PurpleBird

I totally agree about Dr, Whooves. I've never seen Dr. Who, or do I have any interest in it, so the fan attention he gets doesn't mean much to me.

Yeah basically my opinion too about him... I mean he's a big meh with me, along with Lyra other than that I care a bit about the other background ponies.

Well... The friends I have are two condescending smart-aholics, one kind of intolerant, that see anything that is classified as a kids show should stay as a kids-should-only-watch-this-show. So I can't really tell them I'm a brony, I mean, they know nothing about the fandom or it's community. So even if I were to say I was, they'd just glare at me for a long period of time, nod their heads, and go back to typing up cliche romances....

Though, I don't mind they don't know, saves me from being unnecessarily bugged about it. *Shrugs* But do I have anything close to a brony-friend? Nope.

I can't remember the first BW team I had when I started. But, I can tell you the awesome team I have now! (Almost a complete dream team if you will)

Dragonair(Spikey)- A dragon type Pokémon that is both strong, beautiful, and no-doubt one of my strategic Pokémon!

Glaceon - One of my favorites and Pokémon that has been with me since Diamond! Getting her from a Eevee egg and (accidently/without realizing) evolved her at the Rt. 217~. Now she is one of my beautiful powerhouses. Combined with her Sp. Attack boost and strength she is perfectly fit with my team. And definitively my teams representative.

Zoroark - Most definitively my OHKO Pokémon! I normally use him for a quick finish or when one of my other's have used status effects and I see a opening.

Lopunny - Another Pokémon that's been around for a while. She's me status effect Pokemon and a bit of a powerhouse as well! And non-the less another beauty to my team!

Ninetales - This one has been a childhood favorite, no doubt about it and still is one of my favorites! Ninetales, having it's speed and Defense, makes a good status effecter and a Pokémon that is good to use as a last resort.

Milotic - Another one of my beauties and SUPER power house. This Milotic can stay stunning and take on anything~ Being my number one water type.

Yeah, a super girly team, but, I don't care~ I like it like that.

That would be a sweet OC... (I mean if they aren't or anything)

Good job on your mecha pics!

-3 Rarity

Power up X2 Fluttershy

Ampharos is pretty cool.

I dunno if I should start a new ultra cool team for the up coming game or carry over my other team in the first BW game?

So many choices~

(Will gladly respond to this)

Welcome to Canterlot!

Hope you enjoy your stay

Official would have to be Cheerilee

Fan-base would be Lyra...

Welcome to Canterlot Beautiful! (lol)

Hope you enjoy your stay!

You probably can't yet, since you're not in the Roleplayers group. But if you're able to make a topic there now, go ahead!

A topic in the character Log? Or..? Sorry, it's really early @@

EDIT: Oh! Sorry about that! I can't submit into the character log just yet. Okay I am more than willing to wait! Happy that Canvas has been accepted though~

Excellent! Can't wait to see her once she's in action now!

Ahhh, that looks very good! Well done!

Thank you all so much

Am I able to make a character log of her now, or must I wait until I am 'Roleplayer' ?

Sorry if this was in the FAQ's or it's an obvious answer.

It has been edited

Awesome app here! You may still edit your cutie mark story, following Bramble's notes, if you wish to do so, but I'm giving you the great big...

Just be sure that if edits are made, you let us know so that appropriate action can be taken regarding approval

Oh yay! Thank you so so much!

And I will make sure to tell you via quote!

The hooks are great, and that's just what was needed. good job!

The cutie Mark story still seems to be about her special talent - not about who she is. However, the character is certainly good enough that I will be posting it to the head RP staff for approval. If you want to consider more on her Cutie Mark story, I have included a little bit of food for thought in the spoiler below.

She got her cutie mark for winning second place in an art competition. Does this mean she finally understood the competitive spirit that the other pegasus ponies had, and found her own way to take part in it - as a freelance artist, where competition is at its most fierce? Did it mean that when she didn't get first, she realized she was still searching for that competitive approval - and finally gave up the need to compete, going her own route? Was it just a realization of how much she loved sharing her art, and having people look at it critically?

Oh, alright! These are pretty good, but one of these strike me the most which I will happily edit in!

Thank you so much for the helpful feedback!

First video for me, Not so sure about the second one...

I'm stuck on an island with Rainbow Dash~

Awwwwwwwe Yeaaahh~

Congrats! Hopefully, someday, I'll be an Equestrian as well!

Welcome to Canterlot!

I hope you enjoy your stay!

Awwe. I thought that was quite cute to read!

I think Derpy is the most offensive pony ever!

Ok, did the ponies who can't take a joke stop reading? Trixie. Totally Trixie.

When I first read this I was like "K. Says the one with Docter Whooves avatar."

But than I just laughed

A very nice piece, indeed. I have a couple ideas which might help it just a little bit, though not entirely necessary.

1: What did Canvas realize about herself when she won that second-place prize? What element of her personality did that highlight, that gave her a moment of understanding which caused her cutie mark to come into being?

2: You talk a lot about how your character tends to retreat, retreat, retreat ... unless someone draws her out. What about her personality actually drives her to join RPs? What will *she* do, actively, to become engaged in a situation? What hooks will draw her out of that retreat?

For instance, Fluttershy is the same kind of outcast from Cloudsdale's extremely extroverted and competitive culture. She also retreats significantly. However, she will actively engage herself in a situation if it involves cuteness or someone in trouble, someone who's hurt and needs tending. These are her 'hooks'.

I have edited it! If it doesn't quite make sense please tell me. @_@

hi hi

I never understood the dislike for Twist, I don't think she ever hurt anypony.

Oh, worst character you say? Hmm. Maybe Featherweight? Something odd about a pony who goes around taking compromising pictures of everypony, publishing them, making ponies upset, not having to apologize and getting promoted because of it.

I have to agree with you on Featherweight... Though I was pretty neutral with him, as unforgiving as he did come across as.

And I don't understand why people don't like twist either. I thought she was a cutey

*Shrugs* Oh well.

It's okay, don't be scared... just find someone you trust and who likes to read to glance over it and give you tips on what to do ^_^ Then post it for all to see.. just remember, there WILL be a LOT of negative comments... they're just negative people, don't worry about them... If they can't come up with a constructive way to criticize your work, than they're probably not the best people to listen to anyway...

As for my story... http://www.fimfictio...rpy's-Star-Role That's the derpy one, check out my others too ^-^

And i'll take a look for yours in a moment.

Oh I know there will always bee negativity as I know there will be always an expansion to grow. As an artist I know that very well.

And I will defiantly give the story a read!