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"Roger that!" Sugar Apple affirmed, setting down her box of sugar apples among the other food on the table. But now, another choice laid before the purple pegasus. Which snack should she try first? Seeking guidance, Sugar asked; "Hey Lady, which thin' ya' think ah should try first?" Gosh, there were so many darn things to choose from! Once Pink Lady helped pick a snack, then Sugar would begin some further chit-chat to pass the time.....

Thank you for your patience. After discussion with my colleagues, I have to inform you that we can't accept an OC into Canterlot Chronicles that revolves around highly advanced technology like arcade games. CC doesn't have the same slice-of-life feeling as World of Equestria itself, but we intend CC to stick with the same world mechanics as WoE does. This means no advanced electronics that require computing, even if they pop up as gag items not meant to be taken seriously. We want to keep CC at the same overall pre-contemporary tech level maintained on the show and WoE to maintain a consistent setting, even if that means ruling against gag items.

If you'd still like to keep your OC completely as is, transfer him to the Free For All section by adding "Roleplay Type: Free For All" at the top of your app sheet. We hope you understand our reasons for not wanting advanced electronics in our Canterlot Chronicles section.

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Hope you enjoy the RPs that we provide here! ^_^

Hmmm... just performed a name check, and it looks like your CO's name is already taken. You'll need to change your diamond dog's name, I'm afraid.

PS: While I'm around, I also noticed that you haven't fixed that "costumer" misspelling yet in your first Character Summary sentence. Please do so.

Night clubs featuring electronic dance music should be okay as long as the following guidelines are followed:

1. Don't go too overboard with highly technologically-advanced stage effects. If something can't be done with magic or pre-1950s technology, it's going to be too futuristic for WoE and CC's setting.
   
2. Under ZERO circumstances are recreational drugs to be incorporated into such an environment. Thanks to negative connotations with illegal drug use, we ask that you don't use the term "rave" in WoE/CC. Instead, stick to more neutral terms like "night club" or "party".
   

Pretty good app, Lux! The only thing I'd recommend is to elaborate more on why your griffon took a weather team job, and what exactly she does with thunderclouds given the fact that griffons are less capable in weather magic than pegasi (griffons may be able to walk on clouds, but only pegasi are likely to have the ability to do more advanced feats and stuff). Other than that, good job.

Howdy partner! May Canterlot fulfill all your pony needs.

Revised summary looks very good. I just have one edit to suggest:

A thing she 'forgets' to mention though is the Dog blood floating in her veins and the greed which slumbers within her mind.

Get rid of the text I marked, since nothing suggests in the show that diamond dogs are greedy for biological reasons (as opposed to dragons). Once you get rid of that, you're good to go.

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In case ye missed it, th' first part 'o th' scurvy pirate storyline got released not too long ago. Here be some 'o me thoughts:

• ARRRRR, Equestrian band 'o pirates don't seem to do all that much actual piratin'. I be predictin' that explains why th' Mane 6 didn't inquiry th' legality 'o joinin' a scurvy pirate cap'n's crew.
  
• Spike as a trusty parrot? Sucks to be him.
  
• Potential new lore locations: Horseshoe Bay 'n Gallopinghost Island. Plus thar's a Castaway Current.
  
• Fluttershy seems a wee bit out 'o character not wantin' to let that fish be off, even though she displayed no such issues in Feelin' Pinkie Keen.
  
• A map whar th' X always keeps movin'? Interestin'...
  
• Th' four ponies 'o th' apocalypse be a thin' now too.....
  

So far, I gift 'tis series a 3 out 'o 5. Not amazin'ly full 'o awe, but not bad either. ^_^

Too lazy to make a new thread for Issue 12, so here are my random thoughts on the conclusion of "Neigh Anything":

• Nice to see that bit with Cady and Twi bonding.
  
• Also liked seeing things from Cady's POV.
  
• I'd say that jock... got banished to the Moon. XD
  

Howdy, neighbor! May Canterlot fulfill all your S4 discussion needs.

An dual artist/roleplayer, eh? Glad to have you on board.

Welcome to Canterlot; nice to see our EQD cat dragged you in here.

Have fun at our forums, Opa301! ^_^

Welcome to Canterlot! As you already see, there's plenty of Whovians hiding out here too. XD

Ahoy hoy! How big is your pony collection?

Greetings! Funny enough, I also love being here because it's neither too small or too big.

Hello there! Twilight Sparkle happens to be my favorite pony.

Howdy partner! It sounds likes Hope is someone who'll fit in quite nicely in our adventure-based Canterlot Chronicles RP section.

PS: I, too, also don't self-identify as a brony for reasons.

Ooooh, I've always liked checking out OCRemix every now and then. Nice to see you drop by!

Welcome to Canterlot! I hope to see you in our RP sections very soon.

"Oh, nothing, never mind. That'll be five bits. Don't worry. I wont make her jealous because you get a kiss from me."

Flash Sentry visibly sunk as Applejack decided against revealing the identity of his secret admirer. Oh well, it probably wasn’t something worth rocking the boat for anyway. Just like that, all of Flash’s eagerness went down the drain as he paid the five bits for his gala bushel. But just as he laid down his bits for AJ to pick up, and idea formed in the guard’s mind.

“You uhhh, know,” Flash stammered; “Maybe… you can send most of my bushel to my secret admirer. I really only need four apples for myself right now.” Technically, the private only needed one apple; he’d give the other three to his army buddy Radiant Steel. “Tell her to write me when you send her this bushel.” Flash did not really mind surrendering most of the apples he purchased, considering buying them was a spur of the moment decision subtly suggested by Princess Twilight. Plus… it couldn’t hurt doing this if it meant seeing if the mare was dating material, right?

However, Flash Sentry had one more thing to ask in order to defuse any potential jealousy issues. “Oh, Miss Applejack,” the armored pegasus hesitated for a moment, feeling weird over what he was just about to say; “.....you don’t have to kiss me, I suppose. No point in hurting my admirer’s feelings, is there?” Again, Flash didn’t mind losing out on a kiss; there will always be plenty of mares in the sea.....

Thinking back on Part 2 again:

Another reason why sending Twi back to town made absolutely zero sense: didn't the rest of the Mane 6 remember that all six Elements need to be together to work? You'd think it'd make sense to bring the Element of Magic along with the five others to that one Tree they all originated from.