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Yes I kinda agree with You(And quite no, it just matter some people like to make big detailed character.. Sometimes its good, sometimes it is sad). But describing how he managed to get his cutie mark, describing a little about his parents and telling his dreams/what he would like to do in future is something that is necessary in summary, maybe not parents/dream thing but how he managed to get his cutie mark is for sure very important while making a pony. Just trying to help You here with some of question that could provide us better information with Your character, aswell as it would help You in RP ^_^.

So I should do a thorough background of him while not making it to extensive? Apart from how he gained his mark, parents, and future, is there anything else I should add or elaborate on?

Thank you for the advice, BTW ^_^ Writing isn't my strong point.

It should be enough I think, these three questions (But I can't be sure).

about what he want to do in future, here are some my suggestion : Maybe he want to open museum with his own drawings so ponies could see them? Maybe he is searching for someone who could help him exist in the world?

This character have a good potential, You just need only to good describe it. About extensive it is up to You to be honest, some of people like to make a very big description of his/her character as others like to don't make is extensive.

It is good point to make application but could You explain it a little? Helpstaff will aswell ask You for it.

How he managed to get his cutie mark? Who was his parents or what they was doing in life? Does he know already what he would like to do in future (Job) ?

You have here good base for a app but You could expand it more, so there will be stories to make with character in RP and it will help to explore character more.

Could You provide photos or something of her if she was in episode? I don't know if this pony was in MLP FiM cause I first heard this name(Even can't find on wiki). If it is Your OC then please remove [FiM cast] from title cause this is reserved for Cast Characters.

I don't even know what to say... Things like this are painful.. Take all time You need Artax, I hope everything will be alright

I was asking if she could read lips not that she can, silly. Since being deaf she won't hear the conversation anyway, so how can she a hear potential questions that are directed at her? Does she have them write it down?

Oh sorry I didn't get it at first XD, no she can't. Maybe she will learn it in future.

She cant, I didnt said anywhere She can Blinded . Dislike mean when She is topic of jokes and somehow she discover it.

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Lotus smiled to herself as she was moving again to forest, where she was poison joked. But she thought this time she maybe will be lucky and it will not happen, atleast she had two candies so she was very happy about it. Again in Red Jester costume that had a very long coat to ground, her face had white make-up, on the costume there was a Diamond and Heart on it. Lotus as always didn't came too much to other ponies, in this costume she decided again to observer other ponies and what they was doing. She needed to prepare very well for upcoming days and talking with other ponies right now could screw her idea, she just was a silent watcher in night.

She is final now

Ok, posted summary. When I will be back to home I will make her final.

Thank very much Brian for help with grammar and Pony_Sage with overall look of character.

Lotus was afraid to meet other ponies couple of hours ago, she was poison joked and she was stinking a lot, it was very terrible for her ! One of the horrors that can even happen to SPA pony, especially that she always tried to smell good. When the effect of Poison Joke went away, she decided to try again her luck on Nightmare Night. Lotus in Red Jester costume with a cape to the ground and Diamond and Heart on it, with white-painted face decided to take a look this time into a haunted house. It was one of the most interesting places she could go in her opinions, especially that in forest she was poison joked. Lotus went inside Haunted House and started to take a overall look over things that was very interesting for her. She entered house and started to take a look over place, until she heard a whining about help. She decided to take a quite look what is going on here.

Lotus after loosing her candie she decided to take a look in House of mirrors. In her blue jester costume with club and spade on it, disguised her very well. And white-painted face aswell, she started to move around and take a look in the mirrors while smiling to herself. She thought it is a very nice place to spent time. She smiled when she saw herself in one of mirrors, it was very funny for her. After couple of mins Lotus finally decided to leave house but she kinda started to be lost inside it and only sighed to herself while trying to find the exit from Celestia house of mirrors.

At first to make it clear, she is a deaf pony.

Thank very much Brian for help with grammar and Pony_Sage with overall look of character.

Name: Requiem

Sex: Female

Age: Young Mare

Species: Unicorn

Coat Color: Pewter

Mane/Tail/Markings Color & Style: style is windswept and in loose pigtails, colors are silver and dive grey

Eye Color: Brown

Cutie Mark: It is a black waveform and above it, there is a baton

Physique: Below Average, she seems to be a weak pony. She often wear a green coat.

Origin: Fillydelphia

Occupation: Music Conductor

Motivation: Trying to make best music she can as a deaf pony, it gives her strength to work over it as she proving that even if You are cripple pony/creature You can make Your wishes to come true.

Likes: Music, her band, friends and family that care for her. Determined ponies and creatures that trying to make her wishes and dreams to come true.

Dislikes: Bad sounds, being a topic of jokes when she don't know it, band members that doesn't like that she is music conductor.

Character Summary: Some say that Requiem was always an unlucky pony, being born deaf. Times weren’t easy for her, when somepony laughed at her, she wouldn’t know as she couldn’t hear them. Despite these sort of problems, she worked hard to be happy in her life instead of allowing her deafness to hold her back.

Requiem was born in Fillydelphia to a wealthy family who never knew want. Her dame a local banker and her sire was a chief editor of one of the top magazines in Fillydelphia. Requiem was the first born foal after years of trying for her folks who realized their otherwise health pony was born deaf, which concerned them greatly. Determine to do the best they could for their hearing impaired daughter, it was decided she would be better off homeschooled so to better protect her from any social stigma by her peers. But Requiem didn’t like the isolation homeschooling brought, she wanted to have friends and convinced her parents to allow her out more with the hopes of socializing. However despite her enthusiasm, she had difficulty communicating with other ponies, relying on writing for communication, which proved much more difficult with strangers especially in outdoor settings.

Requiem was so discouraged with her failed first attempts at socialization she initially ended up spending all her time indoors again. After couple of months, Requiem discovered how she can contact with other ponies when she ran into a group of foals outside her home and noticed one of them communicating by writing into the ground. Using this technique she was able to communicate with the group she was deaf but she could talk to them through writing. The other foals were perfectly fine with this being used to their friend’s writings, and it was from this moment she made her first friends.

Around this time she discovered her fascination with music despite the fact she could not hear the actual melodies, instead it was the arrangement of notes and what they conveyed that enthralled her. It was through her studying of sheet music that she first began to speak to herself by using the vibrations she felt in her larynx as a guide. Her parents enrolled her in a special class upon learning this where a unicorn tutor taught her through the magic in her horn how to first detect and then interpret the vibrations sounds made. The lessons were difficult at first but Requiem soon got the hang of it through meticulous study and focus learning through vibrations what various sounds were and their meaning, especially when it pertained to music.

It was here that Requiem realized she wanted to try something that was unheard of for someone with her condition; she wanted to be a music conductor. Her surprised parents never the less supported her in her new desire. Thanks to her ability to detect the vibrations of music through her horn she managed to succeed in her new passion. Although not perfect she was none the less quite accomplished. It was through her experience as a conductor her cutie mark appeared, a black waveform with a baton above it, she had finally found her true calling.

In addition to her deafness Requiem suffers from having a rather weak frame that makes normal physical activity difficult. Despite her accomplishments in overcoming her physical disabilities, the difficulties they present in life and the poor attitudes of some towards her because of them do emotionally drain Requiem. She occasionally finds herself breaking down and crying, feeling she had been given a bad deal in life. Despite her occasional moments of weakness, Requiem continues to strive forward, working hard to become a great conductor of note in the Equestrian music scene.

How my deaf pony would work:

* She communicates with other ponies through writing letters and/or writing information on ground.

* With magic she can feel vibrations, with this she can determine the quality of music with this she leads ponies on how to play in the orchestra.

* When I would make a topic where she play I will RP as well as the band unless Requiem will find other OC/maybe mane cast characters that would like to work with her.

* Not all from ponies from Requiem band will be happy that deaf pony order them how to play.

We are reaching the point where it's getting to many for one game. But we will sort this out once the real thread is online.

Ok, so I figured most of it out, I'll make a post tommorow in the free RP section and PM the ones that showed interest.

If there will be space, count me in please ^_^

ohh! Thank for sharing link to RiM here, gotta need to try it with friends ^_^

She is final now, I mainly reworked second and third paragraph. First paragraph is still the same.

Beauty smiled to ponies that gathered here while playing her sousaphone, she kinda interested looked at Hayseed what she is playing. When they started to ask question, Brass slowly stopped to play her Sousaphone cause she would have a problems to answer ponies. She looked at Octavia and gave again a smile.

Yes indeed! It sounds really interesting, we definitely need to go to this party. Said Beauty fully being happy, she could come to a party with her best marefriend Octavia, she a bit nodded when Tavia said about silly noise.

I quite agree with Octavia here, what is... I mean, how You make that noise?

Beuaty was eating her food while listening to Moondrop, she nodded a bit and from her bag took water to drink while eating but still was clearly listening to her. It was interesting pony, she is a pony full of fun, first she do her delivers to later keep on her hobbies. Beauty smiled a bit when she was in middle of eating her food, when Moondrop has end talking Brass nodded a bit and smiled again to her.

It is great to see pony full of energy and potential. You wake up at morning to do deliveries first then to have some fun with Your hobbies in night, it is nice to see Moondrop. She smiled again as she started to hit grass with her hoof, just cause she wanted to see something to do while talking with Moon.

So You deliver things, You like Your jobs or You are searching already for another one?

With her sister Aloe, they prepared very well for this night. After couple of weeks of preparing, the event finally came so they could do their idea. Lotus in blue jester costume with club and spade on it, disguised her very well. And white-painted face, with it ponies had problems which sister is Aloe and which sister is Lotus. She decided to take a look at Nightmare Moon monument. slowly she started to move to it, a bit grining while heading to it. She saw another pony and thought it will be a good idea to test out her costume here, with a whistle she approached statue, without looking at another pony. She started to read what was on statue and after couple of minutes she put down one of her candies she had in bag near statue, slowly taking a look at pony that was near of statue.

Saw looked at Mal and nodded a bit to her, he was surprised that she paid to him especially that he don'tw anted money. Especially that with these money he will really can buy some decent tools and maybe rent something to start his own business. He smiled to Mal and again nodded to her.

Thank You very much but I told You it wasn't necessary, but really thank You and I appreciate it. With this I will buy indeed decent tools. Saw took all money to his pocket and started slowly to head off from the shop. While he was near door he again looked at Mal with a smile.

Thank You for letting me try with repairs and thank for the keys, now... Goodbye and see You someday I think.

Harmony sighed as she was listening to conversation between QuickLime and AppleBloom. She nods a bit and smiled a bit to both of them. Flighty had fly away from her mane to nearest branch and started to sing like birds, especially sparrow do. When both of them has end talking, she looked at Quick Like and smiled.

You see, it was easy to evade us cause You should hear that someone is running here, it wasn't that quietly right? Harmony laughed a bit to both of them and again looked at Quicklime.

I understand that You was quite embarrassed that You got right into our running, but You need to aswell see our point of view in this situation.

Oh cute! I haven't been able to find the blind bag ponies anywhere, my Toys R Us can't seem to keep them in stock.

To be honest I didn't get them from blind bag, Twilight, RD, Pinkie and Rarity was in one pack for 30 PLN (Polish currency) and AJ was alone for 15 money. Sad that I can't get Fluttershy this way from what I heard .

I like Your and Flutterscotch collection very much to be honest ^_^.

I see I didn't posted my Pony collection here so far, so here they go :

She will be ready at first november

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(Holy gave me permission to „control” a bit his character in first post ^_^)

Heart Shine was very excited for this night, her father agreed that she will can go outside of Appleloosa to have some fun, he had some business to do. Heart decided to prepare up her costume with friends, it was a skeleton costume. After couple days of work, she finally made it up. It looked like skeleton-pony, her father was very proud of her daughter cause costume looked very good and it fitted her little body.

Finally this night came, Heart left her house with father to some other regions, but it wasn’t what she expected. Her father was busy with his work so he don’t spent time with her, Heart was very sad and disappointed that she don’t have any friends that she could spent time with. She started to move a bit sad across Festival Grounds, it was supposed to be one of her best night in year and it started to be one of the worse ever. Then, everything a b it changed. She saw a red pony Pegasus, who was in wonderbolt costume. He seemed to be alone aswell, but tried to do some stuff with apples. In Heart mind there came idea, she came to this pony when he was busy with apples in water. She finally approached him and jumped on his back with a little scary shout. Tobias jumped a bit up as he don’t expected to be scary by anyone, but then he looked at Heart Shine and smiled to her.

Heart smiled back to him and looked at him.

My name is Heart Shine Mr. Wonderbolt! I’m sorry to scary You off but You seems to be alone like me and I thought scary You will be a good idea. Do You wanna to spent time together? It can be awesome time and maybe somepony will join us too!