her web.

I would like to request a spotlight on barn spiders, in her honor.

R.I.P. Dear saucy

I'm sure there should be a counterspell for this curse. Song said concernly Perhaps a friend of mine can help.

Silver darling try to stay calm Song said putting a hoof on Silver's chest to keep him away then she turned to the Discod pony with the look of pure murder on her face. Now dear you better explain yourself and don't think of any funny buisness for I know all of Discord's trickes and I asure you they won't work on me. She said cruelly keeping her violin close as her coat changed from white to jet black.

In a flash Song had here violin out and started playing it yet again. This time with a quick paced beat her horn glowing brightly While the music played the two downed ponies were pulled from danger and the wall was starting to be pushed back. When the ponies were safe Song released her magic placing the wall back in place and sealing it shut. Song became interested in the mask the odd pony was wearing and began to inspect it.

Hey there Inky. It's good to meet another writer in Canterlot. You'll enjoy it here trust me.

Silver dear are you sure that was the best way to send that poor dear sailing though the air like that? She asked then cantered towords the ruined building to search for any life signs.

When she approached she noticed the unicorn that sent the tornado at them on the ground out cold. Next thing she knew she heard a yelp followed by a thud then some groaning.

She looked at the direction of where the was coming from and saw the pony who was tossed and quickly lended first aid.

Song then turned back to unconscious unicorn and scanned him for life. She cofirmed that he was still alive and was really tired out.

He's out cold friend we better wait till he wake and we'll try to get him to talk.

Oh you must be the poor pony who was cursed by Celestia when somepony sided with Luna. I'm dreadfully sorry darling. Song replied to gravel, and no not everypony took sides with Luna. My dear Fireheart didn't even choose a side.

Reindere? Sausage? ........Ew.

I don't think... YOU ARE GRASPING... THE SEVERITY OF THE SITUATION!! >:I

I beg your pardon?

Hmm... do you mean the background character (fandom named) Octavia? If so, according to the Cast List, she has a player. We don't normally allow previous relationships with Cast characters, but seeing as she's a background character, we may be a little more lenient. If you do mean the Octavia from the show, you'll need permission from her player for a previous relationship.

that should fix things for now

Come at me brah. :I

You're choice.