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(it's not my fault people were asking about why they should trust me heck i just wanted to have some a good time while rping with you guys then i was going to get on with it)
Literacy.
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Wrong, don't blame it on other people, it's RP'ing and thus the story can go either way. I don't have a problem with your OC's, it's FFA after all. If I didn't want shadow wielding Gary Sue's and the occasional random wandering around I'd go into Mane RP ((which I do
)) I have a problem with post quality. You write one sentence, that doesn't not make an RP post. That just makes it harder for others to write a decent post after you. When RP'ing we kinda have to play off of each other's post. If one's person post is garbage then most likely the next one won't be so ho either. Ah well, not a sermon, just a thought.)Correct.
(That's what happens when you make a thread in FREE FOR ALL, anything goes, if you want a better constructed rp wait till Cream Feather is accepted into Mane rp, this kinda stuff goes RAMANT in FFA ^^ cause it's where anything goes. )
I know.
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((I believe the word you are looking for is Rampant. And all I did was play off of the dangerous tree thing. I explained why Midnight and Stardust were there, so I hope none of that was directed at me
If so, I apologize deeply Whitefeather, for I did not intend to ruin your RP. If you wish me to leave, I shall do so. Otherwise, I have no idea what's going on here, so I will just rp A reaction from Stardust if that's okay.))Stardust turned around to face Whitefeather. She lowered herself a bit, and whispered [colour=orange]Lovely to meet you too, Whitefeather. I do hope everything is alright. I don't like the look of that shadowmaster bloke.[/colour] Stardust then heard the yells of Harvest Moon, and looked to the origin of the knows.
[colour=orange]Know anyone named Autumn Moon? Sounds like he could use some help.[/colour] she said, determination in her voice. [colour=orange]Come on, we need to get you out of here[/colour] she said, holding a hoof out to Whitefeather.
[colour=blue]Excellent idea, I should go with you two[/colour] Midnight said, trotting towards the two mares.
It's completely fine, this was not directed at you.
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[/colour][colour=#008080] (This is getting very, very frustrating! I don't understand how this RP is going, it's confusing and all of the characters are completely insane. [/colour][colour=#008080]
No bucking Gary Sue's, Mary Sue's, or CelestiaMode Ponies![/colour][colour=#008080]
First of all, Maximilian. You must state why your character has the ability to control shadows. Is he royal? Did someone place a curse on him, or did he find this out on his own?[/colour][colour=#008080]
Beside that, use literate, correct grammar. [/colour][colour=#000000]
U[/colour][colour=#000000]SE . LITERACY [/colour][colour=#008080]
I don't want to have to decode text-talk every time I read a post, that's very annoying for anypony and above all, reading one-lined posts unless it is called for is very unsatisfying. In saying that, don't forget about other characters. AutumnMoon was dying via tree, and Harvest had to come save him while we were all there chatting about trust. To be honest, I have not read through this role-play completely because it's so confusing and frankly I don't know what's going on so please stop posting randomly, if you're going to join the role-play for Luna's sake state how you got into the forest! If you live in the forest, state how and why. Do not forget the whole point of the role-play, and do not come into this role-play if you just don't know how to role-play properly. Have someone teach you, or follow examples from other successful role-plays! It's very much ok I do believe! Now, dear Celestia do not forget about WhiteFeather OR AutumnMoon or ANY OTHER PONY! That is unacceptable and shall you do it I will black-list you from my thread. :l Now... This RP is going to be [/colour][colour=#000000]CLOSED.[/colour][colour=#000000] [/colour][colour=#008080]Goodbye.) [/colour] -
[colour=#008080]//[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]WhiteFeather [/colour][colour=#ffa07a]blinked as she was protected by Stardust, Midnight's girlfriend as she blushed. Then she slowly looked up at the mare, thinking she was quite pretty and didn't look dangerous she decided to trust the mare.[/colour][colour=#008080]~[/colour][colour=#ffa07a] "[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]M-My name is WhiteFeather... N-Nice to meet you, S-Stardust...[/colour][colour=#ffa07a]" [/colour]
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YAY!
I know right. ;U;
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Can the skeleton take out your skeleton?
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Ohai, you'll like it here.
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[colour=#008080]//[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]WhiteFeather[/colour][colour=#ffa07a] was shrunk behind Midnight, blinking at the sudden tension between the two. Squeaking, she just sat in silence awaiting the colts answer.[/colour][colour=#008080]~ [/colour]
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[colour=#008080]//[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]WhiteFeather[/colour][colour=#ffa07a] perked her ears at the nudge she was given, looking back at Tipper she almost had a giggle fit, putting her hooves over her mouth to stop herself from laughing. She was soon crying, her sides hurting as she tried to breath slowly calming down once she saw the strange colt, she blinked up at him being rolled over and looking at his chin she poked him gently.[/colour][colour=#008080]~[/colour][colour=#ffa07a] "[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]U-Um... Who are you...? A-A-Also...Why do you look so evil..?[/colour][colour=#ffa07a]"[/colour][colour=#008080] //[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]WhiteFeather[/colour][colour=#ffa07a] clamped her mouth shut, quickly getting up and saying sorry about a thousand times for her disregard of his feeling shrinking back behind Midnight.[/colour][colour=#008080]~[/colour]
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[colour=#FFA07A]"[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]M-Most certainly! I have no problem with it...[/colour][colour=#FFA07A]"[/colour][colour=#008080] //[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]WhiteFeather [/colour][colour=#FFA07A]got up, beginning to trot back to her and her companions camp, enjoying Midnights company while making a few jokes from time to time.[/colour][colour=#008080]~[/colour]
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[colour=#ffa07a]"[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]M-My plans...? Well, I was exploring the enchanted tree with somepony and then... S-Stuff happened. So... I must apologize for cursing him in my n-native tongue...[/colour][colour=#ffa07a]" [/colour][colour=#008080]//[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]WhiteFeather[/colour][colour=#ffa07a] shly rubbed her hooves together, admitting she was wrong. She despised being wrong sometimes.[/colour][colour=#008080]~[/colour]
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[colour=#008080]//[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]WhiteFeather[/colour][colour=#FFA07A] looked at the colt that had blacked out, now getting up slowly. She trotted over to him, helping him up and sitting down again with no motivation to move whatsoever being very stressed and confused.[/colour][colour=#008080]~[/colour][colour=#FFA07A] "[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]I-I'm so confused, I don't know...[/colour][colour=#FFA07A]"[/colour]
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[colour=#008080]//[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]WhiteFeather[/colour][colour=#FFA07A] immediatly looked behind her, hearing a thump behind her she saw Midnight on the floor, tilting her head she nudged him.[/colour][colour=#008080]~[/colour][colour=#FFA07A] "[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]H-Hey, colt, get up...[/colour][colour=#FFA07A]" [/colour][colour=#008080]//[/colour][colour=#FFA07A]WhiteFeather's mind suddenly traced back to Autumn, wondering what in Equestria he was doing currently. She sighed lightly, plopping onto her flank and taking a moment for her mind to process everything that had happened.[/colour][colour=#008080]~[/colour]
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[colour=#008080]//[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]WhiteFeather [/colour][colour=#FFA07A]slowly agreed as she trotted back to camp, nudging Tipper along and dragging Midnight back to the tent quickly as well. As the sound of hooves got louder she narrowed her eyes continuing with a look of anger twisted upon her face at the sound of those constant, annoying footprints kept piercing her ears.[/colour][colour=#008080]~[/colour]
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[colour=#008080]//[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]WhiteFeather[/colour][colour=#FFA07A], startled by the sudden outburst of the colt, reared back and stomped her hooves upon the ground backing up.[/colour][colour=#008080]~[/colour][colour=#FFA07A] "[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]I-I already know the tree in enchanted... W-We're not close to the tree, are we...?[/colour][colour=#FFA07A]" [/colour][colour=#008080]//[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]WhiteFeather [/colour][colour=#FFA07A]looked around slightly, still perking her ears at the fast-moving hooves of whoever was coming toward them.[/colour][colour=#008080]~[/colour]
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//WhiteFeather was too busy shouting to notice the colt that had popped up, suddenly perking her ears and rearing back at seeing all the madness she'd left in the wake of her raging rampage. She then blinked as she processed all of this in her head. Hearing hooves quickly come her way she frowned wondering who dared to chase after her.
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Hi there! I'm going to take over for Mojo, so I will be working with you on this application. I'm Rose, one of the SRP Staff. My goal is to help you get this character ready for the roleplay you have selected for her. I need some time to look over this application in detail before I can give you some solid feedback. I must warn you that I may ask you to change things about your character you may not like or appreciate, so consider this a chance for you to mentally prepare yourself.
As you may (or may not) be aware, World of Equestria (Mane RP) is a roleplay designed to represent FiM in a canon-strict environment. Because of this, we must review characters for the game as if they would appear in a real episode. I understand an OC can be a deeply personal and emotional investment, and to have someone else tell you that you need to change things about her (to make her work in the game) can be an upsetting experience. If you'd like, I can give you a few more days to review this application yourself, to give you a chance to make any adjustments now that you're armed with this new knowledge of how, exactly, I'll be reviewing your character. I'll be checking back periodically, so feel free to reply to this thread with any questions.
Until then, may the mystical aubergine and sandcats guide you.
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Care about chocolate rain and chaos?
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Another music lover! Brohoof ! /)
Anyways, the name's Midnight, but you may call me Eric. I love music as well. Do you listen to A Day To Remember?
I dooo ~ !
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What is this madness?
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[colour=#FFA07A]Ohai. I loves moosic. [/colour][colour=#008080]SendMeSumOfTehStuffYouLiek[/colour][colour=#FFA07A]. By the way, just wanted to add that the [/colour][colour=#008080]OC[/colour][colour=#FFA07A] applications are only pretty much for [/colour][colour=#008080]Equestria RP[/colour][colour=#FFA07A] which has the Mane 6 in it but there is a [/colour][colour=#008080]free-for-all [/colour][colour=#FFA07A]where you can [/colour][colour=#008080]just role-play[/colour][colour=#FFA07A]. You can put an [/colour][colour=#008080]application[/colour][colour=#FFA07A] up there to[/colour][colour=#d3d3d3] let other ponies know about your[/colour][colour=#FFA07A] [/colour][colour=#008080]OC[/colour][colour=#FFA07A], though. They have a code for the format of a good application [/colour]
[colour=#008080]here[/colour][colour=#FFA07A]. It's at the bottom, but I recommend you read through all of the information needed on each section of the application. [/colour][colour=#FFA07A]Don't post in roleplays that have [/colour][colour=#008080][private] [/colour][colour=#FFA07A]though! Those are for the [/colour][colour=#008080]group of ponies [/colour][colour=#FFA07A]or [/colour][colour=#008080]ponies chosen for the RP only[/colour][colour=#FFA07A]! Have [/colour][colour=#008080]fun[/colour][colour=#FFA07A], too. c:[/colour]
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[colour=#FFA07A] [/colour][colour=#ffa07a]Oh, hellos! I love [/colour][colour=#d3d3d3]Fluttershy[/colour][colour=#ffa07a] too!
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)) I have a problem with post quality. You write one sentence, that doesn't not make an RP post. That just makes it harder for others to write a decent post after you. When RP'ing we kinda have to play off of each other's post. If one's person post is garbage then most likely the next one won't be so ho either. Ah well, not a sermon, just a thought.)
If so, I apologize deeply Whitefeather, for I did not intend to ruin your RP. If you wish me to leave, I shall do so. Otherwise, I have no idea what's going on here, so I will just rp A reaction from Stardust if that's okay.))
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Okie. Thanks.
WhiteSakura [FINAL]
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[colour=#008080]Danke. ^ - ^ This has been updated on 12.4.12