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  1. Mmm, interesting character. We've got a slight problem, though! Mane RP is a very strict roleplay that follows the canon of FiM very closely, so this would probably not be an appropriate match for this character you've designed. Fear thee not, however! We have wonderful sections called Crossovers or Free for All where this character would be fine to play in. If that would be suitable for you, please hit the "Edit" button and change the roleplay type to "Crossovers" or "Free for All" in your application. Crossovers is an "application strongly encouraged" area, "Free for All" you can jump right in without one, period.

    Please don't make a new thread and repost this application. If you've decided to change your roleplay type, I'll be happy to stamp this application and you can dive in to play right away.

    If you're still interested in Mane RP, I suggest you look over the RP Rules and Guides area to get a better idea of how to design a character for play there. If you have any questions, feel free to ask right here. Thanks!

    what is wrong with my OC?
  2. Hey there, ShadowKage!

    I noticed you just joined up today. In that regard, welcome!

    As part of your welcome, I feel it's my duty as a Senior RP Helper to assist you in getting this app on the right track and help you get your character out there :)

    For starters, we have a definite template for how character applications should be written out, otherwise I'm afraid the staff will not review it.

    You can find the proper template here: http://www.canterlot...es-and-details/

    I would very strongly recommend you give the RP rules a read, as they'll help you know what's generally acceptable and what's generally a no-no, which will help move your application along much more quickly.

    The rules can be found here: http://www.canterlot...aying-rules-r15

    If you have any other questions, feel free to PM myself or any member of the RP Helpstaff and we'll be more than happy to give you a hand!

    i finally redid my oc the right way!
  3. Roleplay Type: Equestria Crossovers RP

    Name: Shadow Night

    Sex: Male

    Age: Colt age 17

    Species: Unicorn

    Coat colour: Midnight blue with black strikes every here and there

    Mane/Tail/Markings colour: Black and Light blue-purple/Black and light blue-purple/ Black bone shaped birthmark right where mane

    ends

    Mane/Tail Style: Punk spike style moving backwards

    Eye colour/Style: Light blue/Dragon style

    Cutie Mark: A Blue Hylian Shield

    Physique: between average and muscular

    Origin: Ponyville

    Occupation: Shield Maker and Rare Item Finder

    Motivation: To make the perfect shield to protect his friends

    Likes: Daring Doo novels and most animals

    Dislikes: Sharks

    Character Summary: History: Born in Ponyville and spent most of colthood traveling the world.

    Parents: Knight Night and Isis Night is Shadow’s parent and both have passed on.

    Cutie Mark Story: Shadow have been making shields for one week now after his 8th birthday and the Griffons had heard of how good they were so the king called upon him to make a shield for him. It had to have Dragon claws in it. So he sent 2 of his guards along with Shadow to get the claws. During the battle against the Dragon the griffon guards were injured and about to die when Shadow jumped in the way blocking the claw with his personal shield which by sheer luck broke all four claws. When asked by the griffons why he did that he said “because I could not stand to see any other being get killed in front of me.” Then later after then had returned to the king with the Dragons claw shield the guards told their tale to the king. The king was so impressed the he decided to give Shadow the title ‘The Guardian’. Then all of the sudden a blue shield cutie mark appeared on Shadow’s flank meaning that he is a guardian to his friends.

    Flaws: He zones out sometimes while making a shield and can’t hear anything. Does not like the sea very much due to sharks.

    Personality: Shadow is a free-spirited pony with a kind heart. He is funny yet serious when faced with a task. He is also very charming. He is enthusiastic. He talks at a decent pace most of the time and fast when needed to. He is one of the luckiest ponies in history. He is lucky because his parents cast a pure luck spell on him with thier dying breath.

    Extra: Shadow is also very special. Just like The Mane 6 Shadow has an element as well. But his is not of harmony. It is an element of discord. The element of change. It is the only element of discord that can be a good thing to have at times. Always carries a shield made with fire rubies, black steel and diamonds forged from a dragons flame which is unbreakable. His weapon is a Dragon Blade which is stored in a pocket dimension.

    Magic Type: Defensive magic, can use shadow magic to bind his target, and also has healing magic.

  4. About Myself: I like anime, video games, and of coarse MLP FIM. I also like a good naruto fanfiction. I live In wisconson.


    How I found Canterlot.com: Looking for a rp to play


    How I became a fan of MLP:FiM: Naruto crossover fanfiction


    My favourite main cast pony/s: Fluttershy,Twilight Sparkle
    This is the info on my only OC

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    Name/Nickname: Shadow Night/Shadow

    Race: Unicorn

    Gender: Male

    Age: Teenager

    Additional Status: Any extra info you want to add. Like.. any pets, any clothes they wear, if they're famous or not... etc.

    -Physical Stuff-

    Pelt colour: Midnight blue with black stripes

    Mane/Tail colour and Style:

    colour- Black and light blue-purple

    Style- Spike punk style flowing back

    Eye colour: light blue

    Cutie Mark: a blue royal shield

    Other Scars/Markings: a black ring birthmark right below the mane.

    Physique: average-muscular

    -Social Stuff-

    Current Residence: Ponyville

    Job: Shield maker and Rare Item Finder.

    Mother: Isis Night- passed on

    Father: Knight Night- passed on

    Sibling(s): Dark Night

    Other Family: No others

    Closest Friends: TBA

    Courting/Courted By: TBA

    Mate: TBA

    Foal(s): TBA

    -Personality Stuff-

    Likes: Most animals, Daring Doo Books and finding new minerals.

    Dislikes: Sharks.

    Motivation: Making the perfect shield to protect his friends.

    Strengths: Using a Shield to protect.

    Weaknesses/Flaws: can zone out when working on a shield

    Fears: losing friends to the unknown.

    Overall Persona: Hard-working, friendly, a guardian and an adventurer

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